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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 5:06pm | IP Logged

Are you sure you are writing for the first time...? Shocked

Its just awesome, dear. I really liked your concept. Something totally different from others.

Arnav being a doctor Embarrassed

, and Khushi NGO... WOW...! They are a perfect family now.

Many questions, of course, about Sala in particular. If they are happily married for three years, how come a 3-year-old daughter...? But, I will wait for my doubts. It may be cleared as the story progresses...

About the character sketch, need not to worry. Each story differs in its content and the content is the only component that demand a character sketch. So, just follow the flow, and everything will fall into pieces...

Do continue soon...

Edited by ranjha_arnav - 14 December 2012 at 5:14pm

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 5:38pm | IP Logged

Thanks for the PM.

I read it...

It's interesting...

Like how Arnav is a doctor and Khushi is independent...

Two lovely kids...

If I am not mistaken - you had mentioned in the beginning that this story will have flashbacks??

Flashbacks are my personal favorite!!

I like your writing...it's simple, it's practical, it's clear...

Keep up the good work...

-KC

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 5:46pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ranjha_arnav

Are you sure you are writing for the first time...? Shocked

Its just awesome, dear. I really liked your concept. Something totally different from others.

Arnav being a doctor Embarrassed

, and Khushi NGO... WOW...! They are a perfect family now.

Do continue soon...

thanks a lot yaar... yeah its my 1st time... and yeah.. abt sala... i thought rather to give a plain intro... i shd add something na... thats y i mentioned it... its a part of story..

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 5:47pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by karmachameleon

Thanks for the PM.

I read it...

It's interesting...

Like how Arnav is a doctor and Khushi is independent...

Two lovely kids...

If I am not mistaken - you had mentioned in the beginning that this story will have flashbacks??

Flashbacks are my personal favorite!!

I like your writing...it's simple, it's practical, it's clear...

Keep up the good work...

-KC

thanku KC...

yeah its full of FB.. like khushi narrating the story :)

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 5:56pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by jjsof

Originally posted by karmachameleon

Thanks for the PM.

I read it...

It's interesting...

Like how Arnav is a doctor and Khushi is independent...

Two lovely kids...

If I am not mistaken - you had mentioned in the beginning that this story will have flashbacks??

Flashbacks are my personal favorite!!

I like your writing...it's simple, it's practical, it's clear...

Keep up the good work...

-KC

thanku KC...

yeah its full of FB.. like khushi narrating the story :)

Great!! As I have said already - they are my favorite...keep writing!!

-KC

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged

hey.. how are you? the story is good. pls do check spellings and grammar before posting it. other than that the part is nice. its a good start. lol.. u named the boy as Harshit?? my daughter name is Harshita.. i love the sentence harshit is in mothers care. its fun to read that kind. continue soon.

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nJENIs

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by harshdb

hey.. how are you? the story is good. pls do check spellings and grammar before posting it. other than that the part is nice. its a good start. lol.. u named the boy as Harshit?? my daughter name is Harshita.. i love the sentence harshit is in mothers care. its fun to read that kind. continue soon.

heh thanks yaar... i was in a hurry this morning so i dint read it here...

yeah now i corrected the errors(which i noticed Embarrassed

) thanku so much

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