Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note (Page 4)

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MAANVI met with her family and come out to in parking where virat jeevika and dabbu waited for them...
She walked towards jeevika with holding virens hand..
She gave his hand in her hand and smiled...
M-plz..mere friend se naraz mat hona..woh bas meri kuch jyada hi care karta hai isiliye tumhe dat diya..lekin sirf ek dost k naate..pyar to woh sirf tumse karta hai..take care..aur plz aaj Jo kuch bhi hua use yahi bhool jao..Hume tumhare parents ko sab batana hoga..chale...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 24 December 2012 at 10:57am

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PART-4
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In marriage day virat make plan with his friend dabbu for get viren out of this marriage..he know that its police officers daughter and lawyers sons marriage..if any one doubted on them they put in big trouble..
Here they Decided that marriage happened in temple..all are ready for marriage..here in car maanvi reached at mandir with her family..she still not happy with this Marriage..she decided to back out from this marriage..they reached at temple..she saw there only few relatives and police officers are present..they are come little early..viren and his family on the way..viren come in his Owen decorated car..maanvi took courage and walked towards his father..she abt to reached at them when see saw his father felt little weak..she rush towards him and make him sit on chair..her father looked at her little angel who dressed in red bridle outfeat with her mothers jewellery..he smiled..
Md-mannu..tu kitni pyari lag rahi hai beta..
Tears comes in their eyes..maanvi hugged his father..she stop herself for hurting him..
After some time virens family reached at temple..virens car also follow them..they saw viren come out from car with shahera on his face..all took him in mandir..
Their family members takes both of them in middle of temple when all rituals will happened..maanvi come in front of him..her face covered with her chunri..all stood around them..pandit ji gave them jaimal and they put it around eachothers neck..all clapped..they sited in front of fire..just then virens phone sliped from his pocket which fall near maanvis feet..she bring it up and abt to gave him then she realized that its not virens phone..she looked towards him..she noticed that he is not viren..she opened his phone worriedly..and checked it..
FLASH BACK-
Few minits ago..
Viren followed his fathers car with distance..suddenly one car come in front of his car..he immediately puss break and come out from car..he abt to knock on other cars window some one covered his mouth with chloroform filled cloth..he get unconscious and virat take his plase and went viren with his friend dabbu to other temple..when jeevika waiting for them..virat knows if madan or virens father knows abt this they surely throw all police army behind them so he take his plan..he can do any thing for his sister..
FLASH BACK END...
Here virat worried..he didn't know what to happened next even he didn't run from there..
After it..pandit ji start all rituals one by one..pinky done their ghath bandhan..then madan and pinky done kanyadan..then they take 7 round around fire..at the end virat hesitately put sindoor in her mang and mangalshutra around her neck...
Pandit ji declare them at husband and wife and told them to take blessing from elders..they walked towards them...
Here dabbu takes viren at other temple..after some time viren get conscious..he felt his head heavy..he opened his eyes and found him self in car..he come out from car and found himself near another temple..he turned and get shocked..he saw jeevika in front of him..he runs towards her and hugged her..after few minits they broked the hug..viren asked her abt all this..she told him abt their plan..viren get angry on them..
Vn-ye kya kiya tum logo ne..oh shit..maanvi..
J-tumhe abhi bhi uski padi hai jisne tumhe mujhse chinna chaha..
Vn-just shut up..tum soch bhi nahi sakti tum logo ne uske liye kitni badi musibat ladi hai..mujhe jald se jald vaha pahochna hoga..aur tum bhi mere saath chalogi..he said angrily and take her with him and drove car towards marriage plase..as fast as he can..
In temple-
maanvi and virat get blessing from all..all decided to went for airport..virat confused with this..air port?..but why7..its time for madan and pinky's flight but he was not aware for this..they all sat in their Owen car and left for air port and gave some space to new wedded couple..no one can realize that its not viren and maanvis marriage its virat and maanvis marriage..at the end maanvi walked towards their car..maanvi abt to opened car door but she stopped..she realize he follow her..virat thought its right time to talked to her..he abt to say when..
M-main janti aap viren nahi ho..aap apna shahera hata sakte ho..she said sorely
he shocked with this..he removed it from his head and walked towards her..she turned towards him still covering her face..she looked at him through red coloured chunri..he clear his throat..
V-tum..main..i mean kaise?
M-aap ka phone..jispe aap k friend aur jeevika k msg hai..she gave him..he took it and smile with attitude..
V-oh..to tum sab janti phir bhi ye shadi hone di?...wow kitni cheap ho yaar tum..viren na sahi to koi aur amir bakara?..main tumhare bichare parents ki vajehse chup tha aur tum..ek ladki hoke..shit men..he turned in anger..
Tears sliped from her eyes..
M-aap ne mere mummy papa k liye nahi khud ko bachane k liye ye sab kia..she said strate..aur aapko mere bare Jo sochna hai soch sakte ho..lekin plz viren jaha bhi use airport le aiye..i request u

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