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Pashna IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Wow wish I had those writing skills..I can only read and enjoy poems and good writing. Thank u for the thread:)

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KhushiIraniOyster

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Posted: 22 December 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
ehem 10.30 pm IST will not do for me I am allowed online only till 10 pm right now chutti so it is alright
by next month I may not be able to come at that timing
this month I can come

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Harshu.. end of this month meaning another 7 days?

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Oyster

Harshu.. end of this month meaning another 7 days?

Yes after that next sem starts i will reduce IF to a large extent.

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Hmmm... okies Harshu.. let's see what the others suggest.. but I certainly don't mind changing the time.

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
The last line here doesn't sound right.. but I don't know what to do with it

An empty glass could be filled on the morrow

For she knew how a sprout of bliss

Could grow from the root of sorrow

With counted breaths, she wouldn't be remiss

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Oyster

The last line here doesn't sound right.. but I don't know what to do with it

An empty glass could be filled on the morrow

For she knew how a sprout of bliss

Could grow from the root of sorrow

With counted breaths, she wouldn't be remiss


I think I can just delete it so we have:

An empty glass could be filled tomorrow

For she knew how a sprout of bliss

Could grow from the root of sorrow

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KhushiIrani

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Okay this thing doesn't go together as a single poem

Sanaya Irani, exquisitely sculptured

Soaked with splendor and elegance

As she walked through the orchard

Roses felt deprived of beauty and sense

 

An empty glass could be filled on the morrow

For she knew how a sprout of bliss

Could grow from the root of sorrow

With counted breaths, she wouldn't be remiss

 

Draped with sunlight,

Calmer than the dead

It gazed through the cloudless night

So that some of her secrets could be read


 so each stanza could be treated as a short poem on its own.

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