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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
Earlier i had made a post on how Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai bring out the different colours of life and how each emotion is well potrayed, how each relationship has its own flavour.
I thought of posting various OS on it. I'll begin with Jeevika-Maanvi...
i hope you guys will like this one too
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
''''''''''''JEEMAN'''''''''''

Manvi has recovered from cancer. Jeevika and Maanvi are supposed to get married to the Vadhera brothers. It is their engagement tomorrow.
Jeevika:chal Mannu aaj tujhe ghat nahi jaana kya...jaldi kar...
Maanvi:bas di 2 minute...main taiyyar ho rahi hoon...Dabbu maine kaha tha na mere liye gulab jamun laane ko aur tu yeh kya laya...???dabbe ke dabba hi rahega tu..bhag yaha se...chalo di...
Jeevika:beeji hum ganga ghat ja rahe hai...aadhe ghante mein wapas aa jayenge...
Beeji(replies fromthe kitchen):beta jab bahar jaate hai toh kehte hai ki hum ja kar aate hai...aur jaldi wapas aa jana...humein Chandigarh ke liye nikalna hai...
Maanvi:ha beeji ...bye...
Jeevika and Maanvi go to the ghat...
Jeevika:Mumma, Papa...kal humari sagai hai aur hum dono ek hi ghar mein ja rahe hai...
Maanvi:Mumma. Papa...ab main aur di humessha saath rahenge...koi humein alag nahi kar payega...cancer toh pehle hi dar ke bhag gaya...aur ab toh hum humesha saath rahenge
Jeevika:tu phir se...
Maanvi:sorry Di...main kabhi uss bare mein baat nahi karungi...
Jeevika (takes gangajal in her hand): mumma...aap bilkul tension mat lena...Mannu aur main saath rahegi toh main usski khayal rakhungi...
Maanvi(continues):...humesha ki tarah...
Saying this, they bid farewell...They are crossing the bridge...
Jeevika:jaldi chal mannu...bahut der ho gayi...agra tujhe un punters se milna nahi hota...toh der nahi hoti...Beeji toh gussa karegi...
maanvi:iss mein nayi baat kya hai...woh toh humesha hi gussa kar ti hai...arre arre Doi ruko aap kuch bhool rahi hai...
Jeevika:kya...?
Maanvi(takes out a coin): Di...
Jeevika:ab toh hum humesha saath rahenge...toh...isski kya zaroorat hai...
Maanvi:di...please...
Jeevika and Manvi together:  hey ganga maiyya...humein kabhi ek doosre se alag mat karna...humesha saath rakhna...
As they fip the coin and open their eyes...they see all the people running...
Passerbye:hey bhagawan..hrishikesh mein curfew lag gaya...bhago jaldi..
Maanvi:chacha..!11chacha(to another passerbye)...kya hua...
Passerby:beta jaldi apne ghar jao...curfew lag gaya hai...jaldi se ghar jao...
Amidst all this they did not notice that the coin they flipped did not fall in the river... It fell on the edge of the bridge...a small push and it will fall into the river...Suddenly they hear bullet shots...
Maanvi:Di aap yahi ruko...main jaa kar...dekhti hoon...
Jeevika:pagal hai tu,..?yaha koi circus nahi chal raha hai...ki tu jaa kar dekhegi...ghar chal jaldi...
Maanvi and Jeevika begin to run. Jeevika gets hit by a gun shot.
Maanvi:DI!!!!!
Jeevika:MANNU...!!!
Jeevika falls down...Maanvi sits down with her.Both of them understand that Jeevika is breathing her last...
Jeevika:Mannu tu ghar ja...
Maanvi:di chup raho...aap aise...utho na di...di...(she callsfor help)...please koi toh madad karo..please...koi toh uthao...
Everybody is running for their lives...nobody can hear Maanvi's cries...Jeevika gives up. She is dead in Maanvi's arms...
Maanvi:Di...!!!! Di...
There is bullet firing everywhere...another gun shot.
Maanvi:aah...!!
Maanvi is hit...
She lies down...holding Jeevika's hand...
Manvi gives up fighting with life. She has her hand on atop he Di's
The coin which fell down on the edge of the bridge now falls into the river.



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