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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Nice update
Contine soon xx

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js1234 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
superb! this is really very good.  Love all the dialouges and thier slow realisation!
 
BTW - are you updating the other one??
 
Thks

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
M loving dis SS alot... Both are in a fix... dey dnt knw what dey really want... Awesome update... Thumbs Up
Dis was hilarious.. typical Virman lol... " kuch acha karne jao toh sunathi hai, kuch na karu toh bajathi hai. Kya musibat hai." Tongue

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 3:46am | IP Logged
i am really loving the way the story is progressing...
virat wanted manvi to join college... manvi's remark on virat "kitna padhta hai.. " was so damn funny... he stands for manvi against swamini... virat calls himself the husband and also that he will decision for his wife n no one else... then virat n mavi talking.. manvi hurt on the fact that virat isnt serious abt their marriage n is calling it an arrangement... scene at the college were cute, romantic n hilarious... manvi was blushing... wowww... virat being with maya but feeling out of place... came home just to be with mannu... manvi getting jealous...
favourite dialogues...

Virat: "Kya kaam? We have our very own cricket team of helpers and servants at home. Why does Manvi have to do anything?"

"haan, technical problems. Rukawath ke liye kedh hai. Thanks and bye."

M: "kyu ki mera boy friend aane wala hai mujh se milne"

V:  "Kaun? That guy who wanted to elope with you to timbaktu." he laughed.

"Namaste jijaji" they said together joining their hands.

Virat gave them a very naughty smile "oh-ho-ho..mere pyaree saliyah..ithe sare? Vaah!..abhi toh vapas college join karne padega..kyu manvi ji?? "

M: "Virat, aren't you getting late???" Manvi signaled him to leave.

V: "Accha baba. Chaltha hu. Bye."

V: "Take care girls" he winked at them as Manvi rolled her eyes.

 " kuch acha karne jao toh sunathi hai, kuch na karu toh bajathi hai. Kya musibat hai."
 
 
thank u soo much dear for the bful update...
update soon...

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ash97 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 3:55am | IP Logged
The more u r writing the more it is becoming interesting.
Want to know how virat realise his love for Maanvi and Maanvi already falling for himDay Dreaming.Gr8 update and dialog keep it comingThumbs Up

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
fabulous..plzzz continue soon

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shonaten Senior Member
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Sooo nice

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saathana Groupbie
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE.CONTINUE SOON.

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