FF: Fire and Water 2 (Chapter 28-B on Pg. 18) - Page 7

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

DIII!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much for an amazing long update! It was an absolute joy to read! The love and worry portrayed was amazing... Shukriya aur please update karne, jab time mile tab :-) xxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

fantastic update :) loved it

thank you so much for writing such a long update :)

loved arjun's concern for riya when she went to check that slum :) and loved how worried riya is for arjun's safety :)

loved rathore's way of interrogating

oh god shree is hilarious 😆 he caught them red handed

the case is getting very interesting

hope arjun and shree come back safely

thanks for the PM

continue soon

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Moumi

@Moumimon

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Posted: 11 years ago

👍🏼Superb👍🏼
Awsome..awsome..awsome...😳
Just mindblowing..You are a too good writer...😊
Arjun_Riya_Shree_Rathore_chotu was just amaizing...😛
Mystery was fabulous..really well writen story..just love it dear...👏
How can you portrayed things like that..its so real..just mindblowing...👏
Update soon dear..egarly waiting for your next update..post it soon dear..😳
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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

superb update...!!!👏

ol d parts were amazing...!!!⭐️

jst lvd dem...!!!

oo ariya r so cute...!!!😳

cant wait fr d nxt part...!!!!

continue soon...!!!

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

loved d way u writing d case...

i like d way u write each n every thing precisely ...

i think Acharya is also involved ...lets see whether it s true or not

ria went to chk out d slum all alone

Ria 's concern for arjun was evident in last chapter ...

Waiting to know how case turns ...

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

fantastic updates
ariyas understanding was amazing
continue soon

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey ...

The update was just fantastic ...

The way Arjun was worried for her when she went to that slum was so cute..

when Riya was tensed for arjun n on the other hand Arjun didn't want Riya to be scared coz of his safety was fab But love the way Riya accepted the fact that Arjun is a cop n he needs to to live life on the edge n he'll be back for her

and Awww Shree is so cute ... Poor thing momentarily forgot that Arjun was right there coz of his over-excitement to catch his friend red handed was sooo cute🤣

Love the way Riya made sure that Arjun goes away with a smile ... And i really hope that arjun and Shree would be fine and back soon

Awesome👏 👏 👏

the part was really good

waiting for next part

update soon

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sana

@Luna92

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

absolutely amazing...awesome..fab...👏
loved it..👍🏼
loved every bit of ariya scenes...😳
and the case is realy very interesting..

thanx for the PM😊

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neeraja

@life93

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

hi dear it was a brilliant upadte...👍🏼...it was intresting, factful ,logical,...i wonder itna achha kaise likhte ho aap? loved shree riya convo...n ariya 😊...update soon

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857870

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Posted: 11 years ago

great update
loved the way arjun was worried about riya when she want to the slum alone
also loved riyas concern for arjun
continue soon

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