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AnSh FF: NO GREATER LOVE: Chapter 15 p42 12/06 (Page 2)

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Whoa What a start!!!!!!!!! StarStarStar  I have already become fan of this story...plz continue soon by the way Hello I am Tista and Welcome to this forum Hug

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
What an interesting start, can't wait to read further...

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone for all the appreciation. There is nothing more heartening for a writer.The next part will be a continuation of a prologue after which the story will go into a flashback. I will try to post as often as I can considering work and universityEmbarrassed

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Sheena...!
 
Good to meet you...
 
Thrilling start...Cool
Do continue...Big smile
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Great Sheena...a thriller...love it...hope u can update it as often as possibleEmbarrassed
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Thanks to the encouragement I have received from all of you, I have decided to post part (ii) of the prologue from where the story will go into flashback. For those of you who do not wish to see villains in AnSh's life, i apologize in advance. I also apologize if my writing is not up to the mark. 

Shiv jumped out of bed and looked out of the window but he couldn't see anything. It was so dark and raining so heavily. He wanted to shout for Anandi to come to him but if he did so the entire haveli would be awake and everyone would worry. He would have to go and look for her on his own and ask her not to go wandering around.  Did she not realize how it hurt him not to find her beside him? Shiv ran down the stairs in the darkness not worrying about tripping. He hoped to see a small light somewhere notifying him of her presence. He turned to go towards the kitchen convincing himself that she would be there. All she might have needed was some water; the jug in their room had been empty.  There was no one in the kitchen.  Anandi kahaan chali gayi tum?, he sighed. Perhaps she had gone to choti maa's room. But if he knocked on the door to find out then choti maa would wake up and she would worry.  Shiv went back to his room and noticed his phone. 3 missed calls from an unknown number.  His heart started to beat faster as his phone flashed with the same number.  He answered the phone then, his hands trembling:  Hello, Mr. Shivraj Shekhar? This is Jhanvi, one of the doctors at City Hospital. We found your number in your wife's phone and we have her listed as Anandi Shekhar. Your brother asked us to contact you; gave us your number.  Your wife was brought here an hour ago in critical condition. She was in a head on collision with two other cars it seems. Your brother was driving. He is injured too but he will be alright it seems. However, I cannot say the same about your wife. Can you come to the hospital at once?

Shiv stood frozen as the lady on the phone hung up. He didn't know what to do? He had heard someone mention his brother? Mahi? Where had they gone at this time of the night? Where had she asked him to take her? Why had Mahi not said anything to him? Why had Anandi not asked him to take her wherever she wanted to go? Had she gone to see dadiji? Was that where they had been going at this hour? Questions raced through this mind as he stood frozen on the spot. He shook his head and wiped the tears that had fallen from his face. This was not the time to think; he had to be with his Anandi.  Shiv started to look for his car keys wondering where he had put them. Everything seemed a blur, all he could think about was what he would do if anything happened to Anandi. He kept wiping the tears that were falling and finally found his keys, took his wallet and his phone. He left a note on the table for his parents and ran out to his car in the rain.

Mahi was inconsolable. He kept asking the nurses how his bhabhi was, asking if his brother had come. It was all his fault. If anything happened to his bhabhi, his brother would be shattered.  Why was it not him in Anandi's place. He should have been critical. At least then his brother would still have his Anandi.  Bhabhi did not deserve this. She was so amazing and she loved his bhaiyya so much. She had been trying to save him and his reputation. Mahi closed his eyes unable to bear these thoughts any longer, hoping and praying to the gods to save the one person who had become his brother's lifeline.

'Anandi Shekhar', Shiv stated as he ran towards the reception. 'ICU Room 2, 4th floor.' Shiv ran towards the elevators and up to the ICU. From the glass doors that opened into the ICU, Shiv could see his petite wife surrounded by doctors and machines and activity. He put his hand onto the door as if to feel her numbed by the pain he felt inside him. Continuing to stare in a daze, he looked behind when he felt a hand on his shoulder.

For the rest of his life, Mahi would remember this moment clearly. He would remember his strong, resilient brother look at him with pained torturous eyes, looking lost, pointing towards the room trying to say words that wouldn't form. Mahi would remember the shattered state his brother was in as the actuality of where Anandi was hit him hard and he staggered to the ground. It would have seemed that night, to the unknown that the younger brother was the more responsible more in control one as he sat next to the older brother, talking to him, asking him to keep hoping, and keep talking. Perhaps because the younger one too was scared that if anyone else approached them at that moment it would be with bad news, and also if he couldn't get his older brother to speak now then Shiv would sink into dismal abyss of silence and hopelessness he would never come out of. He was the reason behind the state his brother and bhabhi were in; if only he had not agreed to take Anandi to see her conniving blackmailing villainous ex-husband. Thus, for the rest of his life Mahi would blame himself for the pain that the brother most dear to him was undergoing.

Shiv looked at the glass doors trying to read the words written outside the doors in big bold blue letters INTEN...INTEN...but his eyes swam with tears, He could hear Mahi talking, asking him to say something but all he could think about was Anandi and the joy she had brought into his life over the past few months before and after their wedding. He rested his head back onto the wall and closed his eyes,and her beautiful face etched deep in his heart and his memories was all he could see. 



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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
CryCryCry
Aaawww...Sheena...
 
Amazing it is...Star
 
I could feel the pain Shiv must be undergoing...and Mahi's emotions...
 
Do update soon...and pls make Anandi get well soon...


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 badia hai!Wink... it's really good...lekin yaar hume itne dukhi mat karo...isiliye  anandi ke Ex-husbendWinkWink ka sahi ilaz hona chahiye taqi hum sab ka dil khus ho jaeeSmileSmile

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