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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Like your FF Teekay , like Ramya said it is not far from the current track but you have managed to save Kunal from absolute disgrace which unfortunately the show could not!Ouch

That's the sad part , there was always potential but I guess talent was and  is lacking!

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Wow dear I read all the parts now it's simply superb pls update soon eagerly waiting for it. Clap

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
I absolutely love the way you have written this teekay :). It is almost like you could read my mind and what I as a viewer would like to see in the show. After all that she has been through, I really love the way you've described Siddhi, the 9 long years and the consistent hatred is enough is break anyone down and kill them on the inside. I wish Siddhi's character was given more of a chance to be a mother to those kids instead of engaging in random nonsense. Anyways, I love  how you've sweetly covered that aspect of a parent child bonding without the kids behaving like smart asses. There is so much more I like about the way you've written this, you've covered so many things so well, Siddhi's sorrow and loneliness, Kunal's slight bonding with Anand Jr. over the pillow fight, the adults being hostile but all the kid somehow making Siddhi's life bearable, its amazing how you've covered so many different aspects and relationships within 5 chapters, while the writers of this show continue to struggle to just portray the lead couple with some dignity for weeks altogether.

Anyways, great work and hope to read more from you :)

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Sheesh Teekay, you made me cry now Cry Love the way you've written the chapters, there is so much character & depth to each & every person. I can even empathize with Kunal here Ouch

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Heart Touching Teekay... You really did so well... I have got tears

Please update next part...


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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Teekay, awesome part again...U made me cry again..CryCryCry

cant see so much pain for poor Siddhi and Kunal...I hope Siddhi is fine..

I really liked ur style of writing...the best part is watever u r writing in ur FF is the current track..If CVs can progress like this ..OMG the episodes will b heart wrenching and emotional...but they still can redeem both the characters if they take this path..

Eagerly waiting for next part now..


Edited by pradnya1n - 19 December 2012 at 5:40am

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Great job...plz continue...Smile

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
WOW!!!!!!teekay..

very very emotional update...not only this one all 5 parts...loved the way u writing... ...i cant able read full update in one go...u made me cry again and again...

interesting precap..now cant wait for next part...hope u will update soon..

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