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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 3:36am | IP Logged
                                 CHAPTER 2

All 6 of them were heading back to their law college. 
Hands in hand as all of them were afraid to recall their past.
Just thinking about the college or Varun would take them back to past.
All old memories were haunting their mind.
Negative vibes have taken over their mind and now they were their controllers….

This incident had affected all 6 of them but the most affected were the 3 best friends.
This incident brought many changes in their lives , bad moments , terrific moment even scary moments , but still it had taught them a lesson..
To never believe to anyone's words blindly..
Before taking any step think twice and question yourself that what you are doing is it right or wrong??
Are you on the right path or not??

But this incident had brought one good thing…
They all found their true love…
A person who was always their in all their decisions and stood like a pillar for them..
A person with whom they can share anything and look for support
A person on whose shoulders they can cry their hearts out and share all their worries…
They got their loving partner..
 A partner for their life..
Who would never leave them.

The three couples were moving back to their college
An awkward silence was present in the car…
Somehow they needed to break this.
Forget the past and move ahead..
They knew it was difficult but they had to do it…

Prithvi: hey guys!! We are heading back to college…
Rigved: that too after 2 long weeks..
Mac: aren't u three excited about it??
You will see ur college after a long time
Many things would have changed till now..
Rigved: hey Vinnie!! You don't even look tensed or serious about your studies…
             You have missed your lectures and have to cover up now..
             How are u going to do that??
             I don't want my girlfriend to fail ..
           I am not onna marry a failed law student..
            After all I am a respected professor…
Vinnie: what do u think hah!!
 I am going u fail..
Just wait and watch
No one in this world has the power to fail me in any of the law subjects
Do u get it??
Or I should explain u in some other manner..
U know what all I can do??
Ela ans Sanjana: Mr. Professor !! u are in trouble now…
Our encyclopedia is now in full form
Nothing can stop her now??

Sanjana: hey Ela !! your eye shadow ??
Ela: what? What happened to my eyeshadow??
Is it now looking good..
I knew it . it was not matching with my dress
Mac , can't u even select a perfect eyeshadow for me.
And look at yourself..
What has happened to ur dressing sense..
Who would believe that u are my bf..
U don't even match my personality..
I really need to do something of u??

All 4 of them began laughing , leaving Ela and Mac confused..
It was after a long time that they had seen them fighting over looks and dresses…..

Sanjana: shuro ho gayi hamari beauty queen
Zara kuch keh diya iss ke make up ke bare mein
Aur isne toh bichare mac hi class hi le li..
Poor Guy!!! Iss pagal chudail ke changul mein phas gaya..
Hamne toh pehle hi warning di thi..
Par hamari toh kisine suni hi nahi..

Prithvi: haan yaar!! Mac.
Maine bhi tujhe samjhaya tha kit u isse propose mat kar..
Par tu kaha suntan hai kisi ki..

And with this sanjana and prithvi do a hi-5
This lovely couple likes teasing everyone around..
Everyone was happy …
After a long time they all were laughing and enjoying their time…

Rigved: ok everyone calm down ..
We are about to reach , so save your energy..

And with this he tunes the radio ..
And the song starts….



I don't belong here
I never saw this on the path I walk
The blood-stained walls, the lines of chalk on the floor
It's getting so hard
I never saw the backlash when the tide began to rise
I can't remember
The way it was when everything felt right
My mouth held shut and eyes sealed tight with control

So I remember on the inside...

I found a dark, infernal place I don't want to face anymore
Somehow, I won't stop feeding the pain
My heart's just the same as before
I found a dark, infernal place that I don't want to face anymore...
...somehow...

So now I'm stuck here
Between the guilty and the insincere
The words I spoke have left here all alone
I should have known this
Never saw the backlash when the tide began to rise.
I wish it all gone...
I could've burned it when I had that choice
And now I'd die to kill this noise in my head


So I remember on the inside, the inside...

If this is all the love my spirit can give
Just take it back tonight
There is not a reason more to live...



Again everyone became silent….
The rest of the journey was quite…
No one spoke anything….
Just remember old days……
The days of happinesss………
Which they can only remember but never experience again..

They reach their destination..
And after seeing it only……. They could feel creepiness  surrounding them…



FRIENDS HERE IS THE NEXT PART!!!
ENJOY!!

AND PLS. COMMENT AND PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON...
NEXT PART - SOME MYSTERIES WILL BE REVELED 

KEEP READING.. AND WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART...Smile

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
LOVED IT IT WAS FUNNY.CONTINUE SOON WITH SOME ROMANCE.AND THANKS FOR THE PM.Smile

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 3:55am | IP Logged
hey radzz im happy u updated
the chapter was really nice hey rigved n vinnie's part was very cute n romantic
i really liked d conversation the dialogues were very funny lol
n ela n sanju's eye shadow discussion was really nice
must say ur dialogues r cool
but im sad there was no prthvi n sanjana scene
pls include there scenes in d next update
thanks for the pm


Edited by SHARVANI - 28 December 2012 at 3:53am

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 4:06am | IP Logged
all ur comments will be considered ..
will update the next part with some mysteries 
and of course with some cute romantic scenes...

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHARVANI

hey radzz im happy u updated
the chapter was really nice hey rigved n vinnie's part was very cute n romantic
i really liked d conversation the dialogues were very funny lol
n ela n sanju's eye shadow discussion was really nice
must say ur dialogues r cool
but im sad there was no prthvi n sanjana scene
pls include there scenes in d next update
thanks for the pm

ya sure...
i have already planned some good scenes..  for sanvi..
must say.. some romantic ones...


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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
don't be sad...
romantic scenes for every couple are planned..

will be updated at the right time..
and at the right course of the story..

till then keep reading and enjoy!!!

hopefully
next update will be by 2morrow night...
and a long one on sunday for sure...
Smile

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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
I don't want my girlfriend to fail ..
           I am not onna marry a failed law student..
            After all I am a respected professor'
aww.. this gave a big smile on my faceEmbarrassed

Do u get it??
Or I should explain u in some other manner..
U know what all I can do??
Ela ans Sanjana: Mr. Professor !! u are in trouble now'
i love these lines LOLespecially vinnie's

Zara kuch keh diya iss ke make up ke bare mein
Aur isne toh bichare mac hi class hi le li..
Poor Guy!!! Iss pagal chudail ke changul mein phas gaya..

END r more cute in ur ss, than the showLOL
waiting for the thriller part n as keerthu said , ROMANCE, cuteness toh already haiTongue

thanks fr the pm


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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhaakshu

I don't want my girlfriend to fail ..
           I am not onna marry a failed law student..
            After all I am a respected professor'
aww.. this gave a big smile on my faceEmbarrassed

Do u get it??
Or I should explain u in some other manner..
U know what all I can do??
Ela ans Sanjana: Mr. Professor !! u are in trouble now'
i love these lines LOLespecially vinnie's

Zara kuch keh diya iss ke make up ke bare mein
Aur isne toh bichare mac hi class hi le li..
Poor Guy!!! Iss pagal chudail ke changul mein phas gaya..

END r more cute in ur ss, than the showLOL
waiting for the thriller part n as keerthu said , ROMANCE, cuteness toh already haiTongue

thanks fr the pm




aww!! thanx a lot for such a good comment...

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