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My first try Continued Pg 23 (11-09) KYPH (Page 5)

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jus read ure fanfic!! ure AWESOME!!

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Ok so Mr. Mittal and his family went back to the US..And angad felt some strange kind of relief..



A couple of days later...


Angad is standing in his room looking out of the window.. Although Kripa forgave him.. Angad still isn't happy.. He still misses Kripa's little crazy acts.. Kripa never  comes to annoy angad anymore and has become a lot more serious.. Angad realises he misses all her innocence, her kiddish character and the warmth she gives everyone around her..

Angad get's an idea and runs off to his mom who is talking to Kripa's mom on the telephone..

Naina: Yes don't worry neelam.. Main hoo na.. I'll come over in a couple of mins.. Ok.. Bye
Are angad Kya hua?

Angad: Uh mom....Mein woh.. You know I wanted to buy a little gift....For...uhm..Priya...But I really don't know what I should buy her... I need someone to go with me who has taste and can give me some advice..

Naina: I'll Go with you

Angad: But mom.. You are going over to KRIPA's (emphasises on kripa to give his mother a hint.. but the poor woman doesn't get it)..

Naina: Oh yes.. Than wait till sur comes back from school..

Angad: No mom that will be to late.. Or waise bhi sur hasn't got any taste

The telephone rings and Naina picks it up

Naina: Han han Neelam I told you na Main aa rahi hoo...OHh neelam wait a sec.. Kripa ghar pe hai..

Angad's face lights up coz he knows where this conversation is going....His mom asks if kripa can go with angad and kripa mom says OK right away...Angad gets all excited while on the other hand kripa isn't excited at all.. Although she said she forgave angad.. Things have changed... She doesn't want to spend time with him coz it hurts...But her mother insists she goes.. and kripa has no other way...

Angad is sitting in his car waiting for kripa... Kripa comes and sits in the car... Angad waits with full patience..

Angad: Are you sitting ok?... seatbelt baand lo ok...

Kripa is astonished to hear those kind words from angads mouth.. Is he being nice to her... Now this is getting weird..

Angad is driving his car but looks at kripa sidedly..Kripa doesn't notice anything..Angad still has a cheerfull smile on his face..Suddenly he stops his car and tells kripa to come.... He stops at the same Icecream van and asks kripa if she wants some...

Kripa: no angad.. woh mera galla kharaab hai...

Angad: Ooh..Ok.. Mera bhi.. and doesn't take any ice...

Theres another couple standing next to them and they notice this and the guy says: wow yaar you are amazing.. Great couple....

Kripa is about to say something but angad interrupts: yeaah I know THanks hay..

Kripa can't believe what she just heared and keeps staring at angad... How did he change this much.. Angad doesn't even understand himself why he said that so eeasily...they both keep quit and start walking.. They end up at a beach.. and angad throws water on kripa to wipe the serious look off her face... Kripa looks bothered at first and angad gets scared... But as soon as he tries to walk further she splashes water on him from behind...Angad looks at her and she laughs at him.... Angad keeps on looking at her while she keeps on laughing... Angad has never felt such great happiness seeing somebody laugh... Angad starts smiling and kripa runs away..

Angad starts running after her and as soon as he reaches her he picks her up...and throws her into the water....Kripa then pulls him down and he falls too.. Right on top of her... In the water... They sit in the water.. and keep looking at each other... All wet... they are in a very awkward position....having their are arms around each other... They come out of their dream and realise what they are doing.. Stand up and starts smiling at each other.. still wet..

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Kripa: Angad mujhe lagta hai ab hamein chalna chahiye hai..

They both go home and none of them talks during the ride...Kripa runs to her room so her mom won't see shes wet.. She jump on her bed and starts to smile...Thinking of angad...can't getting him out of her mind.. Meanwhile angad is in his room thinking of kripa and what just happend.. He cant get rid of the smile kripa brought on his face...Angad has started to enjoy his life...


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To be continued soon...

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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
FAB part!!!

omg!!! LOVED IT!!!

seriously!!! ure AWESOME!!!!! Clap
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Clap Clap keep it up aishu jaan Tongue
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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Nice fanfic Aisha!!!
Plz cont soon
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awesome jobb.. continue soooonnn.. i love this fan fic soo muchh

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