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Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii (Page 10)

-LumosMaxima- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 14 October 2012
Posts: 12273

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged

Another update!!! I love quick updates!! Big smile

Awesome update.. Its getting more and more interesting with every update.. Loads of confusion... Both Virat and Manvi are confused about their feelings towards each other.. It is difficult for both of them to accept the change in their relationship.. Manvi is little jealous and totally disappointed to know that Virat is still seeing Maya.. she is trying to convince herself that it does not matter to her but only her heart knows that it does.. and Virat is feeling restless without her.. Everything is beautifully portrayed..Clap I loved Virat's protective attitude towards Manvi.. I really liked the way he defended her in front of the whole family Day Dreaming.. and loved his answer to SB.. I also liked the part where he was flirting with Manvi's friends and they were teasing Manvi.. It was very cuteBig smile .. Please continue soon.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Smile

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Krazzy4u786 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 December 2011
Posts: 2570

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Wow!! Superb update!!
Love how you described virat & manvi's confusing feelings toward each other!!
The whole update was awesome!! Loved it!!
Plz continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!

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Zairean IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 June 2012
Posts: 3687

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Aww...this is such a sweet story! I read all the parts in one go, and I loved it! It has got a tint of sarcasm, romance, friendship..everything!
Would you mind sending me a PM when you update next?

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.Yamin. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 May 2010
Posts: 5851

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Wow...such a great update...the bond between with virat and manvi is too cute...the caring virat was awesome...the way he take care of manvi ...and take her side was so wonderful...n virman developing feelings for each other ..the update was so good..continue soon...hope virman realized their feelings soon...thank u so much for the pm... Smile

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mits40 Newbie

Joined: 22 September 2012
Posts: 49

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
superb update...jst luvd this dialogue''Virat ignored her,
attributing it to her random tantrums. "
kuch acha karne jao toh sunathi hai, kuch
na karu toh bajathi hai. Kya musibat hai."...m rofl while seeing dis...cntn soon n do pm me nxt tym...:)

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SweetAngels96 Goldie

Joined: 24 February 2012
Posts: 1593

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Ur story is getting more n more interesting!! Do continue soon n thnxx 4 the pm

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Kanwal_chohan IF-Rockerz

Joined: 17 March 2012
Posts: 6118

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Damn its awesome loved it partners in crime
Then enemies then best friends again wad brilliant
Loved how they had to get married cause of manvis
Dadis death wish loved how when they got married virat
cared for loved the college scene hope they realise their
Love soon continue soon and do pm me sorry for the late
Comment have been extremely busy

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Kiekeboe Coolbie

Joined: 23 March 2012
Posts: 10030

Posted: 27 December 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged


It was really nice to see that Virat cares for Maanvi, ...
I am as surprised as Maanvi as her tears came.

thx for the pm and it was really a lovely update

Edited by Kiekeboe - 27 December 2012 at 9:32am

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