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Sharon Woods - SwaRon OS (Page 2)

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Beautiful work sudha but then writing is your forte.Embarrassed Yep you have fared very very well and made us sad but then life is always bed of roses na. Broken HeartYou write awesome, for a moment when I read that today is his birthday and she is going to make it special and was expecting a romantic  wala update, but i was completly mistaken it ended up in a sad note but yet it had all the positivity of swayam. Well done sudha it is really a treat to read your updates.

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged
it doesnt seem lyk this is the first tym ur writing a sad OS Tongue...its just so perfect Big smile Clap...
beautiful OS


Edited by sanj.98 - 22 December 2012 at 1:26am

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged
awesome OS though it was a sad one you wrote it beautifullyThumbs Up
i liked it!!

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Awesome os
When I start reading this os i thought it will be romantic os as it was his birthday.Sharon's state of mind was beautifully described.
Waiting for happy wala os..:)

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 2:17am | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
R E S  E R V E D. 
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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 2:46am | IP Logged
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Sudha, This is the first Time I reserved on ur work n dat is coz its d first tym I got one of d starting pagesLOL

I always had to say dis, I love the way you write.

You describe every lil movement and emotion so well dat one can actually witness it.

Even wen a scene has complete silence, it is never awkward to read.

I loved this OS so much, her pain and her guilt, I admit i could feel it all, and her reactions, I mean i m really at loss of words..

I dont care if it was a Sad one, as far as it turns out to be this Awesome..I wil read it again n again..I loved dis way tooo muchh!! Big smile


Edited by sweetangelpayal - 25 December 2012 at 2:35am

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Hey Sudha...Hug

That was another brilliant piece of work from your side...though it was sad...but the masterfully depicted story of love left me numb...i believe in fairy tales...but i am a sucker for platonic love...love beyond life...immortal love...love after mortal body...love of souls...that's what this beautiful OS of yours depicted...love beyond life...

Her love ...her promise...her struggle...her tussle...so brilliantly described...i am at loss of words...her pain...pain ran through the veins of this OS...pain of loosing love..

Have you ever, tried stopping your tears? Have you ever had to hold back your tears from pouring down? The pain, the cries from her heart soon hit, her head as she felt the pinch, she pressed her lips really hard to gather courage to keep up to his promise.


.The dance...was beyond any words of appreciation...you depicted her pain through that dance...so beautifully...her pain..her love...her fear...


The conclusion to this amazing piece of work was majestic...the love of their souls...took over ..mere human bodies...she smiled through his touch...his presence...in the thin air around her...Humans die...love lives...true...


They say humans are fickle, they are lost in time like a speck of dust easy to be erased on the other hand the memories and emotions is what stays.


Beyond any words of appreciation...keep showering such brilliant stuff ...u are just AMAZING...Merry Christmas dear...may almighty bless u with all the happiness...

ps-thanx for the PM ananya Embarrassed



Edited by deep_Tanha - 23 December 2012 at 12:27pm

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