YUMMY MISTAKE...!!! (Gift for ADI Sir BD @ 144) (Page 2)

mano86 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Congrats on ur new PH Big smile
hope to see more from u Smile
good luck Thumbs Up

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PurpleRiot IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Congratulations Dada! I'm extremely happy for you...can't express in words. I still remember your first PH and would love to mention the then edited title, "My try - Reflection". This was the first ever story I had commented on.

More than one and half year has passed away since then. Now, I'm addicted to your stories. Alas I haven't been able to read your current stories but I'll save them all and read when I'm not here. They will help me cope through the circumstances Smile

I have one suggestion for you. Please compose a sad poetry, if you have time.

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Aman_Aditya IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
hi CIDians mai chahta hoon ki aap sabhi CIDians
Thread :- CID going good? par apni apni raye pesh kare.
ye kaisa sawal hai.
issi jyada best show pure brahamand (universe) me koi nahi ho sakta.
agar ye serial bhadiya nahi hota to:-
1. to ye 15 saal tak nahi chal paata.
2. SONY TV isse accept nahi karta
3. SONY TV par iske promo's nahi dikhaye jate
4. SONY TV ise band kar deta.
5. log (peoples) abhi tak comment nahi karte
6. Naye threads open nahi hote.
8. iski rank nahi badhti
9. ise votes nahi milte.
10. CID VEERTA AWARDS shuru nahi hote.
11. ye FACEBOOK par itna popular nahi hota.
12. aaj bhi iss serial ke characters par comment nahi likhe jate.
13. ye tv news channel par nahi dikhaye jate
14. is serial ka interview nahi hota
15. iska naam Guiness Book of  World Records me nahi aata.
                  etc. etc. etc.
ye sab abhi bhi jari (certified) hona iss serial ka bhadiya hone ka sabot, praman pesh karta hai.

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
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neeme IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Congrats GD Hug

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neeme IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Hello Guys, How are u All??? First A Big Congrats to GD for new Production House... Jo ka kamyabi ki seri char raha hai meri waja sa b ROFL.. Naa... U r true Deserve for this Success GD... Big smile 
So, Guys here I m with the Very next part of our Combine Production... Hope u r enjoying this...and will Enjoy this one as well..

Here Team with the help of Staff trying to shift ABHIJEET to DR. ASHOKE suggested Mental Asylum' its really Difficult to handle ABHIJEET and DAYA both' He grabbed ABHIJEET from His Waist and trying to pull Him towards with Tears and Screams as'

DAYA: nahi ABHIJEET' (to team n staff) Tum log hut jao' main ABHIJEET ko nahi jany dun ga' (rash) Tum logun kay liyey wo bhalay kuch bhi ho per wo Mera Bhai hay' main' SACHIN hut jao' VIVEK mera aik Jhanper paray ga na ooper pohanch jao gay' jao''''. Hato'

ACP was trying to Relax Him but right now He was not in his Senses, He was trying hard to take ABHIJEET out from the Hospital by anymeans and if He has His Gun now, He fulfills His wish but His Gun was at home'

On another side ABHIJEET trying hard to pull out Himself from DAYA's grip' He was hitting DAYA continuously with punches and Slaps with rash and anger but DAYA did not bother about His Punches and Slaps' right now His Mission is to Save ABHIJEET and take Him out but as ABHIJEET personal attempts and then Team and Staff extra effort'. ACP Sir still arguing with DAYA to leave ABHIJEET and in this ABHIJEET pushed DAYA so hardly' He slipped and His head hit with Wall'

Team and Staff don't lose this Chance and take ABHIJEET out immediately' here ACP and RAHUL grabbed DAYA who was still Screaming with'

DAYA: ABHI'''''''''. Nahi''

He fell in ACP and RAHUL arms, his eyes gazed the spot and now starting Blurring and his mind thinking it's the last moment He saw His Buddy named ABHI'

Here ACP and RAHUL takes DAYA to Residence' they trying to Sooth Him still DAYA is in Teary and painful state' ACP trying to Relax Him by saying'

ACP: dekho DAYA' ye ABHIJEET kay liyey Behtar hay, Usy wahan Treatment'

DAYA (interrupts): Sir wo Pagal nahi hay'

RAHAL (harsh): tou kya hay' haan' DAYA tumhara Dard theek' magar Tum kub tak haqeeqat say nazar churao gay'

DAYA (still in teary tone): yaar wo bus Mujh say Gussa'

RAHUL (rash): kub tak Gussa ho ga aur kyun Gussa karay ga'

DAYA: Main nay Us say Chupaya jo' bataya nahi'

ACP: DAYA, kya pehlay Tum nay ABHIJEET say kabhi kuch nahi Chupaya' haan' Tum khud socho' PURVI (DAYA look at Him in shock n then down his head) (ACP added) chupaya tha na' Correct' phir'

DAYA: magar Sir, Us kay baad Main nay kabhi ABHI say kuch nahi'

RAHUL (interrupts): Ghalat, Belapur Operation mein kya hua tha DAYA, sub ko yaad hay, aik baar bhi ABHIJEET nay Tum pr Hath uthaya' nahi na' haan Joray zarur thay Hath' Wo Tum pr Gussa hua, Roya, Ceekha' per Hath Nhai uthaya' aur wahan Rehab mein'

DAYA (instantly): yaar wahan tou Maara tha na'

ACP: Tumhari Bhalai kay liyey DAYA' aur wo Buht Regret mein bhi raha tha' agar Humein DR sakhti karny ka nahi kehtay tou kabhi bhi ABHIJEET Tum per Hath'

There is a Silence comes as ACP and RAHUL either the Team also found some Unusual from DAYA attitude as after so many Rash Attempts He was still stand in His point abt ABHIJEET releasing His Anger on Him as He hides something from Him' after some minute DAYA look at Both as He knew that now He cant Handle His Own Statement which was Completely Incorrect from the First day'

DAYA (to ACP): Sir, sach bataon tou Mujhy laga ABHIJEET Drama kr raha hay' (both Shocked) (DAYA added again) jub us nay Mujhy wahan Pehli baar maara tou Mujhy laga wo Mujhy Pechan nahi paaya' aur aisa hota hay, magar haan jub wo sub ko Maarnay laga tou Mujhy laga ab wo Mujh say ye kehna chah raha hay kay Main usy Ghar lay jaon'

Isi liyey Mian Usy Ghar lay aaya' yahan bhi Wo kuch nahi bola' (little rash) Mujhy bhi Zid ho gayii kay jub tak Wo Khud nahi Uglay ga' Main pitta rahun ga' dekhta hun Kub tak Mujhy Maarany ka Hosla hay us mein' main us kay Drama aur haqqeqat mein farq he nahi kr paaya Sir'

Magar jub Us nay (looking at ACP) aap ko Nuqsan pohanchaya Sir, mian soch bhi nahi sakta tha' SACHIN aur FREDDIE, yahan tak kay jub us nay RAHUL ko bhi maara' (He swallowed VIVEK incident deliberately) tab bhi Mujhy laga wo apny drama ko haqeeqat ka rung deny kay liye aisa kr raha hy, kyunkay agar wo sirf Mujhy maarta tou zahir hay jaldi pakra jaata'

ACP (confuse): magar Tumhein aakhir sojhi kesay kay tum ye socho kay wo Drama kr raha hay.?

DAYA: Asylum ki Chat say girnay say' aap khud batayein Sir, wo aakhir wahan gaya hee kyun.?

ACP: kyunaky wo us investigation Team say samparg mein tha jo inspector ROHIT ki Accident ko Investigate kr rahi thi, ABHIJEET wahan us Dr say bhi mila aur us nay wo jagah bhi dekhi thi'

DAYA: pata nahi Sir, per (suddenly touched ACP hand and ask) Sir wo log ABHIJEET ka khayal tou rakhein gay na' (tears) usy Electric Shock tou nahi dein gay na'

ACP (grabs his palm n console): DAYA sanbhalo khud ko aur Tum aisa kyun soch rahy ho' kay jesay ABHIJEET kabhi theek nahi hoga'

RAHUL: haan DAYA' Tum buht aagy ka soch rahy ho' wo wahan Treatment kay liyey gaya hay' kuch dino mein Theek ho kaya aa jayey ga'

ACP: haan DAYA'

DAYA: Sir aap log mujhy behla rahy hain' bhala Asylum say kabhi koi Theek ho kr aata hay' (strong) magar main ABHI ko zarur lay ker aaon ga' pakka'

ACP and RAHUL exchange glances and after giving Support and Relaxment both moved out from Residence' here RAJAT and SACHIN right now take over the Responsibilities of DUO as DAYA was really not in mood to Join CID right now' He still on Leaves'

The Night was so Horriable for Him' He tried to Relax Himself but Failed as mostly He feels His Heart has a Scare, a Fear of Something, but He cant figureout that thing' He is Tense, Sad and Restless just trying to Sleep but' He just cried Loudly either to take out that Fear and Scare from His Heart by the Tears and Screams'

DAYA (cried): ABHIii' plz aa jao' ABHIii'

But His ABHI was not there to come and wraps Him around His arms and saved Him from this Fear and Scare, He spent the Night in Tears'

ABHIJEET with much Difficulties set on that Asylum, hitting Staff, creating Mess, throwing thing and after getting a High dose of Seductives moved to Dreamy world'.

DAYA visited to that Mental Asylum Next Morning' He got Permission by many arguments as DR does not allow any Visitor to meet ABHIJEET' DAYA went to His room and found ABHIJEET in Sleep' Untiled Floor and a Pre-cast roof with a slow speedy Fan, walls have any color when Painted first but right now looking the mixture of White, Yellow and Gery colors having a Small wooden Windowpan with a Pale color Curtain which was not protected ABHIJEET from Sunlight, room also having a mediam sized Iron Rod Bed having a Spring Matteress and a small table filled with a Steel water jug and glass and a small chair occupied by DAYA right now'

He moved towards ABHIJEET, look at Him, a Weak, lousy and Tann person Sleeps in front of Him' the Black Dark Circles around His Eyes hurts Him' the losing of Xtra Weight shows the Bad Physical Health makes Him sad' He slowly creases His Fingers on ABHIJEET hairs' He tried a lot but one of His Tear fell on ABHIJEET and DAYA instantly left the room'

He deposited Some Xtra money to Accounts Depart after taking out it through ABHIJEET ATM card as right now He has Nothing in His Account and ordering Receptionist about adding some Xtra stuff on ABHIJEET room, which included a 4 Seater, a small Wooden Wardrob, a dark Color Curtain, a small size 14 inch Television which was unacceptable as Receptionist told Him that No Glass Equiment was allowed in any Patient room because sometimes Patients Hurts Himself with it, Receptionist also told Him to come on Monday, Wednesday and Friday as Visiters only allowed on these days' DAYA understands and after moving head in Yes moved out completely from the Asylum'

Here RAHUL comes to meet DAYA at Residence; DAYA looked Quiet, RAHUL just talking but gets No Response so ask in Concern Tone'

RAHUL: Khana khaya Tum ny?

DAYA: haan yaar'

RAHUL look at Him keenly' He was totally out of Focus so just to little Shaked Him by saying in Rash Tone'

RAHUL: DAYA Tum Bureau kyun nahi ja rahy ho?

DAYA (low tone): dil nahi chahta'

RAHUL: aur ACP Sir jo Akelay par gayey hain' koi Ihmiyet nahi hay kya Un ki Tumhari nazrun mein' (harsh) kya wo Tumharay aagay hath Jorein gay kay Tum aao' wesay tou bara "ACP Sir is just like my Father" kartay ho' ab nibao na Betay ka farz' pata hay na wo kitni Mushkil'

DAYA (interrupts irritatively): acha kal say jaon ga'

RAHUL Look at Him' DAYA looks in Sorrow shade' He feels its not Good to Leave Him here alone'  Suddenly grabs his arm and say'

RAHUL (grab His arm and tells): Kapray, Shoes, Chashma and Cell aur Gadi ki chabi lo, Ghar ko Lock karo aur chalo'

DAYA (shock): kahan?

RAHUL: meray ghar' chalo fatafat uth jao'

He stands DAYA with force' DAYA packs his bag and after locking the door, sat on Quillas and RAHUL moved on His Jeep' RAHUL trying to give Him AMAN room which was Empty right now as AMAN was still in Pune' RAHUL Uncle was there, but DAYA denied and adjusted on Guest room' RAHUL after saying Him Good Night moved to His room..

At Night RAHUL came out just to check DAYA either He slept or just awakened' He heard ABHIJEET voice from Guest room'

ABHIJEET: hmmm Saa na'' chalo ab main gata hun'

Sagar kinaray

Dil ye pukaray

Tu jo nahi tay mera

koi nahi hay'


a Weird thought comes on his mind, He opened the Door of Guest room instantly with Silence and seeing DAYA crying slowly after seeing ABHIJEET and His Picture saved on His Valet  and ABHIJEET voice comes from His Cell as'

DAYA (laugh n say): Tum Acha ganay lagay ho ABHII'

ABHIJEET: bakwaas band' ab tumhari baari hay'

RAHUL really comes in Sad phase, think to move and Relaxes DAYA but He does not have such Courage' He again closes the door and move back, whereas DAYA again Replay the Same' He took that Recording earlier via Blue Tooth from ABHIJEET cell who told Him that He made it when DAYA sang on that Rehab on His Drugs Treatment Session'

DAYA moved earlier without any Breakfast stuff' He knocks on RAHUL room door after getting Ready and when RAHUL ask to wait so He will make Breakfast, DAYA rushed away' He reached at Bureau after almost 10 days, skipped some stairs and entered inside, his Eye caught His Buddy desk which was occupied by a New Face' DAYA ask Him in rash Tone'

DAYA: kaun hain aap? aur malum hay kis ki Desk per bethay hain?

GUY (forward hand with): I m Sr Inspector AVINASH reporting from CID Delhi, aur Main yahan Sr Inspector ABHIJEET ki Post per aaya hun' ye Un ki Desk hay' Main jaanta hun magar filhal mujhy yehi di gayii hay'

DAYA (shakes hand and say in apology tone): I m Sr Inspector DAYA and I m Sorry about My Rude tone, darasal 15 saal say is Seat pr apnay Bhai ko dekhnay ka aadi hun' is liyey kuch' aap plz'

AVINASH: I can Understand' aap Preshan na hun' wo jaldi Coma say bahar aa jayein gay'

 DAYA Shocked, before He corrected Him, ACP and RAJAT comes together and after seeing DAYA, ACP feels a complete Sooth inside His Heart as He used RAHUL for this matter, He knew if He said anything to DAYA, DAYA Obeyed but like a Robot which could not be acceptable' He said to both as'

ACP: Mera khayal hay aap dono ek dusray say Formaly Introduce ho chukay hongay' tou AVINASH Tum RAJAT kay sath SHATRU AHUJA kay Personal Staff say mil ker kuch nikalo, khas ker ye kay us roz SHATRU AHUJA kahan kahan gaya tha aur ANUP say kitni baar mila tha' aur (to DAYA) DAYA Tum meray cabin mein aao'

Meanwhile Team member one by one enters and feeling Happy to see DAYA back to Bureau' RAJAT and AVINASH moved to their Destination whereas DAYA at ACP Sir cabin.. ACP initiates'

ACP: pareshan mut ho' HeadQuarter aur usay yehi bataya gaya hay kay ABHIJEET Coma mein hay' Asylum wali baat Main nay Ghayeb ker di' bekaar mein ABHIJEET jub Theek ho ker aayey ga tou Rusume mein Pareshani hogi' darasal DIG achanak hee aa gayey thay' unhein batana para aur un ki Personal Request per Sr Inspector AVINASH ko yahan bheja gaya hay' (after a second) wesay DAYA acha hua Tum aa gayey' (voice shakes) main Buht Akela' (DAYA feels the Shake and tears in his voice) (ACP changes his tone into) Hum SHATRU ki Personal security aur Driver say pooch Taach karny ki koshish kr rahy hain' ta kay kuch tou hath aayey' wesay tum ABHIJEET say milnay kub jao gay?

DAYA: Sir kal'

ACP: Mujhy bhi lay chalna'

DAYA moving Head in yes and leaving the place but ACP stopped Him at Cabin door and tell Him'

ACP: DAYA ye lay jao' ABHIJEET ka Desk Drawer Lock karwa diya hay aur ander Rest room mein maujud us ka Locker bhi aur haan VIVEK say keh ker us kay PC ki HD bhi change karwa di hay and Windows phir say re- Install karwa di hay' AVINASH Raw material per kaam kr raha hay, befiker raho'

DAYA (taking Keys and concern tone): Thank you Sir'

After that He moved out with a Relaxment that ACP Sir really understands Him'. whereas ACP just jerk his head with Smile'

Here AVINASH and RAJAT backed with Empty hands as they said SHATRU AHUJA was not going to anywhere that day and ANUP also did not meet Him that day' after listening all, DAYA said to ACP'

DAYA: Sir aisa bhi tou ho sakta hay kay SHATRU AHUJA nay ANUP kay ghar pr chupkay say paisay rakhwa diyey hun aur usay pata bhi na chala ho..?

ACP (thinking): ho tou sakta hay DAYA, magar Ghar meiin jo bhi ghussa hoga, Darwazy ya Khirki kay raastay, magar Ghar mein zabardasti ghusnay kay tou koi Nishan nahi milay na'

DAYA: Sir koi Chabi say bhi tou Ghuss sakta hay' (to RAJAT) ANUP ka ghar kya Kirayey ka hay ya usay Company nay diya hay?

RAJAT (shame tone): Sir ye tou malum nahi'

ACP: tou malum karo na RAJAT'

RAJAT moved, all busy to their work' the day looking longer to DAYA but he tried to manages'

Here ABHIJEET after the First day when He created Clutter and hurt some staff of Asylum does not do anything' He is looking so Calm and Cool' Obeying like an Obedient Child' taking Medicines on time, proper meal and Sleep' spend hours with Other Patients and in TV and Playing room'

Tonight after playing with one of the Patient, other Player doing some cheating and it Hypes ABHIJEET' He turned rash and Arguments turned to a Big fight' Other playing the role of Audience' One Patient taking Money for Batting Purpose'

The Guy was little Healthy and Strong than ABHIJEET but ABHIJEET Sharpneed does not giving Him any Success to make a good Move and hit a Punch on ABHIJEET face' the Clutter at it peak where the other Guy grabbed ABHIJEET neck and pressing it after pushing it on Floor'

GUY: Chorun ga nahi Tujhy' Masal kay rakh dun ga' jesay Usy Masal diya tha'   

Suddenly Staff came in and trying to Separates both, the Guy spits Blood on Floor which comes out as a result of ABHIJEET punch after giving Him a Furious look, Slangs and warnings' ABHIJEET also Injured but not much' DR treated Him and gives Him Seductive'   

Next day when DAYA comes here with ACP Sir who found a New dark color Curtain on ABHIJEET window pan, a Small wooden Wardrobe, 4 Seater Sofa, ABHIJEET laid on His bed, does not taking any Interest on anyone Coming' here ACP sat on a Sofa and DAYA opened the Wardrobe and taking out some Stuff which He brought with Him and placing it on Wardrob' some Cloths, Shoes, Books, Junk Foods and when He wanted to give ABHIJEET His cell' ABHIJEET clutched it and Next minute hit it on floor' He stand up in Jerk and throwing out all Stuff just placed by DAYA in that Wardrobe few seconds earlier, ACP stand up in fear whereas DAYA standstill at same place' the Bed and Room looking like a Mess as ABHIJEET opened the Chips and Biscuits packets and Sqeezing them through his hands and spreading them on Bed and after that just taking out that Bed Sheet and throw it on DAYA' face'

ACP grabs DAYA's arm and takes Him out from the room who tells ACP for Waiting here and after 25 minutes, He Purchased all from the Nearest Market and then again did the Same and when coming out from ABHIJEET room just say'

DAYA: apna khayal rakhna Boss'

ABHIJEET again busy in His work of Messing' ACP quietly watch Everything and now walk with DAYA outside the Asylum without any word and look' DAYA dropped Him and moved to His Destination which is RAHUL house now'

Here RAHUL called ACP Sir and tells Him that He did His work as DAYA is right now with Him at His house'. RAHUL says.'

RAHUL: Sir, Main usay lay aaya hun' aap nay saheh kaha tha' wo Akelay mein buht ghabra raha tha'

ACP: haan RAHUL Operation Belapur aur us Drug Treatment kay baad wo Akelay honay say darta hay' (confuse) pata nahi kya Dar us kay ander beth gaya hay' jo Nikl he nahi pa raha' ABHIJEET ko is baat ki buht Chinta rehti thi' kehta tha kay Sir DAYA Pareshan ho jata hay' khair chalo bus khayal rakhna us ka aur apna bhi'

RAHUL: Sir aap bhi apna khayal rakhyey ga'

ACP cuts the call, reminding today Evening scene of that Mental Asylum and remembers some lines of ABHIJEET for His Best buddy as'

ABHIJEET: Sir aaj kal wo buht jaldi Tense ho jata hay' halanaky DR nay kaha hay kay he is fine aur wo buht Strong hay, per Mian jaanta hun wo Kitna Strong hay'  (crying voice)bilkul bhi Strong nahi hay wo'

ACP (murmurs in tery tone): ABHIJEET Tumhein pata hay na wo bilkul Strong nahi' Main kub tak Usay Sanbhal paon ga'  Tumhein aana paray ga ABHIJEET' (strong) U must be back ABHIJEET' chahye kisi kay liyey na saheh Tumhein DAYA kay liyey tou wapis aana paray ga' zarur'

Here SHATRU AHUJA Case was in Sinking boat as CID still did not find any Strong Points againt Him and still ANUP GOEL was Accussed for the Stealing whereas His Murder was taking as the Result of any Fight on that Money between Him and His Unknown Partner'

DAYA trying from His Informative Network to check out the Record Detail of SHATRU AHUJA and ANUP GOEL again but did not find anything, He checked the House and Neighbours again but all wasteless in between that He met with ANUP Kaam wali Bai who told that He saw a Guy one day before ANUP death at His House' DAYA asked'

DAYA: kaun tha, kuch pata hay?

BAI: pata nahi Sahab, pehly kabhi dikha nahi, per wo ANUP sahib kay Ghar ko aisay dekh raha tha jesay us mein ghusny ka Irada rakhta ho'

DAYA takes her to bureau and after telling to ACP showing SHATRU AHUJA and all His Employees and personal Staff Pictures but She denied, On ACP order, BAI made the Sketch which was of a Sharp Theif'

Here ABHIJEET just Calmly moving, did not creating much Clutter, after that Big Fight, Staff trying to separates both Parties but the Guy trying to Inoculate ABHIJEET on regular basis, at night ABHIJEET feels Thrist, He checked his Bed side which was Empty as Today He was Using that Steel Jug to Hurt a Staff so they completely emptied the table' He moved outside, find out no one so moved further feeling some Voices and to search the source of voices, He hears during His Journey as'

1st VOICE: Tumhein kya lagta hay.?

 2nd VOICE: lug tour aha hay kay Dimagh Khalas ho gaya hay, pr hy tou Police wala, Bharosa theek nahi'

3rd VOICE: Baray Sahab ko bata do' ye na ho baad mein Humari Garden daboch lay'

He does not get the main source of so many Voices, either He did not grasp the Difference in Voice and gets that how many people talked... He did not bother, start to pushed Door as any of it opened and  and He quince his thirst'

1st VOICE: hmmm' per phir bhi Nazar rakkho' wo Jo Us ka Mota Dost aata hay na' wo bhi Police wala hay aur jo Buddha aadmi' suna hay CID ka ACP hay' kahein usi ko na kuch bata day'

2nd VOICE: haan Nazar tou Kari chal'

ABHIJEET entered in one room after pushed it as the door pushed easily, moving little ahead but fell down by tangling Something and suddenly something falling on Him and the VOICES He hears in all ways Shuts as the room was dark, Abhijeet trying to Standup after trying to wipe out all Mess, suddenly Someone placed Hand on ABHIJEET Shoulder with Put On the Light which create Trouble for ABHIJEET a little' He turned and Everything comes to an End' He hits the guy hardly and trying to run away, the Guy Screaming, calling others and running behind ABHIJEET who was entering in a room and then trying to spent much time there' He silently spent time and after some hours when find no sound outside, moving out from the room and get back to his room and lying on Bed'

Here DAYA moved to meet with ABHIJEET the next day, He mets Him at Corridor doing Messing by throwing Paper after tearing it from the book' DAYA moved and trying to talk with Him as'


ABHIJEET tried to Hit that Book on DAYA's chest' here the Book was at floor after hitting to DAYA chest' DAYA wanted to pick it but in that ABHIJEET takes out the Gun from His Back and trying to Shot here and there' DAYA and Staff trying to snatch the Gun from His hand' DAYA trying hard to take out the Gun from ABHIJEET hand without Hurting His Hand' in that Gun slipped and when DAYA want to pick it up, an Amaze Voice comes from His mouth after seeing on His front'

DAYA (amaze voice): ye Chehra'

ABHIJEET who again picking up the Gun from Floor give back it to DAYA after watching the Spot where DAYA was looked' DAYA takes the Gun with a Scare in Heart as His Hand little Shake and Confuse Face' He backed after this Mess of the Day to House with some Weird Shock' Here Mental Asylum management Warned Him to Not to take any Weapon when coming here Next time, DAYA agreed'

He moved to RAHUL house with a Weird Shocking feeling' he does not know what to think about that Shock' He laid on Guest room Bed' the Weird Shocking Scene recalling on His mind and making an Image in front of His eyes' He jerks his head so many times just to grip out his mind from this Weird Thought but Failed so after so many Failed attempts he leave His attempt of Stopping' Suddenly RAHUL opened the door with Knock as'

RAHUL: aa jao' Khana lug gaya hay'

DAYA: yaar mood nahi hay' tum kha lo' main Thori Der baad khaon ga'

He again closed His eyes, RAHUL closed the door and DAYA again lost in Thought' He was trying Best to Relax Himself but Restlessly standup and moved to wash room for Freshen up'

Here Some Patients created Problem so Staff locked ABHIJEET on His room after that Gun Short session cz now its really Serious, at night, He feels that someone trying to open His Window as due to Winter season, He closed it, He silently moved to Windowpan side and Heard'

VOICE 1st: saaly nay Khirki Band kr di hay'.

VOICE 2nd: arry kub tak bachy ga' chalo chaltay hain'

VOICE 1st: magar, aagay?

VOICE 2nd: bus Nazar rakhein gay na yahan say'

ABHIJEET did not understand anything and moved to his bed as taking it as a New Game, His mind still in Jam mode, did not get anything back to His Memory'

At Next Morning DAYA reached at Bureau and tell FREDDIE to take out that Sketch made by ANUP Kaam wali Bai, He sat in front of his PC, scanned that Sketch, make some changes and a New Face showed on His PC Screen' after almost 25 days of the Whole Clutter and Mess started from that taking Money case for RAHUL comes on His lips'.

DAYA (smiles): ab maza aayey ga'

ACP comes to Bureau and seeing a New scene, after ages He saw DAYA Lovely smile, He missed this Smile as mostly ABHIJEET in funny mood tells to His Team'

ABHIJEET: jub main DAYA ki Smile dekh leta hun na tou Meray ander New Energy aa jati hay, Jadoo hay Us ki Smile mein, ek shakti hay' main na Super Hero ban jata hun'

A Beautiful Smile comes on His lips after reminding His Right Hand comment about His Best buddy' He comes Forward to DAYA and asks about His Smile' He looks at ACP with Shinny eyes as'

DAYA: Sir wo Main aap ko baad mein bataon ga'

ACP pats on His Shoulder, He feels Refresh, Sooth and Energized after seeing the Smile of this Gentle Gaint who is so much Dear to Him like NAKUL, He agreed with ABHIJEET comments as'

ACP: saheh kehta hay ABHIJEET, DAYA ki Smile mein Jadoo hay'

After that He moved inside His cabin with a Cheerful Energy and Relaxment to feel some Good comes in few days'

ABHIJEET mostly on Seductives, still on Same Mental and Physical state' when He was in Calm mood' everything was going good and when His mood becomes Hyper everything going Messed up' He was turning Weaker day by day as taking Less Foods'

Next day is Friday, DAYA went to meet with ABHIJEET who was creating Mess after seeing Him, He is throwing Pillow and Cushions after picking it from 4 Seater Sofa, DAYA trying to enter after passing them' ABHIJEET started Screaming and now Steel Glass, Books, Fruits from His Fruit Basket and lastly throw that Only Chair presented on His room which Hits floor' Staff came in and trying to Relax Him and moving out DAYA from the room who was still at doorstep' Staff tied ABHIJEET Hands from the Bedside and then moved out still saying DAYA for leaving who said in Calm tone'

DAYA (to staff): abhi Visiting Hours khatam nahi huay hain' main yahan thori der bethun ga'

Staff leaves Him with some Warnings, DAYA moved ahead pulling that only chair which is rested on floor and let it straight on floor, seated on it and picking that Steel Glass from the floor' Tear it with His Strong Hands and after making it Sharp Pointed weapon kinda thing look at ABHIJEET and making some Sharp Lines on His Wrist with saying'

DAYA (calm): Tum Mujhy Maartay ho Boss' per Jaan say nahi' (look up and ask) Kyun.?

ABHIJEET eyes came out' His minds knocking and reminding some Weird scenes Flasing and flicking around that room'

DAYA'. DAGGER'. RIGHT way and up his shirt sleeve'.. ABHIJEET EYE BALLS came out from their orbits'. screamed'. suddenly a tear from his eye fell and he sharply cut his hand'' 

ABHIJEET (scream): nahiii'''''

DAYA eyes Smiles on this Scream' He did not bother about this NAHIII and after making some Sharp Sketch on His Palms and Wrist with Scream background, again did a weird and entered that Sharp thing now inside His Neck with'

DAYA: Yaar tum na bekaar mein Dar rahy ho' Tum tou yehii chahtay ho na' (his eye contact with him) acha dekho aisay ander tak Ghusatay hain Hathyaar'

The Sharp pointed thing pierced and ABHIJEET eye blurred and body shaked Loudly' He was trying His Best to take out His hands from those Belts but failed' His Bed moving and Jerking in Extreme loud voices' DAYA after taking it Out Calmly did the next attempt on His Epiglotis after giving a Meaningful Glance on ABHIJEET, Blood not only fell drop by drop from His Neck and Epiglotis but also filled the floor as His Hand and Wrist also wrapped in Blood'

He did not change His Eye Focus Once from ABHIJEET eye contact and feels the pain of His Wounds comes bit after bit on His Buddy eyes' He lastly changes the Direction of that Sharp thing on His Face'

DAYA (tease): aur ABHI Tum Chehray per kyun nahi waar kartay' bara acha'

He attempt with Close eyes as its really Difficult for Him too' here now ABHIJEET with complete Strength of His body moved Himself with that Bed as He could not cuts His hand belts towards DAYA' the chair fell with DAYA as ABHIJEET fell on Him to snatch that Sharp Weapon with'

ABHIJEET (angry): DAYA kay bacchy'.

DAYA eyes opened in jerk with Pain and seeing a Weird and Shocking scene that ABHIJEET fell on Him wiith that Iron Rod Bed and snatch that Sharp pointed weapon instantly'' He tried to throw it but at the Same time a Bullet Shot just missed ABHIJEET head' his hairs feels the Burns of Bullet fire with Smoke as the Gun had Silencer so Voice is not raise as just from Click'  ABHIJEET first Cuts His Belts and taking DAYA out with'

ABHIJEET (rash): DAYA' Bhaaggg'

DAYA (confuse): kesay..?

ABHIJEET just pulled Him Straight and take Him out after placing that Sharp thing on His Tummy with the Warning to Staff' which feels by His Steps, Rash moments etc' DAYA step by step backing with Him outside with Fear to make the Scene Real' ABHIJEET Harsh Expression told the Dr and Staff that if they will do anything, the Result would be Bad for the Hostage' DAYA inititaes'

DAYA: plz koi aagay nahi aayey' ye Pagal (feel pinch as ABHIJEET press that sharp thing inside His tummy after heard that Pagal word) (scare) ye' kuch' kuc'. Aap log'

ABHIJEET grabbed Him Tightly, throw him on Driving seat of Quillas and then moved to Passenger seat and Quillas rushed, here DAYA in Rash to ABHIJEET'

DAYA (rash): Tum Theek ho' (angry) Tum nay itna kuch mujhy?

ABHIJEET (angry): Gadi chala' Bakwaas baad mein kr lena' (murmurs) saara Plan Chopat' (turn his neck with) koi peecha'

DAYA (cutting in anger): nahi chlaon ga Gadi wadi'

DAYA trying to press the Brake, but after 2/3 attempts failed, voice comes out as'

DAYA (tense after pressing Breaks): Break nahi lug raha Boss'

ABHIJEET (shock): ain' kya' acha tum Gadi roko'

DAYA (trying): Hand Break bhi nahi kaam kr raha'

DUO look at each one eyes, DAYA trying Gears but again Nothing happened' Suddenly the Quillas Wheel Cap with Front Wheel pulling out and the Car disbalanced' Both Screams simulataneously as now its Impossible to Handle the Car' Before both trying to Jump out from the Quillas' Quillas falls from the Cliff with Two Screams in High Volume as'



They fell after throwing out from the Quills and the whole Dark Night comes on their way'!!!  

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Hey Dada Smile
on your launch of new Production house Tongue
Hope you keep entertaining us with more and more creations Big smile
Iam So sorry dear Ouch 
I wasn't available to give comments on your thread
But you are going very good
My Best Wishes are with you
God Bless Hug
Lots of Love from me Hug

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged

First tons of Thank You so much my Friends, Pals, Readers and Inspirations too as VIS DII, DEEP, SHRUTI, FF, NEEME DII, DD, MANO, SD, DEBA, SONI, NEHA and all...HugHugHug

Originally posted by neeme

Hello Guys, How are u All??? First A Big Congrats to GD for new Production House... Jo ka kamyabi ki seri char raha hai meri waja sa b ROFL.. Naa... U r true Deserve for this Success GD... Big smile 

jeeWink... wesay bhi GD aaj jo kuch bhi hay sirf NEEME DII ki wajah say...ROFLROFLROFL

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