Guzaarish: Ch 7/Pg 11 (Page 3)

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ITrustMyHeart

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged

The start is intriguing and the very first thing that is the prologue has made me extremely anxious to know her past.

The first and the second chaps are really written well, I don't need to say that I guess, everything that you write is always good. The introduction to each character is done really well or should I say I connect well with the guy Rehaan?

Update soon btw !

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged

Haha, thanks guys! Some parts of this story has been influenced by real life but in a total fictional way :)

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 4:43am | IP Logged

awesome

thanks for the link.

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 8:52pm | IP Logged

Awesome yaar. Strong characters with different personalities are always a treat to read when it is from u.Loved the whole update.Loved the way u expalined Raina's character.Thanks for the pm Smile

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 1:01am | IP Logged

This was amazing Zahara..

You've designed Raina so intricately that i can actually imagine her..I always love the detail you put into your writing..The sibling fight was adorable Day Dreaming

I'm sorry I don't comment on your updates often, but you should know, I'm a huge huge fan of them!

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged

This is just Beautiful Zahara! I am totally in Love with this!

Your detailing is just amazing!
I Love your Characterization, just superb!
Please PM me whenever you update! :D

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged

Thank you so much guys! :)

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 2:45pm | IP Logged

Res- I know i've reserved both...But can't comment properly now...will read tomorrow Z :)

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