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Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
this is how i wouldve had July 12, 2006 Episode.....


After Roshni comes and tells her again....

Roshni leaves... and she smiles!!!

Jai has a mean face

Bani is looking at him

ANd she accuses him

Like in today's episode...

Jai: Please Bani.. Listen.....

Bani: No i dont want to listen!!! For all this time til we have gotten married..... I have been married to my mother's murderer!!!!!!

Jai: Bani..

Bani: Dont say my name!! When you say it now... its not the same anymore!!!!!

Jai is looking down!

Bani: After knowing everything....... and after what u have done.. people usually feel bad and regret what they did.. but u...... u ruined our lives!! and most of all... Mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai's eyes are moist....

Jai: Bani..... i give you the right.. you give me any punishment you want!! and i will accept it!!!!!!!!!!!! Please punish me!!

Bani: No! i will let God punish you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai: Bani please...

Bani: No!!!...... u have done all the damage that you have possibly could!!!... I hope you are happy!!!!!..

Jai is looking away

ANd he's sad!

He looks at her

Bani has a mean face......

Bani: Til today... anything that made me mad or irritated... i never said anything......... but today i wont stay quiet!!... Mr. Walia.... From today on...... I will hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHen Jai hears the word hate...

Its all over!!!

He closes his eyes

Bani: I will hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is sad!

Bani: I hate you!!

It echos

Over and over again!

Bani comes to him

And she grabs his sherwani from top

Bani: Why?? Why did you do?? Why????

She hits him

Bani: Why?? Dont you realize what i would go through... if i had found out.....

SHe cries and cries

Jai has nothing to say!!!

Bani: Why????....

And she breaks down on him

And keeps crying!

Bani: Why?

She has her head on his chest!!

Jai is crying a little bit........

Bani looks him

And then

For the 1st time

She sees him having tears in his eyes

And she's looking at him

Jai: Since the day we got married.... this is the one thing that has been haunting me and that is.. if you found out what happened on June 29th... in park road.... I didnt want u to know.... And then afterwards..... after when i didnt have any more hatred for you.... i was then scared of what you would happen if you found out about park road..... And then.... when everything was going so well...... the secret came closer and closer..... and now................

Bani is looking away with a mean face....

Jai: Bani.... i didnt do this on purpose... believe me!! i really didnt!!!!!! Please forgive me!!! Punish me! I wanted to be punished my you only!! No one else!!!!!!!!

Jai tries to touch her face

But she takes it away

Jai: Bani please!!!.. I beg you!!! Dont do this to me!!! I dont want to lose the person who i care about so much!!

and BAAM...

Bani is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is feeling miserable!!!!

Bani closes her eyes

She holds her head..

Jai: Bani....??? Bani?

Bani faints in his arms!!!



THe End!!...



(Hope i didnt bore u).. Should i cont? ConfusedConfusedConfused...






Edited by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli - 12 July 2006 at 7:57pm

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Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
please do it was amazing bani why its doesnt suit her to be mad at jai like that!

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wow jaanu, you should cotinue seriously you should be one of the ekta's creative heads Tongue

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Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
jaanu is this turning into another ff?...i think u should cont Big smile

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Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
oh GOD BLESS U.. that was gr88888888888.. y can't ekta ughhhhhh.. that would've been gr88.. see he confessed his luv wit words.. and then she's pregnant Clap

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Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Guli its going well! you should continue Clap Clap

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Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
Okay then.. w/in like 10 mins.. its been viewed over lots of times...

So i guess this will be New Fanfic then!!!!

Edited by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli - 12 July 2006 at 7:51pm

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