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Okay guys this is a 2 shot. To members who dunno me, I'm priya.. I luv writing stories, watching tv shows..LOL so on wid da story. Its more descriptive.. so plz comment n lemme know if u liked itEmbarrassed

::Mission Rescue Jeannie ::


Part 1:


wednesday, twenty six december~~

Vicky was restless. He needed to rescue her. Jeannie..just the way Vela was treating her gave him jitters.

"Jeannie kithni sweet hai... stupid vela! how dare he treat her this way!"

It was half past 10 in the morning, he did not go office. He just couldn't do anything till he gets back jeannie.

Door bell rang. Vicky ran to open the door, assuming it to be vela. It was a kid. What was his name? Sumith, yes.

"Sumit.. tum? You stay with the Gangulys right?"

"Right uncle.. " the boy rushed in searching every corner of the house.

"Sumit stop! what r u looking for?" Vicky asked.

"Nothing.."

"Dont lie to me.. "

"I said nothing uncle.. "

"Tell me, I'll help u!"

"But I cant. i promised her, i wont tell anyone about her... "

"You promised whom? Jeannie?"

"Aap jeannie di ko jaante hai?"

"hmm...  tumhari Jeannie Di meri best mitram hai.. best friend.. "

"bulaayiye na use.. "

Vicky was almost teary eyed. How could he call her?

"Woh nahi aayegi. Ek villain ne humari heroin ko kidnap karliya.. "

"Ab hum kya karien?" Sumith asked him.

"Kuch toh karna hoga.. I wont let u go Jeannie!"

And an idea struck him. He explained sumith everything and he agreed to do it. Vicky then talked to Mrs. Durga Ganguly that he'd like to take Sumith around for a while. She agreed and the deadline was set.

Rescue Jeannie by thursday midnight.

~~~~

Next day, Vicky dropped off Sumith at Vela's home.

"Daddy!"

Vela choked as sumith addressed him. Sumith narrated his story of how his mom died and how she wanted him to become a pilot like his dad. He said he'd live with Vela hence forth.

Vela shrugged him off and left for office. Vicky who was hiding behind a bush was pleased and decided to take sumith to his office.

~ at the office

Sumith once again held on to Vela's hand calling him dad. Priya's dad, the head of PA decided to look into the matter.
Everyone was forced to believe sumith's false story that Vela ditched his mother. Vela was shocked to see a photograph of himself wid a woman who sumith claimed his mother.

"This is ridiculous! I dont know this woman.. I'm innocent! Plzz.. sir believe me! I dint cheat any woman!"

Vicky almost laughed but stayed calm.

Priya was disgusted by vela and was touched by sumith's story.  She urged her dad to do something.

Priya's dad, " Vela.. jab tak yeh maamla khatm nahi hota.. take care of the boy.."

Vela was helpless, "why would I? yeh mera beta nahi hai!"

"Then prove karo yeh kisi aur ka beta hai.. Vela.. take care of this boy. I dint know mera friend ek cheater hai!"

"Priya I'm not a cheater! I'll prove my innocence... and ok this boy will stay wid me.. "


~Fin~

So do u guys want me to continue? Lemme know... sorry if this is a crap. I seriously want J & J together.. but abhi that's a long way, so i decided to write this :)

thanks for reading<3



Edited by Priyamvada - 30 December 2012 at 5:55am

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awesome. Keep writing

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Supeeer Priya Loveeed it :) 

Pleas continueee 

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fantastic priya. keep writingThumbs Up

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Originally posted by dharamluvgiaa

awesome. Keep writing


aww thank u!Embarrassed

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Originally posted by X.Sisi94

Supeeer Priya Loveeed it :) 

Pleas continueee 


thank u... tschh... mujhe sharam aari hai *jeannie style*

thanks dear

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very nice story Smile

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Originally posted by ramasuresh78

fantastic priya. keep writingThumbs Up


thanks so much dear <3 should I call u rama?

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