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1.   A General Case In CID (poem)                  ...Page 1
2.   Daya - The Supercop (poem)                    ...Page 3
3.   This Is Life, Move On (poem)                    ...Page 4
4.   Who Is Who?? (dream)                              ...Page 7
5.   CID Anniversary Special (message)          ...Page 11
6.   Yoon Hi Chalta Rahe Ye Haseen Silsila  (poem)...Page 11
7.   Life is a Game (poem)                                 ...Page 13
8.   Itna Sa Khaab (poem)                                 ...Page 17
9.   The Pillars of CID (sketch)                          ...Page 20
10. Sometimes In Life... (poem)                      ...Page 26
11.  I Met Them!!                                               ...Page 32
12.  Aye Dost (poem)                                         ...Page 45
13.  Ek Khoon, Do Qatil (story 1)                     ...Page 55,56
14.  I am Sorry (poem)                                       ...Page 70
15.  Dear Mom and Dad (poem)                      ...Page 81
16.  Footprints (poem)                                       ...Page 88
17.  The Sting of the Three W's(story)            ...Page 96
18.  Socha Na Tha (poem)                                  ...Page 97
19. A Message From Heaven (poem)               ...Page 101
20. DUO In Danger - 1(story 2)                          ...Page 112
21. Te Amo Aditya (poem)                                 ...Page 118
22.  DUO In Danger - 2 (story 2 contd.)            ...Page 120
23. DUO In Danger - 3 (story 2 contd.)             ...Page 124
23. DUO In Danger - 4 (concluding part)          ...Page 130
24. Happy Independence Day (poem)              ...Page 135
25. Spare Me Some Time (poem)                      ...Page 142
26. Remembering The Golden Days (poem)   ...Page 147
My 100th Post
Hey Friends...
I m very happy to complete 100 posts here...Big smile
Here's something for you all...
Actually I had written this long before I joined IF...
I was waiting for an occasion to post it...
Now that I am completing 100 posts and also CID will complete 900 episodes, I thought to post this...
Hope you all enjoy it Smile
Please do comment...
Suggestions are most welcome...


"Hello...CID?" calls someone gazing at the dead body in front,

Which is sometimes blood stained, or sometimes even burnt;

In the White Qualis, arrives the CID team at the crime scene,

To know what has happened, the gathered crowd is desperately keen.


The body is checked to know the identity of the dead,

Who is sometimes identified by someone in the crowd instead;

Near the dead body they find some clue, but know not what it means...

Thus the investigation of the crime begins!!


Looking at the victim's clothes, Vivek informs that

Shirt hai bahut keemti aur lagta hai naya;

ACP kehte hain, "iss sheher ke ek ek dukaan mein poochho

Ki ye shirt wahan se khareeda gaya hai kya!!"


Searching for the particular brand,

Working hard day and night,

Ultimately the officers find the shop

And from Credit-card receipt, victim's address they sight!!





They reach the victim's place

To inform his family about the murder,

And also to get more information

That could take the investigation further.


The family is moved to tears,

Shocked to know about the death;

The officers console them, promise to punish the culprit

And tell them to have faith.


Sometimes the dead body bears no wounds or bruises,

Heart attack may be the cause, the officers guess;

The body is sent to Forensic Lab for further analysis,

"Boss, yeh ek khoon hai"  tells Dr. Salunkhe, and that's a crisis!!


But he upsets the officers,

Unable to explain the exact cause;

Just then Dr. Tarika finds some clue

Jo khol sake is khoon ka raaz!!


"Dekha Sir, Tarika ji kuchh na kuchh dhoondh hi nikalti hain!"

Taunts Abhi with a teasing smile on his face,

This outrages Salunkhe, ACP gives him a stern look,

And everyone gets back to the case.



Phir hoti hai kuchh nokjhok Officers aur Doctors ke beech,

Things don't go further, and that's a Dead-end they reach;



With Fredy's ridiculous questions and conclusions,

Abhi and Daya, irritated, know not what to say,

Raising his hands, ACP prays,

"Hay Bhagwaan, hay Bhagwaan mujhe utha le!!"


With a confused look,

Reading out the post-mortem report from the file,

"Kuchh toh gadbad hai Abhijeet",

Says ACP in his unique style!!


People are interrogated

To know about the victim, in and out;

Considering the statements and clues,

The suspects are figured out.


The suspects are questioned again,

To know what was untold;

And without Abhi's "aain"

further things wont unfold!!


Officers realise that for further investigation to commence,

It is necessary to visit suspects' workplace and residence.





They ring the doorbell, tap the door,

But there's no answer from within;

"Daya, tod do darwaaza!!" kehte hain ACP

Aur intezaar kiye bin;

"Shubh kaam mein deri kaisi..."

Kehkar Abhi dekhe Daya ki ore,

And with a Kick and a Bang,

Daya breaks open the door!!


Andar samaan bikhra pada, milte hain khoon ke nishaan,

Lekin kahin nahi laash;

"Ghar ka chappa chappa chhaan maro", kehte hain ACP

Aur shuru ho jaati hai talaash...


"My God!!" is the reaction

When they see dead body lying there;

They all wear their gloves to check,

Hoping to find some clue somewhere...





They analyse all evidence

Considering each and every suspect;

ACP recognises their man

And is surprised to know, what they never did expect!!

"Kuchh samjhe Abhijeet?" asks ACP, Abhi smiles...

"Yes Sir!!" says he, with sparkle in his eyes;

"Chaliye Sir, isska haal poochhte hain", says Daya...

What's going on, the other's don't realise!!


Finally the culprit is caught,

With CID officers all around;

He runs into Daya

And falls back to the ground!!


He still tries to run and escape,

As if he would succeed...

And his "Aap log mujhe fasane ki koshish kar rahe hain!"

Is paid no heed!!


Handing him over to Daya, Abhi says,

"Lo Bhai Daya, ise tum hi dekh lo...";

What's coming his way,

The culprit doesn't know!!




Held by his neck,

He gets one tight slap from Daya;

Falling into a chair in the CID bureau,

He confesses, "Haan, khoon maine hi kiya!!"



He then reveals WHY and HOW of the murders, crying and praying,

For he neither gets love, nor money, nor property...just bad luck;

And here ends the case with ACP saying,

"Ab jail mein sadte rehena phaansi ka order aane tak!!"


Edited by neha_dna - 10 September 2013 at 7:11am

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gadhadada IF-Addictz

Joined: 27 August 2010
Posts: 74927

Posted: 20 December 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged

First CONGRTS...ClapClapClap
wat a Fabulous Post...ClapClapClap
the Whole case in a Rhythmic way...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Mind Blowing...ClapClapClap
FW should learn so much thing from Forum...Thumbs Up
they really need it...WinkLOL

NEHA thank You for such Brilliant Dose Hug

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mano86 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 September 2012
Posts: 5315

Posted: 20 December 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged

on completing 100 posts

at a RHYTHMIC case description

wonder how would it sound if TRIO actually start conversation in poetry Shocked

Edited by mano86 - 20 December 2012 at 1:07pm

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..optimist.. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 November 2012
Posts: 15661

Posted: 20 December 2012 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
Thank you GD and Mano...Smile

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Athene Viewbie

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Posted: 20 December 2012 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
First a huge congrats Neha and second thank you for such a lovely dose of CID. Big smile

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debasree04 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 19986

Posted: 20 December 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Congrats @neha & its really nice one Clap

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gadhadada IF-Addictz

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Posts: 74927

Posted: 20 December 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by neha_dna

Thank you GD and Mano...Smile

U did awesome job NEHA and my Feedback and Applause is much small from UR effort...ClapClap

Edited by gadhadada - 21 December 2012 at 1:33am

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Aman_Aditya IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4644

Posted: 21 December 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
@ neha
congrats neha

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