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Posted: 11 years ago
hyyy giyzzz  i m writing my first os i hope u like it 
    
                                                               
                                               
PRECAP:rk and madhu  came in rk mension. and dips saw rk in bad mood and madhu too so she got very happy and thought   herself that she  is successful to sepret rishbala   and going to sleep  
[scene bedroom]  rk  slept on his couf  and madhu thought herself that she loves him very much  

                                                                     NAYI          SHURUAAT

next day  
 madhu wake up and saw rk is not in room she immedetly call bittuji and ask about rk .   bittuji told her he is going for outdoor shooting for 2 days. 
madhu got upset but then she think  she will manage rk     later first she should set in her mayaka and then she expressed to rk that how much she love him 
precap:  balraj's entry and he saw madhu's pic in rk mension

giyzzz i hope that u like it i  will  continue this topic soon  plzzz do rply
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Posted: 11 years ago
i dont think balraj will identify madhu dear
becoz for him all are dead
so he may feel this a girl named after madhubala
and ha os should be long dear not one para
and said os 
pls try to give long ones
Edited by abisamratgunjan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice start...continue dear...pm me when u start writing.