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superb update 
loved hw viren sat between jeevika n veera n both clinging onto him..
vv bros teasing veera.
virika sleeping 2gether...so sweet
thanx for pm...continue soon!!


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WOW! What an amazing update! Day Dreaming

Lovely lovely!

I loved the part where they both held to Viren's hand! Day Dreaming

Amazing update! Big smile

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Beautiful updateClap
Loved it...
Cant wait for Viren's double payback...
Veera is a chilled out character and  the bond that she shares with her brothers and Jeevika is simply endearing to read...
Thanks for the PM...
Continue soon...

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Viren nd Jeevika washroom scene was funny at the same time romantic!Big smile
Now Virat has also joined Veera's 'teasing Viren' mission lol
Interesting

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Awesome update loving veeras character
Continue soon and do pm me

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Nice uodate...! love Veera here...finally her BF would come in to picture...want to read Viren's reaction...it would b hilarious to see him all protective...like the movie part...continue soon n thnks for the PM!

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Heya !!Smile


Okay !! first of all m really sorry for commenting late and moreover not being able to unres my previous comment ... actually i have my exams in february so m really busy nowadays ...Cry
So m really really very sorry !!
but dun worry ... cuz today m here to make up for that !!Smile

thankgod u mentioned that that unresing thing was not for me ... cuz i was really guilty after reading the line ... lolTongue

So i guess i have not commented for the last three updates ... so this one is gonna be a really really long one ...Big smile


Chapter 23

i simply loved :

1) the cute veera teasing viren and at the same time telling her to buy flowers for jeevika !!

2) the stupid n naughty viren yet caring at the same time !! (including the cute romance here)

3)Virat !! (the second veera ... lol) nd loved this line
viren - "One Veera was enough, VIRAT!"

4) the adorable shloku !!

5) last but not the least ... my favourite JEEVIKA !! she is the perfect girl who knows how to deal with each nd every situation perfectly !!

so it was a MARVELLOUS UPDATE INDEED !!Clap


Chapter 24

LOVELY !!
I MEAN AWESOME !!

jeevika quickly guessed that "bringing flowers" was veera's idea ... lol

then after that i loved the lines :
<div>viren - "My goodness, no matter what I do no one will ever be happy with me right?"

j - "That's not true. I love you, and thank you for the roses" she said giving him a hug while the three in the back all said "awww"

viren told them to stop with that awwing then but believe me ... after reading a bit further even i couldn't stop awwwing !! loved Virika !!

ok so this time its a bit opposite ...

i liked the cute viren nd virat teasing veera nd then veera defending herself !!

the line of the chapter was :

veera - "You know I'd call both of you morons right now, but that would be an insult to morons" Veera fought back

jeevika and shlok at the same time - "ohhh"

jeevika - "Now who just got burned Viren" she said high-fiving Veera.


hahhahahaha !! the two girls are always enough for viren !! lolWink

then jeevika got hired as one of the professor at USC's medical school !!
WOOOWWW !!
LOVED THE FACT THAT ALL OF THEM SUPPORTED HER ND WERE REALLY HAPPY FOR HER !!

so *clapping* for u again !!Clap


Chapter 25

My favourite update out of the three !!
As you said ...a fun and long chapter !!

It was indeed the update on which i would like to say ...
that ...
KAY U NAILED IT ALL THE WAY TILL THE END !! Clap

SSSUUUPPPEEERRRBBB !!!!

I loved the it to the ore nd core !! each and every bit !! Heart

starting from jeevika getting nervous to viren giving her confidence nd holding her hand to veera teasing viren on the soo called bathroom prank to viren taking his revenge by teasing her about ARMAAN !!

then from the whole family meeting jeevika to viren taking her to a side nd asking for a kiss nd then jeevika running away by saying OUCHH !! lol
she actually knows how to tackle her naughty fiance !! Wink

then from jeevika asking for more blankets to viren not missing a chance to romane her !!
(I LOVE VIRIKA !! ) Heart

then from veera not being able to lie to her brother to the annoyed and caring viren who eventually made veera eat everything !! LOL

then from the plan of watching a movie to shlok revealing veera and armaan's secret to the two girls who were soo sure that they wont get scared at all !! Tongue

then from viren sitting between veera and jeevika (his two ladies) to veera and jeevika getting scared that ended viren kissing jeevika on the forehead !! awww Embarrassed

than from viren making the ladies sleep on the sofa, caring for them, to his plan being flopped cuz jeevika slept in merely 10 mins !! hahahaha Wink


Now praising the author !! Wink

his time i have come up with some words !!

U share a rapturous love of words with a lyrical elegance that makes every single sentence epic with pleasure !! Clap

i would rather call you "A Pleasant Writer with A Pleasant Style"

u have such a perfect command over language !!

A BOW TO U FOR WRITING SUCH TERRIFIC STORIES ESPECIALLY THIS ONE !! Thumbs Up

THANKYOU SOOO MUCH !!


Nooo !! don't end it !! plzzz ...

plzzz dun end it ... its a humble request from an addict of ur stories ---> ME !! LOL


P.S : i am not unreserving the previous comments cuz i posted everything in this one Smile
i hope i made it up to u !! Wink


LOTS OF LOVE Heart
BIG HUG !! Hug

MIRAH   :)



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Originally posted by ElmWizard5015

Heya !!Smile
</div>

Okay !! first of all m really sorry for commenting late and moreover not being able to unres my previous comment ... actually i have my exams in february so m really busy nowadays ...Cry
So m really really very sorry !!
but dun worry ... cuz today m here to make up for that !!Smile

thankgod u mentioned that that unresing thing was not for me ... cuz i was really guilty after reading the line ... lolTongue

So i guess i have not commented for the last three updates ... so this one is gonna be a really really long one ...Big smile

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Chapter 23</font>

i simply loved :

1) the cute veera teasing viren and at the same time telling her to buy flowers for jeevika !!

2) the stupid n naughty viren yet caring at the same time !! (including the cute romance here)

3)Virat !! (the second veera ... lol) nd loved this line
viren - "One Veera was enough, VIRAT!"

4) the adorable shloku !!

5) last but not the least ... my favourite JEEVIKA !! she is the perfect girl who knows how to deal with each nd every situation perfectly !!

so it was a MARVELLOUS UPDATE INDEED !!Clap


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Chapter 24</font>

LOVELY !!
I MEAN AWESOME !!

jeevika quickly guessed that "bringing flowers" was veera's idea ... lol

then after that i loved the lines :
<div>viren - "My goodness, no matter what I do no one will ever be happy with me right?"

j - "That's not true. I love you, and thank you for the roses" she said giving him a hug while the three in the back all said "awww"

viren told them to stop with that awwing then but believe me ... after reading a bit further even i couldn't stop awwwing !! loved Virika !!

ok so this time its a bit opposite ...

i liked the cute viren nd virat teasing veera nd then veera defending herself !!

the line of the chapter was :

veera - "You know I'd call both of you morons right now, but that would be an insult to morons" Veera fought back

jeevika and shlok at the same time - "ohhh"

jeevika - "Now who just got burned Viren" she said high-fiving Veera.


hahhahahaha !! the two girls are always enough for viren !! lolWink

then jeevika got hired as one of the professor at USC's medical school !!
WOOOWWW !!
LOVED THE FACT THAT ALL OF THEM SUPPORTED HER ND WERE REALLY HAPPY FOR HER !!

so *clapping* for u again !!Clap


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Chapter 25</font>

My favourite update out of the three !!
As you said ...a fun and long chapter !!

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">It was indeed the update on which i would like to say ...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">that ...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">KAY U NAILED IT ALL THE WAY TILL THE END !!Clap</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">SSSUUUPPPEEERRRBBB !!!!</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I loved the it to the ore nd core !! each and every bit !!Heart</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">starting from jeevika getting nervous to viren giving her confidence nd holding her hand to veera teasing viren on the soo called bathroom prank to viren taking his revenge by teasing her about ARMAAN !!</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">then from the whole family meeting jeevika to viren taking her to a side nd asking for a kiss nd then jeevika running away by saying OUCHH !! lol</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">she actually knows how to tackle her naughty fiance !!Wink</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">then from jeevika asking for more blankets to viren not missing a chance to romane her !!</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">(I LOVE VIRIKA !! )</font>Heart

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">then from veera not being able to lie to her brother to the annoyed and caring viren who eventually made veera eat everything !!LOL</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">then from the plan of watching a movie to shlok revealing veera and armaan's secret to the two girls who were soo sure that they wont get scared at all !!Tongue</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">then from viren sitting between veera and jeevika (his two ladies) to veera and jeevika getting scared that ended viren kissing jeevika on the forehead !! awwwEmbarrassed</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">than from viren making the ladies sleep on the sofa, caring for them, to his plan being flopped cuz jeevika slept in merely 10 mins !! hahahahaWink</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Now praising the author !!</font><font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Wink</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">this time i have come up with some words !!</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">U share a rapturous love of words with a lyrical elegance that makes every single sentence epic with pleasure !!Clap</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">i would rather call you </font><font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">"A Pleasant Writer with A Pleasant Style"</font><font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"></font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">u have such a perfect command over language !!</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">A BOW TO U FOR WRITING SUCH TERRIFIC STORIES ESPECIALLY THIS ONE !!Thumbs Up</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">THANKYOU SOOO MUCH !!</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Nooo !! don't end it !! plzzz</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">plzzz dun end it ... its a humble request from an addict of ur stories ---> ME !!LOL</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">P.S</font><font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"> : i am not unreserving the previous comments cuz i posted everything in this oneSmile</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">i hope i made it up to u !!Wink</font>


<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">LOTS OF LOVEHeart</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">BIG HUG !!Hug</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">MIRAH :)</font>


i kinda feel like this was an update ROFL 
you can't just say sorry Tongue

you better be ready for punishment LOL

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