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Riya: dude kisi ko pata nahi chalega'.

Rey: riya ye bohot risky hai yaar'

Riya: dude... kuch risky nai hai samja!! N nw let me do dis!!...as dis is abt MY FRND!!

Rey: FINE! Do it!!

Riya: thanx bro!! Love u!! (n hugs him)...

Rey: love u 2!!

Riya: acha abhi m gng 2 sleep!! GN!!

Rey: GN!!

(aft dis riya goes 2 her room... n rey strts dreaming abt his n taani's dance!!)

RIYA'S ROOM

(riya was sitting on her bed thinking abt next day's plan wen she remembered tht she had talked 2 taani so rudely... so think of calling her but den thinks)

Riya (thinking): nai re taani ko call mat kar agar kiya na toh problem ho jayegi...usse mere plan k baare mai definitely pata chal jayega... n mai bhi ussase juth nai bol sakti...uff ab kya karu??... usse sorry nai bolungi toh neend bhi nai aayegi n ussase baat bhi nai kar sakti... hmm... 1 kaam karti hu rohan ko call kar leti hu shayad muje better feel ho!!

(calls rohan)

(here rohan was in deep sleep wen his cell starts ringing)

Rohan (picks up): hello!!

Riya: hey kya kar raha hai??

Rohan: mai abhi dance kar raha hu!!

Riya: kya dance itani raat ko... kyu so jana chahiye na tuje?!

Rohan (irritated): abbe idiot pata hai itani raat hai toh normal ppl sote hai n m 1 of dem den puch kyu rahi hai!?!

Riya: acha baba bhadak kyu raha hai?! Sorry na..

Rohan: tu ye sab chod ye bata call kyu kiya??!

Riya: wo bas tujase baat karane ka dil kiya so call kar diya!!!

Rohan: oh so tere pas dil bhi hai its new muje nai pata tha!

Riya: rohan shut up!

Rohan: acha sorry...

Riya: no i m sorry!

Rohan: tu kyu sorry bol rahi hai?

Riya: wo aaj morning mai tujpe n taani pe chilaya na so... (pulling a sad face)... m so sorry!

Rohan: hey hey don't b sad na chill...

Riya: nai i m sorry... wo tum dono ne mujase ye baat chupayi na so i was so hurt m sorry!

Rohan: nai its k na... i know kaisa lagta hai jab best frnds humase kuch chupate hai so its really k!!

Riya: nai yaar still muje aaisa chilana nai chahiye tha...n uppar se... (rohan cuts her)

Rohan: tu na rehane de... tujape na ye senti waali baate suit nai karti! Tu toh bas smile karte hue hi achi lagti hai so smile right now!

Riya: nai abhi mood nai hai!

Rohan: plz smile na...

Riya: no

Rohan: plz

Riya: NO!!

Rohan: mere liya bhi nai... (pretends as if he is crying)...uaaan uaaan!!

Riya (laughs): kya rohan tu bhi na...

Rohan: ha dekha tu aaise zyada achi lagti hai!!

Riya: acha thanks

Rohan: ab ye thanks kyu?!

Riya: muje better feel karvane k liye!!... u don't know mai kitana guilty feel kar rahi thi!

Rohan: anytime darling!

Riya: oye darling hogi teri behen!!... muje itane sweet names nai chalenge samja??!

Rohan: ha meri nautanki samaj gaya mai!!... ab jaa so jaa its too late kal tuje n swayam ko perform bhi karana hai na...

Riya (widout thinking): nai toh wo toh rey n taani karane waale haina!!

Rohan: KYA!!!???

Riya (realizing wat she said): ummm... i mean kuch nai chod na waise bhi abhi phone rakh muje bohot nind aa rahi hai BYE!! (speaks all dis in 1 breath... n hung up)...(thinks)...bach gai!!

Rohan (2 himself): (smiling)... puri ki puri pagal hai ...meri riya!! (den again goes 2 sleep)

NEXT MORNING!!

---------------TAAYAM RECIDANCE-------------

(2day swayam was waking taani up... as taani was crying whole night so she was still sleeping... swayam looks at her face which was so pale... he den removed his hand on her head n his eyes were filled wid tears... )

Swayam: m so sorry taani... mai kal bohot gusse mai tha ...m really sorry...

(den wakes her up)

Swayam: princess get up now... warana colg k liye late ho jayenge...plz get up jaldi...

(Taani wakes up... looks at swayam n was just gng 2 give him GM hug... bt remembering wat was happen last day stops herself n looks down... looking dis swayam smiles n hugs her so tightly...)

Swayam: i m so so sorry princess pata nai muje kya ho gaya tha... i know wat i did was wrong but mai kya karu ...i was feeling so guilty n i just blurt it out... m soo sorry princess..

Taani (smiles): its k bhai... i understand ...chill n thanks 4 forgiving!!

(taayam hugs each other)

Taani: acha bhai ab chaliye... hum late ho rahe hai aaj waise bhi event hai toh aapko n riya ko last rehearsals karane honge...

Swayam: ha chalo... wait mai riya ko call kar deta hu... m sure madam abhi tak so rahi hogi...

Taani: ha i know... fine usse call karke breakfast k liye aa jana

Swayam: ok!!

(swayam goes 2 dining table)

Taani: bhai aap aa gae... riya se baat hui kya?!

Swayam: abhi kaha??... maate phone hi nai utha rahi...

Taani: oh... 1 kaam kijiye na call rey... n tell him 2 wake her up

Swayam: ha ye thik rahega... (calls rey)

(here rey was in deep sleep dreaming abt his n taani's dance n suddenly a calls came... he took d call n ask)

Rey: who d hell r u disturbing my sleep (den slowly)...n my dream!!?

Swayam: tera pyara dost n teri behen ka dance partner... ab kuch yaad aaya?!!

Rey: oh swayam tu... itani subah subah kyu call kar raha hai?... so jana na n muje bhi sone de!!...

Swayam: janab zara time toh dekhiye... its 7 a.m. muje aur aapki behen ko rehearsals k liye jana hai...

Rey: toh jaa na muje kyu disturb kar raha hai?!

Swayam: ha par teri behen phone hi nai utha rahi... so wake her up n tell her 2 get ready... mai usse pick karane aa raha hu...

Rey: thik hai i'll get her ready tu aa jaa...

Swayam: ohk den usse 30 mins mai ready rakh na...

Rey: ha thik hai ab muje sone de!!!!!

Swayam: no!! 1st wake her up den so jana aram se!!

Rey: ha baba jaa raha hu 2 min ruk...n phone cut kar ab!!

Swayam: thik hai bye... usse ready rakhana!!

Rey: ha bye!!

(dey hung up!)

Swayam: hope ye riya ko utha de!

Taani: nai utha denge don't worry!! Abhi aap nashta kar lo!

Swayam: nai muje riya ko 15 mins mai pick karana hai so mai canteen se nashta karlunga

Taani: nai bhai plz karke jao na... aaise khane ka naam lekar bahar nai jaate kaam bigad jata hai

Swayam: taani tu London se aai hai fir bhi inn sab baato mai trust karti hai! Pagal aaisa kuch nai hota mai chalta hu bye!

Taani: nai bhai ruko na...arre (but swayam went away!) ...(2 herself) hope aaj sab acha ho!

-----------RIYA'S ROOM------------

(rey was wakening her up)

Rey: riya uth jaa na swayam aata hi hoga!

Riya: ha toh mai kya karu ??

Rey: tu kya kar matlab?! Wo tuje hi lene aa raha hai!

Riya: (sitting)...WAT!! muje kyu?!

Rey: oye aaj performance haina isliye !

Riya: abbe duffer kal raat ko hi toh humane decide kiya tha ki perform mai n swayam nai balki tu aur taani karane waale ho...bhul gaya?!!

Rey: oh freak! Mai toh bhul hi gaya tha..shit! ab??!

Riya: ab kya aane de swayam ko kuch idea nikalti hu mai!

Rey: fine jaldi soch na!

Riya: soch rahi hu pehale muje ready ho jaane de!

Rey: par tuje jana nai hai toh ready kyu ho rahi hai?!

Riya: tuje chup rehane nai aata kya?!!

Rey: ha fine ja ready ho ja!

Riya: ha n tu bahar baith swayam ka wait kar!

Rey: ohk! (he went out)

Riya (thinking): aab mai kya karu?!! Oh god...nai chodo god se kuch nai hoga iss wakt muje hi koi jugad karana hoga!

(den she goes n gets ready!)

(here swayam nters reya's (rey n riya) place n meets rey!)

Swayam: hey dude! Howz u?!

Rey: totally fine!...tu bata taani kaisi hai?!

Swayam: taani... thik hai!

Rey: ohk! (smiles)

Swayam: ye acha hai yaha aaya mai n pucha taani k baare mai! Mere baare mai toh puch!

Rey: ha bata tu kaisa hai?!

Swayam: ab chod !

(den nly riya comes!)

Riya: hey dude!

Swayam: hello mam ...kaisi hai!

Riya: me perfectly fine!... tu bata taani kaisi hai?!

(hearing dis rey starts laughing n swayam glares at riya)

Swayam: tu pakki sis hai rey ki! 

Riya: kyu kya hua ...rey tu kyu has raha hai?!

Swayam: kuch nai chod ...taani thik hai!

(den nly doorbell rings)

Riya: ye abhi kon aaya hai?!

Rey: pata nai mai jaake check karta hu!

(he opens d door n founds rohan standing der!)

Rey: rohan tu yaha...itani subah subah!

Rohan: ha wo riya se milana aaya tha!

Rey (possessive bro kicks in): kyu riya se kya kaam hai ha?!

Rohan: wo kuch kaam tha!

Rey: kya kaam tha ha?!

Rohan: wo...

Riya (from inside): kon hai rey?

Rohan (b4 rey could speak anything): mai hu jaan!

Rey: JAAN!!!!

Riya: oh rohan hi! (hugs him)

Rohan: hey...ab thik haina tu?!

Riya: yea now m better!

Rey: kyu kya hua tha riya tuje?!

Rohan (just 2 irritate rey): rey kaisa bhai hai tu teri behen ko kya hua hai ye bhi nai pata?! Lalat hai tujape!

Rey: m sorry riya muje sachame nai pata bt hua kya hai?!

(rohan starts laughing n riya smiles)

Riya: kuch nai ye sirf mazak kar raha hai! Rohan tu bhi na!

Rohan: sorry dude! (hugs rey)

Riya: ab tum dono ka ho gaya ho toh chale andar!

Rey: ha chalo!

(inside)

Rohan: hey swayam tu yaha?!n taani kaisi hai!

(both rey n riya laughs!)

Swayam (irritate):thik hai wo kaha na 1 baar!

Rohan: Muje kab kaha?!

Swayam (calm): oh sorry dude!

Rohan: its k!...BTW tu yaha kya kar raha hai?

Swayam: ha mai riya ko pick karane aaya tha! chal riya!

Riya: ha chal! ...i mean mat chal!

Swayam: kya?!...kyu?!

Riya: ummm...wo mai ha wo mai paani pee k aati hu!

Swayam: k! Jaldi aana!

Riya: ha sure!

(riya passes through rohan... n pretends as wo slip ho rahi hai...bt rohan hold her by her waist tightly... n dey both gets lost in each other's eyes!...)

(Rey looks dis n coughs loudly...by dis dey both comes 2 sense)

Rohan (making her stand properly): tu thik hai ?!

Riya: ha (den remembering ki ussane aaisa kyu kiya tha)...i mean na!!...ouch mera pair its hurting...(saying dis she sits down!...rey smiles...n swayam gets worried)

Swayam: riya shit tu thik haina?!

Riya: no dude! Its hurting...mai chal bhi nai paa rahi!!ouch!

Swayam: shit ab humara dance?!

Riya: i don't think mai dance kar paungi! (pretending as if she is soo sad!)

Rohan: chal pehale tuje tere kamare mai chod du!

Riya: ha chal!

(rohan tooks her in his arms n takes her 2 his room... here rey was so angry wid rohan!...bt ctrls himself...n went 2 her room!)

RIYA'S ROOM

Rey: swayam ab tum dono toh i don't think dance kar paoge...

Swayam: ha i guess u r right!

Rohan: but hume ye baat VP sir ko batani hogi ki aaj dance nai hoga!

Riya: NO!!!... i mean ye dance mai nai kar sakte but koi aur toh kar sakta haina?!

Swayam: KON??!!

Riya: taani!!!

Swahan (swayam + rohan): WAT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Riya: ha meri jagah taani perform kar legi! Usse steps bhi pata hai!

Rohan: but wo stage pe perform nai karegi! U know na wo bohot darti hai!

Riya: ha i know... bt tuje bhi pata haina...wo colg ki reputation k liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai so wo ye karegi!

Rohan: ha wo bhi hai...toh fir ye done raha!

Swayam: wait!! Mai apani behen k sath dance kaise kar sakta hu?!!!

Rohan: ab wo kyu?!

Riya: nai rohan swayam is right! ... do 1 thing ...ummm... ha rey! Tuje bhi toh ye steps pata haina!...

Rey: ha!

Riya: den tu taani k sath dance kar lena!                    

Rey: yes!!

Swayam: NO!!

Rey: Y??
Swayam: cz i mean meri sis k sath tu dance... i mean its quite odd n its just...

Riya (cuts him): dude stop it!!... tere pas dusare koi option hai toh bata!

Swayam: dusare option toh...

Riya (again cuts): nai haina isliye let me do dis!!...nw rey n rohan jaldi colg jao n taani n baaki team members ko humara decision bata do!

Rey (super happy): ohk! Chal rohan!

Riya: (in rey's ear... tht no 1 can listen other den him)... itana uchal mat! Swayam ko pata chal jayega!!!

Rey: ooopss... sorry!

Riya: its k! Ab jaa!!

Rey: ha bye! (gives her a side hug!)...TC!!... swayam iska khayal rakhana!

Swayam: don't worry dude mai hu na iske sath u chill n go!!...

Rey: ohk bye!

Rohan: bye guys!!

(dey both went away... here riya was smiling n was super happy ki uska plzn successful raha... swayam noticed tht usse bilkul pain ho raha ho aaisa uske face se nai lag raha!!...so he asked)

Swayam: riya tere pair mai sachame moch aai haina??!! Ya kuch aur baat hai??!!

Riya: wo...wo...

Swayam: kya wo...wo?!!

Riya: wo...wo...

Swayam (laughing): arre i was just kidding!!... but tu itana darr kyu gai?!!... kahi sachame...

Riya (cuts him): nai dude aaisa kuch nai hai!!

Swayam: ha k!

 

HERE AT COLG

(rey n rohan reaches der!... n goes 2 canteen wer d whole gang was present now!... dey went der wid sad faces!... n said)

 

Reyhan: hi guys!

Gang: hi!

Taani: kya hua guys y r yu both sad?!

Rey: wo riya k pair mai moch aa gai hai!

Taani: WAT! Kaha hai wo kaisi hai?!!... thik haina?!!... moch kaise aai?!!... kya kiya uss idiot ne?!!

Rey: ohoo maate chill!... n ussane kuch nai kiya wo bas slip ho gai... n she is fine!...

Taani: oh thank god!

Rohan: wat thank god?!... re yaar wo aaj dance nai kar payegi!

Gang: WAT!??

Simmi: shit man... toh ab kon dance karega?!...

Rey (slowly): taani!!

Gang (didn't heard): kya?!!

Rey( little bit louder): taani!!

Gang (shocked): WAT!!

Rohan: kya yaar behare ho gae ho?!! Sunnai nai diya TAANI!!!!! (literally shouting so gang out fingers on der ears!!)

Nil: chilla mat!

Vicky: ha we can hear!

Bharat: abbe par taani kaise per...per

Amar: pelfolm (perform)

Bharat: ha wahij ... taani kaise kar payegi?!

Rey: kyu nai kar sakti?!

Rinni: cz usse dance se darr lagta haina?!... agar ussane dance bigad diya toh?!

Rey (angry): RINNI!! (den realizes tht he shouted at Rinni so he said)... i mean my dear Rinni wo itani achi dancer hai... n wo hi 1 gal hai jo dance steps jaanti hai... so wo hi ye dance kar sakti hai... !

Neha: neha thinking k saying right rey is... taani dance have 2 do nly!!...

Amar: yeah light! (right)

Vicky: so ye tair raha ki dance taani hi karegi!!

(like dis every1 started cheering!!)

(Den suddenly taani says making every1 silent!)

Taani: toh aap chahate hai ki mai perform karu??!!

Gang: HA!!

Taani: bt..

Rey: bt-wat kuch nai...abhi we need u!! Plz taani!

Taani: sorry i cant!!

Rey: but y?!

Taani: cz...

 

SO HERE I END!!! N HA DIS UPDATE WAS SO LONG SO I ALSO WANT LONG COMMENTS PLZZ!!!

 

PRECAP:-

(swayam sensing something wrong in rey's behaviour)

Swayam: dude tu thik hai?!

Rey (he was damn happy): yeah m totally fine!! (wid a broad smile)

Swayam: really rey?!!.. i mean waha riya ko chot lagi hai n tu thik hai?!... its really wired!!

Rey (happily forgetting everything): re usse sach mai kaha chot lagi hai!!

Swayam: WAT!!??

 



Edited by tarey_forever - 07 August 2013 at 4:20am

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