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superb yaar loving it more n moreSmile

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Maanvi requested him..he turned towards her with raising his eyebrows and put his hands on his hip..
V-with attitude-oh..request?..are u joking..tum chahti ho ki main viren ko vapas le aau aur tum mujhe apne father ki madad se arrest karva do..pagal dikhta hu main tumhe..?
M-dekho..agar mujhe asa kuch karna hota to bahot pahele kar diya hota..now plz isse pahele ki koi aur problem ho plz viren ko..
He cut her sentence..
V-tum dara rahi ho mujhe..virat vadhera ko?..hey miss Jo bhi ho tum main darne nahi vala..waise bhi tumne Jo meri bahen k saath kiya hai na tum yahi deserve karti ho u cheap girl..
Now maanvi getting angry on him..
She abt to opened her mouth when she heared virens voice from behind her..she turned and looked at him..he closed the car door and walked towards them..maanvi removed her chunri from her face and walked towards him..she hugged him..
M-viren..
Virat and jeevika also come near to them..dabbu still in car..
Viren pulled her away and looked at her..he saw mangalshutra around her neck..he looked at her with shock..
Vn-maanvi..ye kaise..tum ne ye shadi..she looked down..
M-mere paas aur koi rasta nahi tha viren..papa ki heath bigad rahi thi aur agar aaj kisi bhi vajehse se unki flight miss ho jati to sab barbad ho jata..unki treatment me deri ho jati aur firse appoints lene me bhi kafi waqt lag jata aur fir tum jante ho ki humare paas itna waqt nahi hai..main papa ki health ko lekar risk nahi le sakti thi..
Tears slip from her eyes..viren hugged her..virat and jeevika looked at them with confusion..viren looked at them..he pulls maanvi little away but still in his arms..he looked at them with anger..
Vn-tum logo ne ye sahi nahi kiya..apni ek stupid se plan ki vajehse tum logo ne maanvi ki life barbad kar Di..
V-dekho viren tum jante nahi ho asi ladkiyon ko..ye sirf money k piche hoti hai varna ye batao ye jante hua ki tum kisi aur se pyar karte ho woh tumse shadi kyu karegi..aur mujhe apne kiye pr koi guilty feel nahi ho raha..she deserved it..u cannot see that?
Vn-angrily-just shut up okey..tum jante kya ho maanvi k bare me Jo ye sab bol rahe ho?..maanvi nahi main ye shadi karna chahta tha.. Virat and jeevika get shocked..
-woh bechari to bar bar ye piche hat rahi thi..aur ye shadi woh money k liye nahi apne papa k liye kar rahi thi..us papa k liye jinhe cancer hai Jo chhahte the ki America Jane se pahele unki beti ka future safe karke jaye..taki jab woh America apni treatment karvaye to unhe apne vapis na ane pr uski chinta n ho..
Both looked at maanvi who crying..
V-maanvi ek computer engineer educated ladki hai Jo ek achchi salary leti hai shayad mujse jyada kamati hai..use mere money se kya kaam..
Just then maanvi come near to him...
M-viren plz abhi in sab k liye waqt nahi hai..flight ka time ho raha hai..plz chalo aur unhe kuch mat batana sahi waqt pr main khud sab bata dungi plz..
Vn-thik hai..he abt to leave but he stop and returned..
Vn-main kabhi tumlogo maaf nahi karunga..aaj tumhari is galti ki vajehse uncle ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta tha..tum logo ne maanvi ki life barbad kardi jisne mujhse engaged hone k bavjud pichle 2 saal se mere pyar ko dhundh ne me meri madad karti rahi..mere liye humari shadi ko talti rahi..aaj tum dono ne use bahot hurt kiya hai..
And he takes maanvi in car and drove towards airport..here jeevika and virat looked at eachother..they felt really guilty..
J-virat ye humne kya kar diya..viren mujhse naraz ho k chala gaya..she start crying..
V-jeevika..isme tumse jyada meri galti hai..Maine us ladki ko galat samja aur socha ki isi tarah use sabak mil jayega kyuki uske paas koi proof nahi hoga ki uski shadi mujhse hui hai..ye sab mera plan tha..tum chinta mat karo main viren se baat karunga..sab thik kar dunga..chalo..
And they also went for airport...
After hour..
Viren and maanvi come out from airport after met her family..maanvi try to controlled her tears..viren takes her towards car..they reached at parking..they saw virat jeevika and dabbu stood near their car..viren looked away in anger..maanvi hold his hand and walked towards jeevika..she gave virens hand in her hand and smile..virat and jeevika shocked with this..
Vn-maanvi tum..
He cut by her..
M-viren plz..har bar tumne mere liye kiya hai ab my turned..she looked at jeevika..
M-main janti meri vajehse tumhe bahot problem hui i m sorry..but main aaj tumhe tumhara viren sop rahi hoo..plz usse naraz mat hona tum to janti ho ki woh jsse bhi apna manta hai uski bahot karta hai..isi liye usne tumhe dat diya..lekin plz use maaf kardo aur mujhe bhi..yakin mano hum sirf ek achche dost hai..ye Mr.lawyer sirf tumse pyar karta hai sirf tumse..
She smiled..tears sliped from jeevikas eyes..virat also surprise with her..
Maanvi looked at viren-hey Mr.lawyer ab chale..uncle aunty ko unki real daughter in law se Jo milvana hai..chalo woh ghar pahoch gaye honge..aur waise bhi mujhe in kapdo me ghabrahat ho rahi hai kuch Der in me rahi to pakka gir jaungi..laughed

Edited by Niaksharma - 25 December 2012 at 2:45am

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woooww...Big smile  that was just amazing... Smile Smile  keep it up dear... Clap Clap i just loved it... Big smile have read the story in one go... the concept is all together very different... now there will be more fun as virat has fallen in love with manvi... but i think now there will be a twist in the tale... let virat reach home n then i suppose there will be a twist... plss swthrt continue soon... and if possible pm me... Smile

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
pls update soon... it has made me more restless now...

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by naina927

<font color="#006633" size="2">woooww...Big smile that was just amazing... SmileSmilekeep it up dear... ClapClapi just loved it... Big smilehave read the story in one go... the concept is all together very different... now there will be more fun as virat has fallen in love with manvi... but i think now there will be a twist in the tale... let virat reach home n then i suppose there will be a twist... plss swthrt continue soon... and if possible pm me... Smile</font>

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first thanks...but its not my concept its my forum friend lekharinika_2k's concept...she gave me short out line to write this...
And second i can't pm any one due to some problem of my phone...sorry...

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Hey
i read it in one go n itz amazng...
Wud luv to read more n dat too soon.

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Loved the update.Loved manvi yaar.So sweet , calm and composed.Loved Viren too.awesome update yaar

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Great update...
Soon virat is gonna fall in love wid maanvi
Continue soon

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