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RISHBALA - A LOVE STORY CONTINUED


This is continued off of Tum Dena Saath Mera. Many people were upset I just ended it. I realize I ended it in a hurry. I had actually been upset during that time. Stressing over exams, work, my uncle's passing, family, everything. And I felt if I ended that FF I'd feel a bit at peace.

But after everyone's reaction, I figured, why not make a sequel to that FF? So! For this sequel to make sense, I need everyone to forget that the previous FF was all Madhu's dream. And forget the five-year leap! This FF is being continued from Maya's birth. Enjoy! <3 :)

 

P.S. Yes, the prologue is just a scene from the last part of Tum Dena Saath Mera

Also, the short form for this FF in the title will soon be Rishbala - ALSC!


Merry Christmas! A gift from me to you! ;)


Index

Prologue - Page One

Part One - Page Seven

Part Two - Page Fourteen

Part Three - Page 19: Kidnapping Special

Part Four - Page 24: Kidnapping Special

Part Five - Page 30: Kidnapping Special

Part Six - Page 36

Part Seven - Page 44

Part Eight - Page 49

Part Nine - Page 53

Chapter Ten - Page 58

Chapter Eleven - Page 63

Chapter Twelve - Page 63

Chapter Thirteen - The End - Page 63

 

Prologue

 

RK stood in the room holding Madhu's hand as she gave birth. He caressed her hair while trying to calm her.

Suddenly RK heard crying. As Madhu sighed in relief, RK looked to the right and saw the doctor holding a baby. His baby.

 

Doctor: She's beautiful.

RK: SHE?! MADHU WE GOT A SHE!

 

RK was ecstatic. The nurses cleaned off the baby and wrapped her in a blanket. They handed her to Madhu. Madhu kissed her daughter.

Madhu looked up at RK and smiled as RK caressed his daughter's tiny face with his finger.

 

RK: Maya...

 

RK sighed. The happiness on his face showed more than it ever had before. He had never felt so proud and happy before. It was the happiest day of his life. He became a father. Because of Madhu.

RK looked at Madhu and kissed her on the cheek. She smiled.

 

Madhu: Maya Kundra...It's a girl RK...you were right.

 

Madhu spoke softly.

 

RK: I love you Madhu.

Madhu: I love you too Rishabh.

 

Rishabh. He had longed to hear her start calling him that. The happiness of that day would never compare to any other for RK.

RK pulled in for a hug with his entire, little family. The two people he loved the most were in his arms. He couldn't have been happier. He couldn't have felt luckier.



Edited by PrittB - 20 February 2013 at 8:02pm

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Great..pritt im glad to see u back with a bang.fantastic.plz continue soon and do pm me.

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awesome pritt

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 8:35pm | IP Logged

Awesome Start of the sequel Pritt

It is nice to see that you started the story with RK, Madhu and their Princess Maya

It will be very nice to see the interaction of RK with his daughter Maya and wife Madhu and the family bonding getting stronger.

Thank you Pritt for writing this sequel.

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Great...pritt glad to see u back with a bang.fantastic.continue soon.and do pm me.

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
Merry christmas pritt

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
Yay!!!u r continuing TDSM!!!!Party

That was my favorite among ur FFs...so glad u r continuing it...love this update...

Love to read more...update soon...n Thanx for the PM!!!Smile

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
heyii di

Luved it surely!!

but can you pm me the link of the last FF?

pls sorry to disturb but I seriously love your works and wanna read it!

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