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hello guyzz i am back with a new ff...
i know i know tat i am mad... i am not updating my previous works but starting new new ff's...
but kya karo.. yeh del hai ki manta nahi...
soo here i present a dark ff called LAGA CHUNARI MAI DAAG...
for this ff i wanna thank a very specail person who is helping me in writing this... ...
thank you yara for helping me...

Manvaa Mein Mere Aandhi Hai Uthi
A whirlwind has risen out of my assent

Aur Stabdh Khadi Hoon Main

And I've stood, stunned

Saanson Mein Baandh Apni Hi Saans

My breath mingled into another's breath

Nishabd Khadi Hoon Main
Speechless, I've stood

Duniyaa Se Jeeti Jeeti, Khud Se Haari
I won the world over, but I was defeated by myself

Bas Dhvast Khadi Hoon Main
My power shattered, I've stood

Aaina Main Aur Aks Main
I am the mirror and I am the reflection

Mad Mast Khadi Hoon Main
Frenzied, intoxicated, I've stood.

Laaga Chunari Mein Daag Chupaaun Kaise

The veil got stained; how am I to hide it?

Laaga Chunari Mein Daag

The veil got stained

Chunari Mein Daag Chupaun Kaise, Ghar Jaun Kaise
How am I to hide the stain on my veil, how am I to go home?

Laaga Chunari Mein Daag
The veil got stained

Jham Jham Jham Jham Jhamjawaat
Shimmering, sparkling and glittering

Antar Mein Gunje Diwas Raat

The echo differs by day and by night

Ek Shunya Shunya Kapti Vishal

One zero zero, a huge deceit

Maya ka Madhyam Mantra Jaal
Amidst the riches, a net of prayers

Maan Ki Dashe Se Ladti Main Bhidhi
I fought and struggled with the state of my soul/heart

Vishwast Khadi Hoon Main
I have stood, to be counted on

Meri Laaj Main Hoon, Chunar Bhi Main Hoon
I am my shame; I am also my veil

Chunar Pe Daag Bhi Main
I am the stain on the veil

{Ho Gayi Maili Mori Chunariya

{My veil has become dirty

Kore Badan Si Kori Chunariya
The veil that was as untouched as my body

Haan Jaake Babul Se Nazaren Milaun Kaise
Yes, having come, how will I look into my father's eyes?

Ghar Jaun Kaise
How am I to go home?

Laaga Chunari Mein Daag Chupaaun Kaise
The veil got stained; how am I to hide it?

Main Dhvast Dhvast, Main Nasht Pasht
I am wretched and devastated; I am ruined and destroyed

Main Saral Wirral, Main Ati Vishishta
I am simple, I am precious; I am very special

Main Shyam Shwet, Badal Mein Ret
I am Dark and Fair, I am rippling sand

Nirajhar Si Jhari Hoon Main
I am the incessant rain that won't start to pour down

Andhiyari Raat, Deepak Main Baati
A whirlwind night, I am a shining lamp

Swapnil Si Khadi Hoon Main
I have stood, dazed

Kanchan Ki Kaaya, Apna Hi Saaya
A body made of glass, I am a shadow of my own self

Bas Khud Se Dari Hoon Main
I have been afraid only of myself

Lakdi Mein Geeti, Thodi Seeli Seeli
Singing in the firewood; [my body] somewhat covered [by it].

Tham Tham Ke Jalli Hoon Main
The fire ceasing from time to time, I have burned on and on

Main Maaya Maaya, Main Chaaya Chaaya
I am an illusion, I am a shadow

Aatma Aur Kaaya Main
I am the soul and the body

Nishabdh Khadi Hoon Main
{I have stood, stupefied} x.2

Vishwast Khadi Hoon Main
I have stood, to be counted on

{Laaga Chunari Mein Daag
{The veil got stained

Sarvatra Khadi Hoon Main
I have stood here, there and everywher






{prologue}
A 20 year old girl struggling so hard to save her virginity her dignity...She was screaming through her lungs...She was calling again again for help but no one was there to help her to save her from a monster who was trying his best to achieved his goal by taking away the virginity of a poor soul who was no less than an angel...


She was trying her best to call someone but before she could say something he slammed his mouth on her and start to kiss her hungrily...He start ed to bit her lower lip so that she moaned in pain,tears were continuesly rolling down but did that monster care????NO he just wanted to satisfied himself...She looked up at him and get shocked to see him unbuttoning his pant,she was hell scared...


The time had finally reached when the poor soul lost her very important thing in the word... the poor soul now had a dagh on her chunri...And no one can remove it...Or is she find a true man who will remove each and every dagh from her chunri?????

{prologue}

Laaga, chunari mein daag, chhupaau kaise, laaga, chunari mein daag
 Chunari mein daag, chhupaau kaise,
 Ghar jaau kaise
 Laaga, chunari mein daag...

 Ho gayi maili mori chunariya,
 Kore badan si kori chunariya - 2
 Aa ... jaake baabul se,
 Nazarein milaau kaise, ghar jaau kaise
 Laaga, chunari mein daag...

 Bhool gayi sab vachan bida ke kho gayi main sasuraal mein aake
 Aa ... jaake baabul se,
 Nazre milaau kaise, ghar jaau kaise
 Laaga, chunari mein daag...

 Kori chunariya aatma mori mail hai maaya jaal -2
 Woh duniya more baabul ka ghar,
 Ye duniya sasuraal
 Haan jaake, baabul se,
 Nazre milaau kaise, ghar jaau kaise
 Laaga, chunari mein daag...


this is going to be a dark ff...

who is the girl being raped...
who is the man who broke that pure soul...
will ever be the daag on her chunari can be removed...
if yes who will remove that daag..

to know plzzz like and comment..

atleast yaro 7 pages of comment and 50 likes...

plzzz plzzz





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hey I am the first to commentDancing



the FF is interesting
eager to c the actual plot dear



would love to read the first part soon (probably in another two days)Day Dreaming



ALL THE BEST Thumbs Up

pls pm me for the future updates


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Originally posted by madhaviprathap

hey I am the first to commentDancing



the FF is interesting
eager to c the actual plot dear



would love to read the first part soon (probably in another two days)Day Dreaming



ALL THE BEST Thumbs Up

pls pm me for the future updates



thank yoy very much

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NICE STARTING...
CONTINUE...
PLZ PM ME...

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Loved itSmile

Please continue soonSmile

Thanks for the pm :)


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i think khushi got raped  by shyam

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