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OneShot: Mistletoe (Page 3)

.PINK. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 09 January 2009
Posts: 37962

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Awww Gagz I love this OS soo much Heart
like seriously, it waz so beautifully written. Day Dreaming
n when Justin Bieberz name waz there I waz like ... hehe
But Anniez so annoying person 
I really wanna read further, even doe I know this is an OS.
ughh why does this have to be so good???Cry*khushi ke asoon* --sorry em the biggest drama queen. LOL
you really likez Zayn, the way you decribed him Embarrassed
how everyone thinks hez a bad boy, but he just doesn't like to talk a lot
gr8 work sisHug
keep on writting other OSzz 
promise will read all of them. Wink
didn't know u had amazing talent there of writing. Embarrassed

keep it upHug

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misaki IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 March 2012
Posts: 3105

Posted: 30 December 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged
aww...you know i keep kinda forgetting why i love your stories sop much...maybe cz ur an incredible writer..or maybe cz its all at the awesome charcters that you create..or maybe its the simplicity of story-telling or maybe ..just maybe this amazin feeling of warmth that i feel wever i read a story of yours...

omg gaytri this story was so amzin..esp the end!! :D...the way you kinda got that 9th grade girl to change her thoughts... from somethn so mundane as math problems...to her crush...and yes ..she nevr said she had a crush on her..even thogh it was obvious..see thats wats good writng is all about(i think..:P)...you dont say things you let the readers figure it out..let them interpret..let them see for themselves wat it is about or hw they want to see...it ..
that is amzin!..you are amazin!...
loved it..woud be an understatement!..
that was such a cuuute story!...aww it felt so good to read it!
thank you so much for the pm!...Smile

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reflorated IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 April 2012
Posts: 7930

Posted: 15 January 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
oh... WOW.
Just... WOW.
not only did you combine Zayn, who's just a hottie Heart Day Dreaming but you also made Beiber a little less bearable (i hate him, like really hate himm LOL) to top that off...
continue this pileej Smile

Edited by V323 - 15 January 2013 at 6:58am

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banditqueenn. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 March 2011
Posts: 5753

Posted: 19 January 2013 at 6:09am | IP Logged
I need a second part to this.Even,hypothetical if required Approve 

Edited by banditqueenn. - 19 January 2013 at 6:05am

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-Grace- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 June 2008
Posts: 8306

Posted: 20 January 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Hi Gayathri!
ive seen u around but never really read ur works.
this was beautifully written!

such a simple scene with so much serenity!
and math  my most favorite course in high school <3
the first line i read and u mentioned math...i was like i have to read this now! yes call me a geek for that but im proud LOL

Hope to read more from you :) 

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Hazza.oneD Goldie

Joined: 27 February 2013
Posts: 1259

Posted: 09 March 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
hey sweeetieee!
Wow it was awesome!
I didn't know that you were so talented!
Hats off to you girl!
Ooo zaynieee!
Cho cho cuttteee!
They way you portrayed him here was awww so sweet and nice!

Okay i don't like justin beiber(not that much at least)

you know i am head over heels in love with this one shot!

Annie!! Hehehe!
I wish i was her!
But seriously at a point i dont wish too because i want you and zayniee there!
Did zayn read it???
Come on mail him!
I bet he will come running to you!

In the starting there is a part where you wanted to hear music instead of math!
It was just like me!
Whenever i do maths i have my earphones on!

Seriously loved it!
Whenever you write such one shots pm me pls!!!
Loved it i dont know how many times am i gonna read it??

Take care!

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Leve IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 20 November 2010
Posts: 34049

Posted: 10 March 2013 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
this OS was awesome i really liked it Big smile

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-Deeps- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 May 2012
Posts: 14055

Posted: 16 April 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Omfg! I mean it was effing A.W.E.S.O.M.E!
Dudee! I'm like totally speechless. LOL
It was like phenomenal.
The way you expressed everything. Beautiful! Beautiful!
I loved that part when you stared at Zayn when he was singing. That was just - Day Dreaming
I really understand how much you drool over him. ;)
BUT.. Why ONLY ONE SHOT? I want to read more you freakkk! Like seriously. It's just amazing Embarrassed

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