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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 1:28pm | IP Logged

Awww Gagz I love this OS soo much Heart

like seriously, it waz so beautifully written. Day Dreaming

n when Justin Bieberz name waz there I waz like ... hehe

But Anniez so annoying person

I really wanna read further, even doe I know this is an OS.

ughh why does this have to be so good??? Cry

*khushi ke asoon* --sorry em the biggest drama queen. LOL

you really likez Zayn, the way you decribed him Embarrassed

how everyone thinks hez a bad boy, but he just doesn't like to talk a lot

gr8 work sis Hug

keep on writting other OSzz

promise will read all of them. Wink

didn't know u had amazing talent there of writing. Embarrassed

keep it up Hug

-Linu

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged

aww...you know i keep kinda forgetting why i love your stories sop much...maybe cz ur an incredible writer..or maybe cz its all at the awesome charcters that you create..or maybe its the simplicity of story-telling or maybe ..just maybe this amazin feeling of warmth that i feel wever i read a story of yours...

omg gaytri this story was so amzin..esp the end!! :D...the way you kinda got that 9th grade girl to change her thoughts... from somethn so mundane as math problems...to her crush...and yes ..she nevr said she had a crush on her..even thogh it was obvious..see thats wats good writng is all about(i think..:P)...you dont say things you let the readers figure it out..let them interpret..let them see for themselves wat it is about or hw they want to see...it ..
that is amzin!..you are amazin!...
loved it..woud be an understatement!..
that was such a cuuute story!...aww it felt so good to read it!

thank you so much for the pm!... Smile

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V323

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged

oh... WOW.

Just... WOW.

not only did you combine Zayn, who's just a hottie Heart

but you also made Beiber a little less bearable (i hate him, like really hate himm LOL

) to top that off...

continue this pileej Smile

-Vee

Edited by V323 - 15 January 2013 at 6:58am

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banditqueenn.

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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 6:09am | IP Logged

I need a second part to this.Even,hypothetical if required Approve

Edited by banditqueenn. - 19 January 2013 at 6:05am

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged

Hi Gayathri!

ive seen u around but never really read ur works.

this was beautifully written!

such a simple scene with so much serenity!

and math my most favorite course in high school <3

the first line i read and u mentioned math...i was like i have to read this now! yes call me a geek for that but im proud LOL

Hope to read more from you :)

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Hazza.oneD

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged

hey sweeetieee!
Wow it was awesome!
I didn't know that you were so talented!
Hats off to you girl!
Ooo zaynieee!
Cho cho cuttteee!
They way you portrayed him here was awww so sweet and nice!

Okay i don't like justin beiber(not that much at least)

you know i am head over heels in love with this one shot!

Annie!! Hehehe!
I wish i was her!
But seriously at a point i dont wish too because i want you and zayniee there!
Did zayn read it???
Come on mail him!
I bet he will come running to you!

In the starting there is a part where you wanted to hear music instead of math!
It was just like me!
Whenever i do maths i have my earphones on!

Seriously loved it!
Whenever you write such one shots pm me pls!!!
Loved it i dont know how many times am i gonna read it??

Take care!
K.A.J.A.L!

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Posted: 10 March 2013 at 6:52pm | IP Logged

this OS was awesome i really liked it Big smile

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged

Omfg! I mean it was effing A.W.E.S.O.M.E!
Dudee! I'm like totally speechless. LOL

It was like phenomenal.
The way you expressed everything. Beautiful! Beautiful!
I loved that part when you stared at Zayn when he was singing. That was just - Day Dreaming

I really understand how much you drool over him. ;)
BUT.. Why ONLY ONE SHOT? I want to read more you freakkk! Like seriously. It's just amazing Embarrassed

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