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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Woww. . . .
Awsome concpt. . . .
Awsome intro. . . .
Superb c.s. . . .
And ,
super awsome prologue. . . . . . .
1s part jaldi update krna. . .
Egarly waiting 4 it. . .
And do pm me wen u update. . . . .

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Kriti Arora

@Grey-licious

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

AWSM START k

UPDATE SOON

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

the beginning ws intrsting...

luved it.

plz update soon.

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

__ Next Day __
Rey was in the place where Kriya lived. He actually didnt knew that 2-3 house more and there would be her house. They happened to bump again. "Arhhh this girl. Not again!" thought rey. "Tum!!" exclaimed kriya.
"Yes me any problem?" he reported back.
"Yahan kya kar rahe ho?" she questioned.
"Charity ke liye aaya hun. Par ab mood nahi hai huh!"
"Oh hello Mr. whateva no one need your bl**dy charity over here kay ? So it would be better if you leave this place right now."
"Rukna bhi kise hai!" he said rolling his eyes. "... waise bhi jahan is type ke uncivilised log rehte hon wahan kaun charity de huh!"
"oh hello what do you mean haan?"
"I mean what you listened!"
"You bl*ody..."
"what me bloo*y haan?"
"Tum kehna chahte ho main uncivilised hoon? oh please I'm far more better than you... arey kisi maa ki taki ki tarah jail se nahi chuti hoon! Ek meaningful life jeete hain tumhaari tarah nahi ki..."
"ki kya han?"
"tumhaari tarah galiyyon mein awaara nahi ghumte!"
"oh puh-leash!"
He stared at her in disbelief. She was expecting an actor... an ACTOR to walk on roads for nothing?!
"I surely am not interested in staying here now!" He spoke and left while she shouted from back.
"Haan - haan jaao yahan se aur waapis laaut ke mat aana"
ew clenched his fist and left from that place. Wasn't he supposed to take revenge from her? Arhh this girl was surely getting on his nerves! Edited by abhiyakreya - 11 years ago

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

nice update
loved it
was awesome

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@shivi_reylover

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

awsui! will love to c rey in dis charcater!

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-Shravzz-

@-Shravzz-

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice concept...
And awesome update as well...😊
Loved it...😃

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annu

@_sweetannu_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

fabulous update.
Kriyaansh fight is superb.
Loved it ❤️

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesomme...

concept...

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

IF-Stunnerz

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

@abhiyakreya: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊

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