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ash97 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 3:55am | IP Logged
The more u r writing the more it is becoming interesting.
Want to know how virat realise his love for Maanvi and Maanvi already falling for himDay Dreaming.Gr8 update and dialog keep it comingThumbs Up

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
fabulous..plzzz continue soon

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE.CONTINUE SOON.

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged

Another update!!! I love quick updates!! Big smile

Awesome update.. Its getting more and more interesting with every update.. Loads of confusion... Both Virat and Manvi are confused about their feelings towards each other.. It is difficult for both of them to accept the change in their relationship.. Manvi is little jealous and totally disappointed to know that Virat is still seeing Maya.. she is trying to convince herself that it does not matter to her but only her heart knows that it does.. and Virat is feeling restless without her.. Everything is beautifully portrayed..Clap I loved Virat's protective attitude towards Manvi.. I really liked the way he defended her in front of the whole family Day Dreaming.. and loved his answer to SB.. I also liked the part where he was flirting with Manvi's friends and they were teasing Manvi.. It was very cuteBig smile .. Please continue soon.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Wow!! Superb update!!
Love how you described virat & manvi's confusing feelings toward each other!!
The whole update was awesome!! Loved it!!
Plz continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Aww...this is such a sweet story! I read all the parts in one go, and I loved it! It has got a tint of sarcasm, romance, friendship..everything!
Would you mind sending me a PM when you update next?

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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Wow...such a great update...the bond between with virat and manvi is too cute...the caring virat was awesome...the way he take care of manvi ...and take her side was so wonderful...n virman developing feelings for each other ..the update was so good..continue soon...hope virman realized their feelings soon...thank u so much for the pm... Smile

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mits40 Newbie
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Posted: 27 December 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
superb update...jst luvd this dialogue''Virat ignored her,
attributing it to her random tantrums. "
kuch acha karne jao toh sunathi hai, kuch
na karu toh bajathi hai. Kya musibat hai."...m rofl while seeing dis...cntn soon n do pm me nxt tym...:)

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