OS KD back to royal ...updated on pg. 2 (Page 2)

Very interesting OS
Nicely written
Loved it to d core
D 2nd para is confusing
Y his frnds vl tell him to fight?
Waiting for d next part
Update n pm me





Edited by angel_juhi04 - 28 December 2012 at 12:51pm

Angel juhi: ab sab kd jaise seedhe sadhe nahi auske frnds galat kam mein involved hein toh mein kya karoon aur vaise bhi precap mein auske freinds hi baata rahe the fight ke liye

Wrong post guyz

Edited by shubhraupadhyay - 29 December 2012 at 4:07am

Awesome start.

Very nice start

guyz thanks for the awesome comments once again thanks and sorry aapse kaha tha ki kal update kardoogi par late hogaya soory again and heres the part 2

PART : 2

KD was ready for the fight when his freinds come to him and says that kd tu fight ke liye tayar toh ho gaya par tujhe harna hai iska matlab ye hai ki tujhe bohot chot lag sakti ek baar phir soch le
Kd thinks for a little and says mein in paiso ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon
Kd then goes to the ring and closed his and recall all the moments with kiya
Then his opponent comes in the ring and the fight starts d knew that he has not to attack at him the fight starts and kds   opponent start trying to hit kd but savd him manytimes but lastly he gave a tight punch on kds face kds mouth started bleeding and was trying to come out of that punchs pain as soon as he gve him a hard punch which kd cant resists aand blood came out from his mouth and he fell down
When the refre came near him and start counting but he doestnt gain consiousness and at last his opponent wins

Kds freinds bring him into therest room when one of his freind sprikled water on his face and then he gains
consiousness then his bandaged his wounds and asks that is he all right he says yes he is alright but thats not true the is still paining him very much
Kds goes to the royal fees deposit and deposits his fees their he was lucky that his admission form has not cancelled still
He than goes to his home and starts ironing his uniform his father comes in and asks why he his ironing royals uniform
KD : says to the camera agar dad ko ye pata chal gaya ki maine paiso ke liye fight ki thi aur vo bhi royal mein padhhne ke liye toh pata nahi mera kya hoga
Kd : actually papa vo mein tc lene gaya toh meine banga sir se maafi magi aur vo itne nek dil ki auhn ho ne mujhe maaf kardiya aur scholarship bhi vapis kardi
Kds dad : kya zaroorat thi mafi mangane ki itni muskil se aus bade school se peecha chuta tha
Kds : mein is baat par bhahas nahi karna chahta please mein royal vapas jaaoga toh jaaogha
Kds dad : jo karna hein kar par ye chote kaise lagi tujhe
Kd : he lies that his bike was slip on the road when he got onjured

Note : her banga has not stopped anyone to talk with eachotjer
KD BACK TO ROYAL...

Everyone was entering in the class when piddi entered with samar he said nawab sahab kal aap mujhe akela chodh kar chalegaye the kd bhai se mile bhina haan janab bura toh hame bhi laga par apne toh baat kar li kaha yaar nawab mein bhi kaha baat kar paya meri mammy bhi mujhe lene aagayi
Kiya was listening to their conversations silently she was showing that she wad irritated with their talls but actually she want to know about kd
When she was thinkimg about that suddennly kd enters to the classroom everyone is shocked but happy to see kd
Kd bhai aap yaha piddi says hugging kd
Kd says surprise everyone meets with kd except kiya
Ranveer says to hum in a enemy version look so dude jaitley sir ne teri help kar di haan
Kd says nobody helped me myself
Kiya was looking to anything else and wondering now kd will again try to say sorry to het and her mood will be spoilt again
But kd was going to sit on her place
When ranveer says that aaj lagta kisi koh apni sorry puran nahi sunnani hai doing his face towards samar
Kd says aloud sorry my foot
kiya : says mind it you keshav desai
Kd : arey tujhe aisa kyu lagta hai kiya gujral ki sari baatein tujhse suru hoti hai aur tujhpar khatam
Ranveer : take it easy dude
Kd : tu kon hota hai mere aur kiya ke beech mein aane wala chicklet ka chicken ya phir lipstick ka lipgloss
They were goingto fight when tje teacher comes and they all sit on their respactive places

                                  Bad kd is back to bring his cute kiya back chicklet
                                    And once kiya will be back then loveely kd will aso come back...
                         
                     The end~~~~[B I thnk end is not good well hpe you guyz like it
rBR]

Edited by shubhraupadhyay - 29 December 2012 at 12:30pm

hey... this is great... :)

That was nice..