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AnSh FF: NO GREATER LOVE: Chapter 15 p42 12/06 (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Wonderful writing Sheena!

You have the art of capturing a reader's attention down pat...

Bravo!
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Manshi

Hmmm... Very nice part, the story is going in interesting way.. Well I like ur scenes changing style... Its like i m not reading but actuly watching... Its fantasic...,the ansh scens nd thought of scene was superb, nd ya.. I remind u I like Mahi ki Lovestory...

Thanks..AnSh is and will remain the focus of the story but as a writer I like the fun element that Mahi's story bringsTongue

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by VerboseG

Wonderful writing Sheena!

You have the art of capturing a reader's attention down pat...

Bravo!

Thanks for your appreciationEmbarrassed 

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Sheena..
 
Read both parts together...
 
Awesome updates...
 
Loved the way you described Shiv's emotions reg Anandi in the last update...Embarrassed
 
Hmmm...The suspense is building up...Cool
 
Do update soon...
 
 
 
P.S :
 
What's the matter? Why is everyone so tense? Shiv asked sitting down as he reached for his tea with one hand and the paper with the other. As he had a sip of his tea, he unfolded the newspaper and saw the picture on the front page, spurted his tea out and started to cough.
 
I can SOOO Visualise Shiv here...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Edited by adi2512 - 26 December 2012 at 10:14am
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vasanthimrao

Rea both the parts together.. Its superb, I too am not getting why jagya turned out to be that evilConfused anyways, loving this story...

The reasons for Jagya's negative streak shall perhaps be clearer as the story unfolds

thanks for liking it so far
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adi2512

Sheena..
 
Read both parts together...
 
Awesome updates...
 
Loved the way you described Shiv's emotions reg Anandi in the last update...Embarrassed
 
Hmmm...The suspense is building up...Cool
 
Do update soon...
 
 
P.S :
 
What's the matter? Why is everyone so tense? Shiv asked sitting down as he reached for his tea with one hand and the paper with the other. As he had a sip of his tea, he unfolded the newspaper and saw the picture on the front page, spurted his tea out and started to cough.
 
I can SOOO Visualise Shiv here...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Thanks..will try and uodate soon

I could visualize him too while I wrote it
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Nice update sheena...

its definitely a page turner...cannot wait to read the next update...
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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pri_kinmuk

Nice update sheena...

its definitely a page turner...cannot wait to read the next update...

I am so glad you like it so much..will try and update soon...

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