Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys...
Its as writter my third story...but the concept of this story came from our one of the forum friend...its lekharani_2k...
I m just write it...
Hope u liked it...
This is not a different concept u all know this concept very well..but difference is only that it contain EHMMBH character...its virmaan story but it has contain virika too...
Hope i an able to write this...

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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for ur story.wen ur going to continue story after marriage pls continue soon.😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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VIRAT ruse towards his car after his concert..he sit in car and left his bodyguards to stopped his crazy fans from reaching him..he ordered driver to start car and drive as fast as he can..he instructed him to be ready as he finished his concert they leave for chandighadh..he took breath as his car touched highway..
He come Delhi for his concert..he want to reached home as fast as he can..he can not wait for facing her..he want to tell her his feelings for her as soon as he can..he become impatient..its week when he reached at Delhi for early rehsal of his concert..its make him his love..his life..he didn't live without her..he used with her..her every gesture which she done for him..her smile make him smile..her present make him relax..past one year was most important time for him..like priceless...he feel his heart get wired from last few months but he didn't know the reason..but now he know why his heart go against to him from last few months..
His eyes looking at road or side views but his heart just admiring her..his love..his life..and his WIFE...maanvi sorry..MRS MAANVI VIRAT VADHERA..
Yes they are marriade...actually its 1 year now..tomorrow has their first marriage anniversary..when they bounded in this relationship..they didn't know eachother..even not saw eachother..he saw her first time in her marriage which at the end become their marriage...its mistake for them not destiny..but now for him its destiny not mistake..its her marriage not him..he married with her unknowingly..he kidnapped her fiance VIREN from their marriage and take his plase in their marriage...he smiled on his foolish step..
But now He want to tool her in his arm and told her that he loved her..he cannot stay away from her..not even one moment..he took out her anklets which gifted her by his dadaji..she returned him it before 1 week..he didn't want to take it from her but she instat him..he felt something wrong in her behaviour from few weeks but he didn't asked her for reason..at that time he know that in one corner of his heart has some feeling for her but he scared it for expressed in front of her..but now he Decided to tell her that he loves her...
He smile...
He wisheper...
V-I LOVE U...i am coming but this just 4 u...
And again he looked at her anklets which he holding in his hand...
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he lost in flash back...
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its part now...
Real story start 1 year ago its come in next part...
Hope u liked it...
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character sketching...
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MAANVI'S SIDE-
MAANVI-LEAD WITH COMPUTER ENGINEER WORKING IN MUMBAI AND STAY WITH HER SMALL FAMILY
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MADAN SHARMA-HER FATHER AND POLICE OFFICER
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PINKY-HER MOTHER AND SIMPLE HOUSE WIFE
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VIREN-HER FIANCE IN PAST AND HER FRIEND...HE HAS ALSO HIS FATHER AND MOTHER..HIS FATHER IS LAWYER.
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VIRAT'S SIDE-
VIRAT-LEAD AND SINGER
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SWAMINI-HIS MOTHER..NOT EMOTIONAL BCZ HIS HUSBAND LEFT HER WHEN SHE IS PREGNANT WITH VIRAT FOR OTHER ONE..BUT HE LOVE HIS SON...
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INDAR VADHERA-HIS CHACHU AND BUSINESS MEN..VERY LOVING AND FUN FILLED GUY..LIKE SERIAL
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KADAMBARI VADHERA-HIS CHACHI SAME AS SERIAL...
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JEEVIKA-THEIR DAUGHTER AND HIS COSINE...
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SHLOK-THEIR SON..HIS LITTLE COSINE..
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DADAJI-BUSINESS MAN..AS SERIAL..BUT HE NEVER AGAINST HIS MUSIC CAREER..
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ILIEYANA-HIS GIRLFRIEND IN PAST...
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OTHER INCLUDED WITH STORY...
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m first its awesome
continue soon..
And plss continue ur other update.virmaan after marriage plsss...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey awesome update.. I really liked the concept.. Please continue soon.. Cant wait to know what happened in the past.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Story Part 1 is Very Interesting...Continue soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice start
plz cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing start
pls cont soon
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V-PAGAL HO GAI HO KYA?..TUMNE SUICIDE KARNE K BARE MAIN SOCHA BHI KAISE?..ANGRILY
J-SOBBING..I LOVE HIM...VIRAT...MAIN NAHI RAHE SAKTI USKE BINA...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..awesome..comtinue soon.. 😊 ..interesting..