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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Just read both d chpts...tey r amazing...
better dan d original story
As I alwayz wantd 2 see prithvi n sanju togethr...
Plz do continue soon...


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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
amazing update 


loved it so very much  Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shimolina

Just read both d chpts...tey r amazing...
better dan d original story
As I alwayz wantd 2 see prithvi n sanju togethr...
Plz do continue soon...




yay!! sanvi are together ..
will continue soon..Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by enrique305

amazing update 


loved it so very much  Smile

thanx a lot!Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 2:01am | IP Logged

awesome update..

waiting for the next part..


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                                         CHAPTER 3

The 6 of them were standing before the biggest law firm…
The best law college of the India…
Symbiosis Law College

They looked at each other for comfort and then hand – in – hand walked inside the college..

The college  was very beautifully decorated…
Balloons , ribbons  and what not..
Everyone was moving here and there chit chating..
And were in their own world..
No one noticed them entering inside..

RGV as usual were moving with his camera and recording all the sweet memories…
Each and every person was interview over there..

And next who were caught by him….
Were them….

RGV:  hey , so the 6 hero and heroines of our college are back
           They are back safe and sound..
             And have even escaped the mouth of death..
           So what do u all want to say about your adventurous trip to death island..

Sanjana: shut up! RGV its not funny…
RGV: hey I was just joking yaar….
         Chill 
        Its new year…

So just enjoy the new year fest…..
Its party time…
Six of them: ya.. ya… its party time..

Host: so friends we begin the new year fest..
With a couple dance……

And our first 3 couples for the dance are –

Sanjana – Prithvi
Ela – Mac
Vinnie – Rigved….

Give a round of applause for them..
Pls. can we have u all on stage..
Hurry up guys!!..

Sanjana: I can't dance ..
I just can't dance..
Arrreyy I don't know to dance..
Prithvi: don't worry sanju..
I am here
Come on..
Sanjana: no…
Prithvi came near her , gave her a small kiss and whispered in her ears : don't worry just trust me…

Ela: come on mac , lets dance 
It's the correct time to become a popular couple…
But before that we need some make over..
And mac , u will wear what I say..
No arguments..

Mac: what u say , I do that …..  ah!! I always do what u say..
U rule in our relationship….

Ela: did u say something….
Mac; no not at all
Ela: are u sure…
Mac: yup!
Lets go we are getting late..
We want to become popular na..
Ela: yup!!  Come on , we always get late because of u..
Mac: its always u , not me…
Ela: mac , hurry up yaar…
U need a makeover..

Mac; coming  babes..

Vinnie: I don't think we should go…
Afterall u only said that u are a respected professor of the college..
And dancing don't suit's a professor..
Right na????

Rigved: Vinnie , come on yaar..
I was just joking..
Don't take it too seriously…
Pls. na  , I want to show everyone that I am a cool dude…

Vinnie: yay.. yaay… I know how cool u are…
Romance ka toh R bhi nahi aata…
Aur cool dude bane chale hai…

Come on…
Let's move…

Host:  finally we have all our 3 couples on the stage…
 ishq wala love,  is love that is serious, something that is not an infatuation, something that would not die in a few days, a love that will be there forever, a love that is about love. Ishq wala love.

Yes friends , they will be dancing on our bollywood hit song…
Ishq wala love  from "STUDENT OF THE YEAR"
So here we go…..



Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love

The guys put their hands around the waist of their lady love and their lady love on their prince charming's shoulders….
And slowly… slowly… they get lost in each other's eyes..
And share a good eye lock..

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein band kar ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love

Sanjana and prithvi remembers the days , when they used to hate each other…
And after that they slowly fell for each other..
And at present are a happy couple , who understands each other very well…..


Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love


Mac and ela  remember their numerous breakups.. and patchup…
And how they used to and still fight and argue over silly things..
But then also they are incomplete without each other..
They are made for each other..


Jo aise hota
Jo milte tum ho jaate gum sath mere
Hote hote hoga samjhaye hum tham jaaye tum
O dil mere
Toota zyada zyada tara jab gira 
Zara zyada zyada maangu dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maane na dil ye sarphira
Ishq wala love

Bada ye dil nadaan tha, par aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Jo khine ka tha dar tujhe pata nahi kyu zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Vinnie remembered the day when she confessed her feelings..
She was hell scred that how will rigved react..
But was happy to know that he too felt the same..
She is happy with her partner..
Though he irritates her…
But he is her Mr. Perfect..



Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hote hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love 

 even after the ending of the song..
They were lost in each others eyes…..
Host: hey!! Couples.. the song has stopped , u can continue your romance somewhere else..
We need to move forward with the fest…

The 6 of them looked down embarrassed  and moved back to their places..
But they enjoyed their time in each other's arms..

Soon it was night time and the fest was  completed.
Everyone was waiting for the princi as he was going to make an important announcement 

Princi: friends u all must be knowing about our  student  Varun Mittal…
He died …
But his death was not an accident…
It was a murder..
He was murdered friends….
And was murdered by..

The rest of the speech was not heard by anyof them…
As their thoughts drifted back to that unfaithful day when they first received that messages…

Sanjana , Ela , Vinnie and Vgathered in the caf 
Sanjana: guys!! I need to prepare …
We have only 45 minutes left..
I need to hurry up..
I don't even remember a word from our chapter…

Ela and Varun: same here…
Vinnie: don't worry guys…
I will tell u the main topics of the chapter .
Just go through them once..
And it would e sufficient to score good marks..
Take it easy…

The four of them were going through their books …..
When suddenly  a person dressed in black came and dropped a letter for them..
And just disappeared for there….

Their names were written on the envelope…

Ater opening the envelope they got four pieces of paper in it..
With a poetry on each of it…..

And a small note….
Which said that if the want to save their lives then decode the mystery hidden in the poems……
If u find the clue..
Then u are safe ..
Otherwise u are gone…
No one can save u from me….
And its not a prank…
Its truth..
I know what had happened on Mumbai highway 3 years back….
And I am back to take my revenge……
Just few days and u all are gone…..


All 4 of them were scared …
They didn't wanted to remember that 3 yrs ago's incident…

All four of them took one piece of paper and read the poetry..

Sanjana –

I am...

 Soft and black,
Silent and deadly.
I come,
     Slowly,
         Surely.

Creeping out from the shadows,
Slipping up on people unawares.

I am the answer
       to their wishes,
I bring relief,
       and happiness.
I am the herald of joy.

Creeping out from the shadows,
Slipping up on people unawares.

I am a hopeless wish,
     I bring pain,
           and sadness.
I am a herald of nightmares.

Creeping out from the shadows,
Slipping up on people unawares.

I am a dark beauty,
       I am silence,
           Darkness itself.

My cloak is pure black,
My many eyes are white,
and lethally cold is my bite.

Where I leave my mark,
               You can always tell.

Shadows,
    In the corners of your eyes.

Little voices,
   that you can't quite hear,
        and can't quite understand,
Vying for you attention.

Beauty,
    Playing before your eyes,
             Distracting your mind

When shadows,
             words,
      and beauty,
have you so confused,
you can't remember,
            who you truly are.

Then I bare my teeth,
            and swallow your world.

Creeping out from the shadows,
Slipping up on people unawares.

Where I leave my mark,
               You can always tell.

When you hurt,
When you cry,
           I will come,
                to comfort you.

With a numbing,
               silent,
          darkness.

But do not trust me.

For I know you,
        Your deepest,
                darkest secrets.

And I will use them,
        To haunt you,
        To strike fear,
deep into your heart.

I am watching,
        with countless eyes,
I am listening,
        with countless ears.

And I will always come,
       For as surely as the world spins,

     I
       am
            night!


Vinnie –

Silence
Dark night,
silent stars.
Quiet tears,
Stars begin to go dark.
Soft music,
floating through the dark house.
Family just a room away,
and yet all alone.
Wish on a star,
Wish from your heart.
Become who you need to,
leave all else behind.
Surrounded by friends,
Faking happy,
No thought for yourself.
Just get up and leave.
Do what you need to do.
You still love them.
But this time,
it's for yourself.


Ela –
End of the World

When the sun starts to fade.
And the stars come out in the day. 
A day will come.

And on that day,
The moon will fall.

And the life,
             and hope,
Will drain from my heart. 

But, even when the sky bleeds red,
                          the clouds fall,
           the trees stop growing,
          hearts are breaking,
          And when all else lies in ruins,

One thing will live on.
One beauty,
Amongst all the destruction.

The silent,
Unrequited love,
Buried deep in my heart.
It will never die. 

The world can end,
Everyone can die.
It will only strengthen my love.

Years have gone by,
Since I found my love.

Letting it go,
Is impossible.

As the days go by,
The space in my heart,
Reserved for those I love,
Grows.

One,
Two,
Three,
Four,
Five,
Six.

A girl,
Two boys.
My brother,
My sister,
And one more.

Never dying,
Never ending,
Love lives on.


Varun-
Times Gone By...

Remember the days when a stick was a flaming sword?
Remember when a bumble bee was terrifying?
Remember when bad words were things like "barf' and 'fart'?
When sticking out your tongue out was the meanest thing you could do?
Back in the day when no one cared what you wore?
In the time when everyone was themselves?
No masks,
No hiding,
Just being yourself.
When the wind came,
We would fly along with it.
Then came the wind of change,
It blows away everything familar.
It leaves you standing alonge,
in a a world unknown.
Struggle on,
Fight the loneliness.
If you look closely,
You'll see your friends,
All standing alone,
and they'll see you,
standing like they are.
That's when you reached out to them,
and the world softened,
became less terrifying.
The world is still huge,
still scary,
still different than anything you've ever known,
But you're no longer alone.


They didn't got a head and tail of these messages..
How were they going to find the clue..

Vinnie  and sanjana once again looked at the note and something clicked in their mind…..

They once again read the poems  and exclaimed together!!!

We got the clue…
We got it…

It's a date ….
Yes it's a date……

Varun and Ela: really??


____________________________________________________________________________

HEY FRIENDS..
IT WAS A LONG UPDATE...
I WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO UPDATE FOR THE NEXT 2 DAYS ..
THUS TILL THEN ENJOY THIS ONE...

AND KEEP GUESSING WHAT CLUE IT CAN BE...
YOU ALREADY HAVE ONE HINT..
IT A DATE...

JUST TAKE A LOOK OVER THE NAMES OF THE POEMS AND THEIR ENDINGS..
AND TRY TO FIGURE OUT..
CONSIDER EACH AND EVERY NAME...
DON'T MISS OUT ANY...


NOW ENOUGH OF ALL THIS..
NEXT UPDATE..
MOST PROBABLY ON TUESDAY...
WITH A NEW YEAR SURPRISE FOR U ALLL...

READ , LIKE AND COMMENT...
I HAVE GIVEN U ALL A LONG UPDATE...
SO PLS. GIVE LONG COMMENTS...
IT REALLY MEANS A LOT..

THANX A LOT..
FOR BEARINGWITH ME..Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 4:45am | IP Logged
REALLY AWESOME..UPDATE FAST ..

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Prithvi came near her , gave her a small kiss and whispered in her ears : don't worry just trust me'
aww.. so cuteEmbarrassed

Ela: come on mac , lets dance 
It's the correct time to become a popular couple'..
We want to become popular na..Lets go we are getting late
lol.. END kamal k hai n ela...ROFL

Afterall u only said that u are a respected professor of the college..
And dancing don't suit's a professor..
Right na????
Rigved: Vinnie , come on yaar..
I was just joking..
haaye, rigvi ..Day Dreaming

Host: hey!! Couples.. the song has stopped , u can continue your romance somewhere else..
for some unknown reason, muje aisa laga jaise host ne mujse ye keh diya, n i ws blushingBlushing

He was murdered friends'.
And was murdered by..

o god!  i mixd up the 2 lines n i read it as he ws murdered by friendsShocked

I know what had happened on Mumbai highway 3 years back'.
oh! so here is the start of mystery
kya clue haiD'oh

sanju n varun's poems were my favoriteSleepy
sanju's ws so intriguing n varun's ws so meaningful

muje laga shayad ye post lamba ho jayega 
phir maine pada tht u wnt long coments so...LOL
i hope itna lamba comment acchha laga

waiting for new year [that is, chapter 4]


Edited by dhaakshu - 29 December 2012 at 4:52am

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