YUMMY MISTAKE...!!! (Gift for ADI Sir BD @ 144) (Page 35)

Athene Viewbie

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Oh that was great GD and Neeme! Too good...loved the ending especially. I could almost see it happening. Wink

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maggi.masala IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 1:01pm | IP Logged was marvellous
I mean really it was such a brilliantly balanced many calculations and complexities were there...ufff
N I specially loved the scene where abhi sir gets caught by ACP sir...LOL can really visualise every thing truck journey, continuous work at bearaue...
N last but not the least poor abhi sir...treat at taj...LOL
Thank you Dada and Neeme for your rocking story
Waiting for more

Edited by maggi.masala - 24 February 2013 at 1:03pm

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Aman_Aditya IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 5:02am | IP Logged

Edited by LoverofAdi - 25 February 2013 at 5:02am
khushi.gupta123 Newbie

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
superb part GD n neemeClap... DAYA done His Aar ya Paar stuff with Scratching Himself with Juices Can...  it was so awsome!!!LOLMujh say Bari Tension Teri life mein kya hay'. haan'it's so cute...EmbarrassedACP: acha magar Us ka Right Hand tou Buri tarah Zakhmi hay na' (tease) aur jahan tak Meri malumat hay DAYA Right handed hay'ROFL
GD u r perfect at writing emotions...lovely ending to an amazing story...loved the convo between the trio.Clap...what should I say... Its just a wonderful story... Thumbs UpClap

can you provide me links of your previous PH??? Big smile

Edited by khushi.gupta123 - 27 February 2013 at 2:08am

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Forfriend Senior Member

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Ohhh so finally pata chal gaya ki Abhijeet did all this... yaar yeh daya sir bhi na... kya jarurat thi khud ko hurt karne ki

chalo but the balance between DUO movement other team work was good... specially the way you show girls member of team is nice... the concern of ACP sir towards them is required to be added which you did

Vivek was good in his job... yup he too good and do his job completely... I am missing him so much...

the way ACP sir shows his anger/hurt to Abhijeet is nice...

Daya sir's naughtiness and when he gets involved in case that time the way he handle all things,,,,,,,, wow he is too good yaar

and most important the story line and whole idea... the way it connect to old case... was superb...

BH just amazing Hug

very nice plot Neeme Hug 

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Reshh16 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 February 2013 at 12:55am | IP Logged
The trurth is im short of words..!!!!!
What a story!!! My rating is 5StarStarStarStarStar... Excellent work!!!ClapClap The scenes in the underground was quite funny.. an the beginning when abhijeet hugs daya with teary eyesStarStar..and the scene where he squeezes abhi's hand..StarStar..i'lll keep talking abt it the whole day i think... Both of u..NEEME DI and GD...HATS OFF TO YOU!!!!StarStarClap..Both of you brought out the essence of FRIENDSHIP!!! I wish u were a story writer in CID crew...Mindblowing!!!!..

TO NEEME DISmileBig smile AND GDSmileBig smile
THANK A LOOOT FOR SUCH A WONDERFUL,TOUCHING AND AWESOME STORY!!!ClapClapClapClapClap.Enjoyed reading it to the core!!! Infact just for reading the next part i logged in to IF...And it dint go waste...

Thank you so much once againHug!!! ALL THE BESTThumbs UpHug!! Waiting for more stories!!SmileThumbs Up

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rosepink. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 February 2013 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
wow great story neeme nd GDWinkClap
yaar aftr readng all the above reviews,mere paas kehne ko kuch bcha hi nhi,
same 2 sameWink
chalo neeme nd GD kaam pe lag jao,readers waitng 4 ur nxt storySmile
shreya, maggi, forfriend, khushi nd raaz ne humari taraf se sb kch keh diya..Smile

Edited by rosepink. - 26 February 2013 at 11:50pm

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khushi.gupta123..optimist..gadhadada IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 February 2013 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Wow Neeme di and GD. Clap Clap U both are rocking. Clap
Very Intersting Wonderful,Touching and Awesome story.    Smile   
I Like these lines so much...Smile
Abhijeet : Mujh say Bari Tension Teri life mein kya hay...   LOL

Daya : haan, pr Dieting kay baad tou Khaon ga na…    LOL
Abhijeet : hey Bhagwaan…

Abhijeet : chalo RAAVAN nay kaha
Meray Laadly Cheeranjeev nay
buht aaram kr liya…
ab thora Kaam bhi karay…   LOL

Daya : haan ye batao Khany mein kya hay?   LOL

Abhijeet : haan sir, bas dimagh he mein nahi aaya...
Daya (murmur) : Dimagh hoga tou ayey ga na...   LOL
And some more... Smile

Thank you so much once again
loved the ending especially... Clap Clap Smile
Bechare abhi sir...   LOL

Keep writing more and more    Thumbs Up    Smile   Smile

For our DUO... Smile
Duo ki doshi to hai bari nirali...
Lagti ye duniya ko payari...
Sunaye hame ye apni kahani...
Jaan se bhi payari yenhe apni yaari...

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