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SofiyaSam Goldie

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Thanks 4 ur lovely poetry. I read them 4 times yet now. Really it's aweosome.
Nice name.

Edited by nishi11 - 03 January 2013 at 1:53am

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..optimist.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Thank you Smile
fairy1 Goldie

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
1.A General case in CID:-Its a very rhythmic poem...good one Thumbs Up
2.Daya-The Supercop:-He truly is Wink
3.This is life,must move on:-You have very beautifully depicted the true meaning of lifeClapHug

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rosepink. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Hey neha I just read ur poem 'Daya-The supercop'
Vry nice nd sweet poem..Smile

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..optimist.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 January 2013 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Yesterday I had a dream... a funny one.
Here it is:
My parents and me were at home. Just then the landline started ringing...
I picked up the phone...It was the watchman from the society gate...
Watchman :   Hello madam, yahan kuchh log aaye hain..
                       Aap ke ghar ka number poochh rahe hain...
Me (confused) :Kaun aaye hain?
Watchman : Wo, teen madam aayi hain...
                    ( I could make it that he was asking them their names while                       covering the phone speaker. I was on hold)
                     Wo apna naam GD, VISROM aur DEEPZ bata rahi hain...
                     Kya main unhe bheej doon??
I couldnt believe my ears!! I was so excited to meet all three of them...
I told the watchman to give them my flat number and help them reach here...
I quickly changed and got ready...I was very excited to meet my friends whom I had never seen before...I didnt even know their actual names...
I was anxiously waiting for the door bell to ring...
In those short couple of minutes a lot of thoughts were running through my mind...
How should I welcome them?
Should I hug them or should I just shake hands?
How will they react after seeing?
How will I react?
All such queries flooded in my mind...
The link of my thoughts was broken by the sound of the doorbell...
I hurried to the door and opened it...
I looked at the three faces in front of me...They all looked back at me...
We were all silent for a few moments just staring at each other...
The silence was broken by one of them...
She questioned, pointing at me, as : Neha??
(it was like "Are you Neha?")
I just nodded yes...
And we all were so happy to see each other...
All smiles spread across our faces...
I invited them in...They settled on the Sofa in the hall...
We all were just one spoke...
I was about to initiate...when Mom came out of the Kitchen and Dad came out of the Bedroom to see who it is...
I stood up, with a lot of excitement,to introduce my DEAR friends to my parents...All three were eagerly waiting to listen what I was gonna say...All eyes set on me...
I began with the one sitting to my left most...
Pointing to her, I was about to speak, but OMG!! There was a big problem!!
I acually didnt know WHO WAS WHO...!!!
I completely lost into my thoughts...All three were laughing their hearts out !!! Mom and Dad were confused and just stared at me...
I didnt know what to say...I didnt know how to react...
I just closed my eyes tight...
Suddenly everyone was quiet...I opened my eyes to know the reason...
And I saw that I was in my bed...and all this was only a dream...
Thinking about what I had just dreamt, a smile came across my lips...
and I just wished it was true...
I decided to post the dream here at that moment itself...and slept again...

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gadhadada IF-Addictz

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Posted: 17 January 2013 at 3:26am | IP Logged

NEHA... the Really ORIGINAL Dream as U really Portrayed well about WHO IS WHO...Clap
I love the way U Portrayed UR Emotions, Excitement, Joy etc...Embarrassed
kuch Khilana Pilana tou thaWink... per KHali Pait wapsi...LOLLOLLOL
wesay Hum log Lug kesay rahy thay...WinkWink
main tou buht PYARA lug raha hun gaEmbarrassed... hain na...Thumbs Up
How is VIS DII looking and DEEPZ too...WinkWink
Beautiful Dream...Day Dreaming
aaj kal mein buht logun kay DREAM mein aany laga hun...SleepySleepySleepy
hayey Kahein MUJHY nazar hee na lug jayey...ROFL
Kaala Teeka laga lun na...Wink

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DreamyDeepz28 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2986

Posted: 17 January 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged

Hey Neha Tongue

Wow !!!!! Me, Dada and Visrom di Smile

Tumsey milney aayeh

Waah kya sapna hain dear

I always know that everyone has dreams

be it day time or night time Wink

But koi yaha post nahi kartha siwaai merey Ouch

Iam happy ki I got a companion Hug

Anyways Just wanna Say

Kyunki kyaa patha kab sach ho jayeh Smile

Am I worth coming in dreams Confused ?

I haven't commented on any post for a long time..

Par your post has made me comment.

I wish Who's who Solve ho jaata Wink

You are my first Shisya Sapney keh-

mamley mein Tongue

Dada aur Visrom'di kaisi thi ? Wink
humein seh who's who agli baar
jarur bataana LOL

A nice description in detail yaar Embarrassed

Edited by DreamyDeepz28 - 17 January 2013 at 3:59am

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