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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Haniaaa Miy??!! I knew this girl would do wonders!!! Doing something is one thing but doing it for the person you love and admire adds to it... This is the reason I wanted SI-admirers only to make this calendar!!!

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Miy now that you're here.. could you please tell me whether the last line in this stanza sounds weird to you:

To the most beautiful girl I have seen
Your hazel eyes, a reflection of purity
They harbor not an inkling of obscurity
Honesty finds in them eternal security

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Wierd?! Not in the least bit! That stanza describes her so well especially the last two lines. It's perfect Heart

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Aw Sonya and Miyah liked the siggies? Thank God!
I'll make some more and post later ;)

Sonya that stanza is perfect. You guys are doing such a great job!

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Thanks Miy. I and Harshu thought there was something wrong.. But I always think an objective reader can tell you more accurately whether it's fine or not.. Since you were not involved in the writing process, you were the best reader to ask!

BTW ladki... you don't do a thing on this thread but the least you could do is give us feedback on end-products...! For some reason, I tend to believe that you're the best critic in our circle.. now don't think too highly of yourself, okay?!

So make sure you read the first collaborative poem on p. 1.. I think it's the 4th or 5th post... 

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .DivaDeluxe.

Aw Sonya and Miyah liked the siggies? Thank God!
I'll make some more and post later ;)

Sonya that stanza is perfect. You guys are doing such a great job!


You make something and me no likes it?! How's that even possible?! BTW I have a shikaayat... Miy sent me the SI-KSG siggy you made.. HOW could you NOT tell me?! That's mean! Chalo maaf kiya considering that you're gonna give me something much bigger.. And now that I saw it (Thanks to Miy!)... It's epic Div!!!! If you decide to have a shop or something on  IF.. I'll be your first follower!


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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arhi-Did-IT

Sonya check my post for the poem above tried completing it re. Off to sleep now.


Harshu I'll read it with a conscious mind tomorrow and try to give you some feedback... 
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Oyster

Thanks Miy. I and Harshu thought there was something wrong.. But I always think an objective reader can tell you more accurately whether it's fine or not.. Since you were not involved in the writing process, you were the best reader to ask!

BTW ladki... you don't do a thing on this thread but the least you could do is give us feedback on end-products...! For some reason, I tend to believe that you're the best critic in our circle.. now don't think too highly of yourself, okay?!

So make sure you read the first collaborative poem on p. 1.. I think it's the 4th or 5th post... 
 
 
Well ofcourse I am Approve ROFL
 
Jokes aside, I LOVE all the poems on the first page. The collaborative poem you quoted and the one Sunara wrote! Heart Both are written so well and suit Sanaya perfectly <3
 
Yes like I said, I'm useless until Feb 25th, after that, let me know whatever you guys need help with <3

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