virman os : i have all the rights ; compltd

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this os is specially for my buddy luv_virman ie nayab...she once asked me to write an os where manvi gets jealous... hope u like it dear...

so here it is...
VIRMAN OS
I HAVE ALL THE RIGHTS
 
PART 1
 
manvi & virat were sitting in their room after the dinner. manvi was flipping through the channels of the tv while virat was busy facebooking. manvi was quite bored while virat was looking estatic. manvi was yawning by now and was fondly thinking of her fun days in rishikesh with her punters. virat suddenly yanked her towards him leaving manvi staring in his deep brown eyes. his mere touch still ent shivers down here spine, even after being married for 3 months. manvi was looking into eyes and expecting something romantic from her chep. she was literally waiting for him to make the first move. virat clicked his fingers in front on her n told her to look at the lappy. manvi was highly disappointed thinking that how did she marry an unromantic man like virat who is more interested in facebook rather than his wife. manvi blankly stared at the screen showing virat's facebook profile and she really didnt find anything that appealing which was worth acting like a speed breaker in their romance which actually didnt happen most of the time.
virat : manvi i am really excited...
manvi : hmm...
virat : you know it would be fun, isnt it...???
manvi (thinking in her mind) : my husband needs a psychiatrist. he has lost it. dr. manan i need you. please help my fight my chep's chemical locha
virat : manvi...??? speak up...
manvi : huh...??
virat : i was talking  continuously from the last 5 minutes. have you heard any bit of it...???
manvi : woh... amm..
virat : forget it...
manvi : tell me na... i am sorry
virat : let it be... lets go off to sleep...
manvi : its ok if you dont want to tell me...
virat : hell... you know i cant kep it to myself and would surely tell u...
manvi : so shoot...
virat : see there is an invitation for a reunion party from my frnds. this sunday 7 pm. we will surely go. what say...???
manvi gulped listening about another reunion party. the last one didnt work out right instead ended up in an argument.
manvi : no... not this time...
virat : what...??? 😕
manvi : remember last time... i just cannot go. i dont want to feel out of place... i just dont want to...
virat : what are you scared of and why manvi...???
manvi : virat i dont want you to feel embarass because of me... i am not like you all...
virat : embarass...?? do you really think i can be ever embarass of you..?? i can never be partner because you are the best thing that has ever happened to me...
manvi : but...
virat : you have hurted me... you really think that way about me... i loved you with all i have. i can never be ashamed of u. actually i am proud that i love you. you could have found anybody in life. there was no need of you to fall for a spoilt brat like me who was annoying, irritating and most of all heart-broken. you could have anyone better than me in every sense but you know what i am lucky enough that you love me... only me...
manvi : i thank my stars everytime i look at you virat. what would i do without you...??? you are my everything & i know you would never ask me to change.
virat : then why did you say so...???
manvi : because i still remember the way those girls made fun of me and how ashamed i felt.
virat : shh... we will not go there.
manvi ; virat...
virat : i just cannot see you like this and why didnt you tell me about this..??
manvi : i am sorry but -
virat : no buts manvi... lets just leave this for once and all...
virat pulled her into his embarce, kissed her hair and caressed her back..
virat : i really love you... love you so much...
manvi : love you too...
virat : mannu i wish i could spend my whole life like this. i wish time just stops here.
manvi : hehe... then also you wouldnt do anything interesting...
virat : really...??? then lets start the next chapter...
      
                           ( guys i created it... hows it...??? )
manvi : no... not so soon. first you have to promise me that you will give me whatever i ask for...
virat : hmm... lemme think... ok i promise...
manvi : thats like my chep... 😃
virat : you would never change bandariya...
manvi : bcoz hum toh bhay jaise  hain, waise rahenge... ab koi khush ho ya ho khafa... hum nahi badlenge apni ada...😉
virat : ok ok... dont chnage bcoz if you change then i would also have to find somebody new to love and romance with...
manvi : what...???? now go and start the next chapter with somebody else. i dont want to study anymore.
virat : haww... you became serious.. i was joking... 🤢
manvi : but i am not... good night...
manvi switched off the lights and slept.
virat : why does it happen with  me...??? god... 😡 goodnight... what is so good about this night...????
  
 
chapter 2

manvi : good morning virat...
virat : hmm...
manvi : get up na...
virat : lemme sleep manvi...
manvi : you are such a chep...
virat : stop calling me that u ded futiya... we are married...
manvi : so marriage isnt a certification that proves that u are no longer a chep...
virat : i wonder what did i do to deserve you...??
manvi : you might have given up all your riches...
virat : yeah... cmon lets get ready for breakfast...
manvi : right...
after the lunch...
manvi called virat
virat : bolo manvi...
manvi : kya hai...??? hii ya hello bolne ka rivaaz nahi hai kya tumhare wahan...
virat : manvi i am really busy right now... do u have anything important to say...??
manvi : yes...
virat : whats it...???
manvi : i love you... ❤️
virat : love u too... ❤️ manvi i will call u back baby... bye
manvi : bye...
 
after dinner
manvi : virat...
virat : manvi...
manvi : remember last night you promised me something...
virat : hmmm... i do..
manvi : i want to go to the party... and i am sure of it..
virat : but i dont want to...
manvi : life partner lets go n show them our real avatar... Lets show them how mrs. n mr. virat singh vadera rock...
virat : oh my god the sherni is back...
manvi : back in form...
virat : then lets go tomorrow... before that i want a kissy...
manvi : ok and she kissed his cheek...
virat : i didnt ask for a kissy like this...
manvi : your fault... from next tym be specific... gdnt..
virat : gdnt...
 
next day...
sunday...
virat : manvi... where is my laptop...???
manvi ; i hided it...
virat : it isnt funny, mrs. vadera...
manvi : we are going for shopping n no laptop today... i am your wife and not it...
virat : haaye meri urmila...
manvi : chalo...
manvi brought a new dress for herself after shopping for 4 long hours...
virat : are you sure you can carry this...???
manvi : do u doubt me mr. chep vadera...??
virat : i am just making sure your comfortable...
manvi : oh shut up... just look at me...
                             
virat : you know what you are damn hot... lets skip the party n just enjoy our own party here
manvi : no... after the party we will think about your idea...
virat : as you say... i know you love teasing me...
manvi : you know me so well patidev...
virat : cmon lets go... the early we will leave, the early we will come back and early will my party start...
manvi : lets go but i am nt sure about your party...
virat : chal chal...
at the party...
virat : hii guys...
dinesh : here is my friend... omg... hi manvi... remember me..??? we met in mumbai... i am dinesh...
virat placed his hand around manvi and pulled her towards him...
virat : guys meet me lovely wife, the love of my life, mrs. manvi virat singh vadera...
dinesh : congrats dude... and you too manvi ji...
virat : manvi bhabhi...
dinesh : manvi bhabhi... come lets go n meet others...
manvi : hello dinesh ji...
virat : come lets go manvi...
dinesh : guys see virat is here and meet his wife manvi...
aman : oh hello dude... how are you...???
virat : i am fine... infact i am very happy... wat about you...???
aman : i am also fine... just getting engaged next week... you two have to come... and hii manvi bhabhi i am aman...
manvi : hello...
neeti : hey virat... congrats to noth of you and manvi i am sorry for last time...
manvi : its really ok... nice meeting you neeti and thanks a lot...
neeti : come i introduce to others...
virat : no... manvi is fine is here...
manvi : virat i want to go...
virat : ok...
 
dinesh : so...???
virat : so what..??

dinesh : so really loved her that time also... dare not lie..
virat : yes i loved her... and will always do...
dinesh : thats why you didnt introduce me with her... oh i see... thats why when i asked you whether she was single or not.. you said she wasnt single... toh tu chupa rustam nikala yaar...
virat : we arent in a relationship at that time... only i loved her... then the whole cancer scenario n lots more...
dinesh : i am really proud of that i am your friend dude... you love her beyond words...
virat : hmmm...
dinesh : wish u both a very married life...
virat : thanks...
dinesh : but i really have to say bhabhi is really hot n different...
virat : i know but you just control...
dinesh : possessive...
virat : very...
there the girls became friends and they sorted out all the differences among them. the girls apologised manvi for their rude behaviour...
virat : hey girls...
neeti : already missing manvi...??
virat : yeah... your boyfriend is also missing you moti...
neeti : hehe... 😆
manvi : virat... 😲
virat : sorry...
neeti : you toh become a joru ka ghulam...
virat : i will see you later neeti... manvi come here na...
manvi : hmm...
virat took manvi to a corner...
manvi : why were you calling me...???
virat : ainwai...
manvi : missed me...??
virat : hmm... (making a puppy face)
manvi : but i didnt miss you...
virat : on a serious note, is everything ok...
manvi : absolutely...
virat hugged manvi and whispered " i love you... ❤️"
manvi : i love you too... ❤️
dinesh : ahem ahem...
virat : what is your problem dude...??
dinesh : nothing just go home n then romance...
virat
: why are you feeling jealous...??? i am not romancing with your girlfriend...
dinesh : she was my potential girlfriend if you introduced both of us... you knew that i am a tough  competition to u...
manvi : no its because he loves me a lot and i too love him so much...
dinesh : ok then carry on...
virat : hehe... jealous dog...
manvi : you are jealous virat... arent you...???
virat : yes i am so what... i am your husband and i have all the right to feel jealous...
manvi : haaye... now i love you more...
virat : n thats bcos i am jealous...
manvi : yes...
? : virat...!!!!!!!!!
manvi : go may be your ex girlfriend is calling you...
virat : thats means someone is jealous too...
manvi : no someone isnt jealous bcos she knows that you belong to her and no cheap, skiny girl can snatch you from her...
virat : meri sherni... ❤️ i ll be back...
manvi : okay...
 
chapter 3

manvi : hey dinesh...
dinesh : hey bhabhi...
manvi : oh cmon... virat is not here u can call me manvi...
dinesh : hey manvi...
manvi : so you were interested in me...???
dinesh : to be honest yes... but my badluck...
manvi : dont worry i will help u find someone like me if not better than me... bocs as virat says i am a single piece...
dinesh : you are damn interesting... may be thats why my viru fall for you...
manvi : may be... god knows...
dinesh : come i get you a drink...
manvi : no i dont want to...
dinesh : oh have  limewater atleast...
manvi : ok... lets go...
dinesh : after you...
manvi : you are a gentleman...
dinesh : thanks...
dinesh : so hows life...???
manvi : life seems a fairy tale... virat is my prince charming...
dinesh : wow... but he seems busy somewhere else today...
manvi : what...???
dinesh pointed towards the dance floor where virat was dancing with a girl... slow dance...
dinesh : this shreya i tell you... she was always mad about virat... and virat never left a chance to patao her...
manvi was burning in anger on seeing virat dancing with that girl who was wearing a short dress and leaning over him and he smiling while talking to her...
manvi : were they best of friends...??
dinesh : friends...?? stop kidding me... oops i mean...
manvi didnt listen to him and in anger and jealously gulped down dinesh's glass of alcohol...
dinesh : manvi...???  shit did u just drink that full glass of whiskey...???
manvi : can i have more...???
dinesh : i think i should call virat... you wait here...
manvi : i said i want one more or else i will murder you...!!! dinesh hurry up or you are gone...
dinesh : what will you have...???
manvi : i havent had vodka or rum... gimme any one of them...
dinesh : will you handle it...???
manvi : if i handle this chep, i can handle anything in the whole world...
dinesh : chep...??? who chep...???
manvi : this virat vadera... i will kill him tonight...😡
dinesh : hey chill swthrt... he is just dancing...
manvi : and you are irritating me... 😡
manvi gulped down a vodka shot and went towards the dance floor...
manvi went n stood in front of virat and pulled him towards her...
virat : manvi...
manvi : chep kiss me...
virat : did you drink something...???
manvi : yeah... whiskey and fodka...
virat : thats vodka...
manvi : whatever kiss me na...
dinesh came n told virat everything while manvi was just leaning on him and trying to kiss him...
virat : what the hell...!!! see she is out of control...
dinesh : you are lucky... i wish i was at your place...
virat : just shut up... manvi...???
manvi : kissey...
virat : lets go first... then kissey...
manvi : no... first kissey n then home... else we will stay here only...
dinesh : cmon dude... dont miss it...
virat : you just stay out of it you despo... now how will i take her home back...???
dinesh : ok... take this key... of my room first floor...
virat : thanks...
dinesh : have fun...
virat : get lost...
virat took manvi to the room and manvi got out of his embrace and locked the door...
manvi : do you love me...???
virat : yes ofcourse i do... cmon go off to sleep manvi...
manvi : sleep...??? no party...??? dance with me like you were dancing with that bitch...
virat : so you are basically jealous...
manvi :  jealous sherni...
virat : manvi we will dance in the morning... come baby lets sleep...
manvi : take off your shirt...
virat : what...??? god she has lost it...
manvi : take it off or... or i will jump from the window...
virat : hehe... you cannot stand properly bandariya, how will you jump...
manvi : you want to see... wait i will show...
manvi moved towards the window and virat stopped her and jerked her towards him...
virat was mesmerised looking at her as if he was looking at her for the first time... he never noticed that she was way too beautiful n perfect... he was staring at his innocent soulmate...
while manvi was trying hard to open the buttons of his shirt. virat came out of the trance when he felt something pricked him. he noticed manvi opening buttons of his shirt and in the process her nail pricked his chest.
virat : stop it...
manvi : why...??? give a reason...
virat : bcos its becoming dificult to control...
manvi  : so dont control... ho gaya...
virat :  kya ho gaya...???
manvi : button khul gaye... yes...!!!!!!!!!
virat : manvi... baby lets sleep... you are not in senses...
manvi : okkkay... come...
virat : thank god...
manvi held virat's hand and went to the bed...
manvi : chep...
virat : hmmm...
manvi : kissey...
virat : oh my god... i am not kissing you... you are drunk...
manvi : then i will kiss you... you arent drunk...
next moment she was kissing him...
virat smiled in the kiss thinking " virat tu toh gya... aaj ye sherni tujhe nahi chodegi..."
manvi broke the kiss and stared
into virat's eye...
virat : what happened...???
manvi : are you straight...?? i mean do u have interest in girls...???
virat was shocked on hearing what his wife was blabbering...
virat : manvi next time i am not letting you drink... you talk nonsense...
manvi : you do nothing with me... cmon you are the man...  and i am your wife... why dont you take the lead...
virat : did you really say it...???
manvi : forget it... i will teach you the remaining textbook... my teacher is useless...
virat : haaye...
manvi took out the already opened shirt and kissed his chest. she moved towards his neck and kissed him. manvi whispered in his ear " i love your tattoo... " and licked his earlobe...
virat was stunned now... he never thought she could seduce him so easily and that she loves his tattoo...
virat immediately tightened his hold on her and turmed her around losing little control that he had... as he was about to kiss her when she turned her head and kissed his tattoo...
virat turned her head towards him and took her lips into a hot passionate kiss...
manvi : virat... after breaking the kiss...
virat : i have all the rights...
manvi : i too have all the rights...
and they made love. the two halves made one... two souls that completed each other actually became one...
 
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continue soon
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wow it was so nice.
Manvi is too romantic i guess...
Virat why did he actually had to use his loose tounge..
Aww feel so sad for him..
Hopefully we get to see him happy in next few updates.
Manvi dialouge was so funny 😆
loved it!
Continue soon
and do pm me!Edited by nikeshathana - 11 years ago
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