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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged

Hey guyz i am Tanya you all might know me becuz of my ff which i write with manish YRMD

And even i have sahas with me{virtually} even u all know her as she too write wonderful stories on yuvreen

So we thought why not write an os 2gethr

The 1st part is written by her the 2nd part by me

Plz do read and let us know hw our joint effort was

So tighten up your seat belt cuz we r going on a ride to the yuvreen land

 

PAKKA WALLA PYAAR


It was a beautiful morning wid lots of natural beauty of nature.The birds sung,the trees danced in the air.It was a beautiful day for mannu n naro.

(dont confuse guys dey r married).They had been married n it was their first baby girl's name giving ceremony day.The guests were present n da lovely frends of 

mannu-naro who have now becum couples came too...rathie-annie n da most loved-yuvraj-suvreen.It was a day of happiness for everyone n specially for naro n mannu.

The panditji came n den the ceremony started.Naro sat wid the baby on her lap n mannu sat next to her.The other two couples n the guests sat all around dem.Atlast the ceremony 

ended n da name ROMA was given to da cute baby.

annie-wow naro...very nyc name...RO for naro n MA for mannu...so cute

den mannu n naro smiled

After da ceremony da guests left n only da old frnds stayed.

suvreen ,yuvraj,annie n rathie-congratulations mannu aur naro

n in return th couple replied a sweet"thank u"

den time passed by chit chatting about their colg life.Suddenly annie realised dat her ear ring has fallen off somewhere in the hall.

annie-oh god guys meri ear ring missing hai...shayad hall main kahin hogi"

suvreen-dont worry annie...main jaake dhundti hun

den after a few mins suvreen came rushing-arre yaar annie...sorry mujhe nahi mila

yuvraj-tujhe kabhi kuch theek se dikhayi deti hai...

suvi-yuvraj tum jyada bol rahe ho...jaise khud dhund loge

yuvi-haan dhund lunga...

suvi-toh dhundo...dekhte hain cheetah ko kaise milta hai

n mannu-naro n annie-rathie were watching dem in shock

 

annie-arre suv...(suvreen cuts her)

suvi-bas kar yaar...ye insaan mujhe pagal kardega

yuvi-pagal toh tu mujhe kar rahi hai...jabse tumhare sath hun tabse lagta hai ki mujhe kissi na kissi din world's biggest mental treatment ke liye jaana padega

at dis everyone except yuvreen cudn't control a laugh

rathie-arre pagal toh tum ek dusre ke liye ho ye hum jaante hain lekin pyaar ke liye

den both were silent for sum seconds but dey r da chetah family...lol so dey cud not stop

suvi-achha toh ye sab pyaar ke liye hota hai...I am fed up...challo isse hi khatm kardete hain

yuvi-haan toh theek hi hai...bubye

everyone else laughed

mannu-kitne baar breakup patch up karaoge yaar...koi phaida nahi phir do min mein theek ho jayegi tum dono ka pyaar combo

suvi rushed downstairs to go

den yuvraj said from up-arre samhal ke jaana aur aapna brain use karna nahi toh aur panch logo ko pagal kardogi

suvi said nothing just ave an angry face n went off

den till two days dey dint talk wid each other nor met each other

their frnds became worried

naro-arre iss bar toh inka fight kuch top level par pahunch gaya

annie-haan yaar naro dey r not talking to each other

mannu-naroji

naro-ji mannuji...lol ji ji only

mannu-hame lagta ab hum sab ko hi inke case ko solve karna hoga

rathie-haan yaar mannu-ye aise hamesha ladhte rahenge toh ye kabhi khush nahi reh sakte...inka break-up patch up aur hazaar baar ho ga

naro-haan...iss bar maamle ko pura close karna padega

den dey sat in a group for planning wat to do...

 

"shaadiii"shouted annie

"kya" evry1 shouted back??

"shaadi kara dethe hein inki tab tohh dekhu ki yeh kaise brekup karthe hein" said annie

"abbhi toh they r not even ready too see each other shaadi kya karenge???

Asked rathi

"yeh kab kam ayegi"asked annie pointing to roma

"aayi yu aaa" shouted roma as she understud tht they wer discussing about her

"naahi shouted naro tugging her baby away from them mere baby ke upar math karo tum apne experiments aur sherni and cheetah ke beech mein meri pyaari nanhi si doll ko mein no way"said naro sternly

 

"arey unke beech mein dalne kisne bola, hide her from them"said annie

"u r not making sense anu"said rathi

"wait nw"said annie and picked up her mobile

Dialled suvis and yuvis numbr made it as a conference call and said"yaar roma yaar guys shez missing"and annie cuts the call

"wat was this annie"asked mannu

"u just wait and watch aage aage kya hota hein"

As soon as annie said the door bell rang naro ran inside with the baby and rathi in panick sprinkled peper on mannus eyes so he can act as crying

Annie open the door and yuvreen entered there

Suvi "yaar nahi naro kaha hein aise kaise ho gaya yaar??"

While naro cums fron the room

Seeing evryones sad face suvreen cud take it more she turns and run toward yuvi and hugged him

His arms wer the only way she feel consoled with him she can go through any situation

Yuvi too hugged her back

He cupped her face and said"tension na le topper mein hun na"

Said yuvi and patted her head to comfort her suvi just kept crying

"kash roma plz kash tum aajo kash tum kuch bol paavo...i don't even mind hearing u cry"said yuvi cause he never understood y small babies cry endlessly and overall choti choti baathon mein

"uaaawww waa waaa aaahhh"the cry of a baby sarted echoing all over the room

Naro quickly tuk the babies bag and ran towards their room

Suvi lifted her head and looked at yuvi and said "arrey wah bhagvan ne itni jaldi sun li tumhari"

Yuvi was also confused wen he saw naro bringing romma in her arms and pacing aeound the room

"sorry guys tum dono ka milane ka yehi rastha tha"said annie looking down at the ground

"kyaaa?tujhein patha hein merit oh jaan nikal gayi thi?"said suvi luking angrily at annie

"annie yeh tune bohut galath kiya par ha ...par tera irada acha than a"said yuvi placing his shoulder on sivi and holding her by waist

"ha chal maaf kar diya"said suvi patting annies hand and she turned and tip toe and placed a small peck on yuvi's cheek

"how i missed this said yuvi

"phir tum suvi sein jhagda hi q karthe ho?"asked naro

"yes guys it is high time yaar u ppl shud get married hum hi thak gaye hein tumhare yeh brek up patch up ki chakkar mein"said manu

"infact naro tere pas spare mangalsutr hein kya asked rathi

"q " asked naro

"mein both bol raha hun aaj hi shaadi kara lethe hein...ek nyt q waste karni"he said giving rathi a hi5 and all broke out laughing

"really ppl aur kya patha varna kal inka vapas jhgada ho gaya tho"added annie

"nahi annie hum abh jhagda nahi karenge...hein na topper "asked yuvi

"haa yuvi...hum shaadi ke bare mein apne parents sein baath karenge...hmm mera sapna mera church wedding...u kno but yuvi did not let suvi complete her sentence

"kya church wedding pagal hein tu hum hindu shaadi karnge humara 7 phere sindoor pandit lehenga vagare vagere..."said yuvi

"nahi mujhein church wedding karni hein"said a stubborn suvi

"nahi hum hindu marriage kar rahe hein "said yuvi

"toh tum na lehenge se shaadi kar lena mein nahi aavungi"said suvi

"mujhein apne dulhan ko uthake leke anna atha hein"said yuvi

"tum sein baath karna hi beekar hein " said suvi and marched towards the balcony followed by an angry yuvi

"oh no not again"said annie collapsing into the sofa

"inka kuch naahi ho saktha" said the whole gang

 

...

 

Thoda pyaar

Thodi shararath

Thodi masti

Thoda jhagda

In sabgo milake we get our YUVREEN

They are the blend of many emotions

Not so perfect but the best

 

Maybe thats why YUVREEN is soo magical

 

  



Edited by chaichil - 28 December 2012 at 6:51am

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged

BEHIND DA SCENESWink

HOW DIS OS WAS MADE

Sahas- u sure naro and mannu ka bacha??

Tanya- pakka walla

Sahas-u sure yuvreen live in

Tanya- pakka walla

Sahas- u sure na about tht scenes

Tanya- pakka walla

Saha- pakka walla ke alva kuch bologe bhi kya...

Tanya- pakka wal...oh sry y dnt we keep the os ka name only pakka walla

Sahs- pakka walla kya???

Tanya-pakka walla ...pyaar

Sahas- ha yaar pakka walla pyaar

Tanya-naro mannu ka bache ka kya naam rakhe ...mannu naro MARO

Sahas- kisko maro???

Tanya-areey bache ka naam

Sahas- voh ap apke bache ka nam rakhna theeke

Tanya- nahi apne nephew/niece kirakhungi

Sahas- kiska hein utna unfortunate bacha

Tanya-tumhara

Sahas-do i kno u...??

Tanya- heheheh jokes beside

LOL

 

 

This was just small dosage of over cute fight

Over this os pura sunoge na toh behosh ho javoge toh we stop

Hope u liked our os

Pls let us kno thru your cumnt ki agar our joint work was good??

And doo encourage us with ur likes if u think the os was worth it!Big smile 



Edited by sahashrabdidash - 28 December 2012 at 6:55am

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
awesome...awesome...both wonderful writers got to together to give this treat of an OS...thanx a lot..!! you both are simply fab..!! 

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Aww...this was sooo cute and nice
But were yuvreen a couple from the beginning or??
Sorry my Hindi Is really bad

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
thum log bhi na...I mean ithne argument ke baad...trust me ur argument was similar to Yuvreen fight..!! LOL

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria_rox14

Aww...this was sooo cute and nice
But were yuvreen a couple from the beginning or??
Sorry my Hindi Is really bad


yup maria they wer in a livein relationship..well tht was the ideaBig smile
well thnx m glad tht u liked our os
i am sure sahas is also damn happy...hein naa??????

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Hahahhaha
Urs and sahas fight was cute!!!

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chaichil

Originally posted by maria_rox14

Aww...this was sooo cute and nice
But were yuvreen a couple from the beginning or??
Sorry my Hindi Is really bad


yup maria they wer in a livein relationship..well tht was the ideaBig smile
well thnx m glad tht u liked our os
i am sure sahas is also damn happy...hein naa??????
ab ye bhi koi puchne waali baat huiBig smile

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