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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhaakshu

hey tanya,
wo actually maine pada tha, but power cut
uske baad comment karna bhul gayiOuch

this chapter by far the best
coz, ofcourse all of them were there 
the pics u upload increase the curiosity
sanju in the sand coloured dress superb!Star
ur expresssive skils r very nice
i ws very happy with this updateClap

BTW wantd to ask u
main koi forum par jau toh waha tumhari stories hoti haiShocked
itna likne k liye kaise time lati ho?
aur itni creativity kaha se aati hai?LOL


hey...nt many forums but its just D3 and SG
but D3 ka my SS ended...'
and SG ka ff m writing it with manish...

so utni bhi creative nahi hunWink

but a very big thanku dear ...for such a pyaara cumnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!Big smile

but tumhara cumnt likne ka style is way betr thn my ff ka updates...i mean mein bohut happy happy typs feel kar rahi thi after ur cumnt LOL

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its awesum tanya di

I'm loving this ff n da way u r writing it...

n ya loved saavi scene...
do continue n pm me

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

its awesum tanya di

I'm loving this ff n da way u r writing it...

n ya loved saavi scene...
do continue n pm me


thnku sahas
mmm pakka walla cumnt tha...yaar luv u LOL

sure will pm u frm d nxt update...i thhot tu bff's nahi dekhti!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Tanya dear...next part kab read karne ko milegaHug

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
ajj update kar rahi hun...i m wrting it abhi abhi dost...

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 9:50am | IP Logged

Unpredictable

The 1'st night at Saint Teresa's was always a havoc all the children settling in..unpacking all the stuffs checking out new students meeting old frnds shouting complements at each other oh my my its just a total mess

 

Here our darling sanju was talking with sunny on her mob and unpacking her things she could not the difference between her room and ella's and vinnie's room...this room was so extravagant this made her more curious about her room mate

"i wonder y this room is so kind off spcl than the rest" she said to herself

"cuz it has the magical aaliya's touch" said sum1 from behind

Sanju turned and noticed a gal standing near the door

Wearing a tube  sanju sanju was not sure but yeah she had the total dazzling factor in her

She then smiled and extended her hand and said "heloo ex-room mate"

Sanju just looked at her perfectly grasping wat she meant by tht ex part but still calmly replied "hey aaliya...hmmm lemme guess 3rd year student. Born n bought up in London...loves perfect attitude. Only child of ur parents satisfied in life and now eagerly waiting for some1 maybe boyfriend" said sanju taking out the last dress her fav pullover and placing it in the wardrobe

Aaliya had her mouth open and was staring at sanju

Sanju simply chuckled and sat down on her bed with her legs crossed and took out a mind game clue book for puzzles

"how do u kno all this" asked aaliya getting back to her normal state

"know wat in particular" questioned sanju

"i mean every bit...spcly abt the boyfrnd part...no1 in the college knows tht m in a relationship..."asked aaliya coming and sitting near sanju

Sanju looked up from tht crosswords book and answered "well mm ur attitude says that u r the only child and ur accent tells ur frm London

3rd year student...well thts wat i came to know abt the diva aaliya shenoy by some othr ppl...and tht waiting part well irritation is clearly visible in ur face...and tht sum1 being your boyfriend was just a guess"

 
 
Aaliya looked at her for sometimes "u seem intresting" she finally said

"hmm" answered sanju who was deeply involved solving her puzzle

Aaliya looked at this girl who seems fascinating to her...she thinks maybe she can tolerate this girl she smiles and gets up but suddenly turns

"sanjana"

Sanju looks up "yup" she says waiting for aaliya to speak up

" i dnt kno y...but i feel sumwer we r related" says aaliya's

Sanju just smiles "frnds usually call me sanju" she states

Aaliya gives a friendly smile and walks off to freshen up

Meanwhile in saint treasa's boys hostel

"yaar did u guys see those new gals...i mean thr r a ton of hotties this tym"said RGV

"baaki sabka toh naahi paatha...but voh ek toh bohut spcl thi..."said mac goin back to his convo with the 3 girls and tht girl...ella Mathew thts the only thing he knows abt her for now

"rehne de tu" said sum1 paating mac's head and cums and sit besides him

"varun"shouted every1 in union

"hey guyz" said varun

"werz our champ prithvi...dud3 atlast hez the part of the college"said saahil

"i dnt kno jab sein ayya hein room mein chup chap betha huva hein "said varun

 There in varun's and prithvi's room prithvi was sitting near the window pane and was lost somwer

He was still stuck in the morning incident

Even he did not know why he cud not take that thing out his mind

He remeberd it all

Tht fyt

The way her fingers moved the way her brows tilled while she was shouting

The way her delicate body fitted perfectly in his arms

Thn the way she was looking in that sand coloured dress

Omg thts wat ppl call perfect beauty mayb

God knows will i meet her again...

"W*F...wat perfect...ohh shut up pritvi haf u lost it" said prithvi to himself

"and meet tht pest...again...no way...for god's sake keep her away frm me" he continued his blabber keeping his head on his hand

"suuup..chottay"said varun entering the room

He closed the door at a click and paced around the room looking quite tensed

"nuthng imp...bhai" said pritvi wat elese cud he haf done...hw cud he say tht he was smitten by unkown gal for the 1st tym in the whole bloody lot

Smitten...wot smitten no no no no prithvi stop it...!!

"lets go na...kaha khoya hein" asked varun looking at his weird bro even weirdly

"hmm..kahi na..ha lets go ,...but kaha?'" asked prithvi

"girls hostel...challl abb"said varun taking his hand and pulling him

"waaat???have u lost it...girls hostel.." said prithvi loosening his hand from his  bro's grip

"kya...apne bhai ke liye itna bhi nahi kar saktha...chal na"said varun making a puupy face...and he moved out of the room giving prithvi a pleading look

"thank god meri koyi GF nahi hein" thought prithvi jerking his head and following his bro

He saw his brother taking a rope and then suddenly realisation sunk in

"we r going through the window" asked prithvi giving a disbelief walla look

 "Yupp we r lill guy" said varun

"so mission girls hostel onn" shouted varun

 

PRECAP {varun helped prithvi to climb over the window pane varun enterd the room and walked towards the bed in the farther side while pritvi was struggling with ropes near the window pane when suddenly his gaze fells on some1

Sleeping peace fully hugging her pillow and murmuring throughout her sleep

"i miss u mumma" and a drop of tear falls from her face}

 

 

 

...END,...

 

Hellooo guys yup i kno this was a filler update moreover no saanvi

M rily sorry...but this update was necessary for the bright romantic future of saanvi

Ok ok i kno it was a total crap and my any explanations cannot justify it!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Sach mein i give a pakka walla promise that the next update will be full of saanvi...and u will get a gud drama of college life

And my all ff readers tht is all my sweetypie's nw can expect for a twist very soon in the ff...toh dil thamke baiton!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
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*edited*
Hey.. That was nice! Continue soon
waiting for all the twists..!!

Edited by Love_Arnie - 14 January 2013 at 1:39am

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