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raya(update6-pg13)- ff finished!!!

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Priya woke up at the wee hours of the morning. A feeling  of content filled her...there was something different ...suddenly her eyes turned towards her shoulder ...rather than finding her regular night suit she found the hanging shoulder of her blouse ...still not sure what happened she turned her hand in opposite side of the bed to find Pihu !!!
But suddenly wat she found shocked the hell out of her ...it was Ram ...lying nxt to her !!!
Suddenly it all came back to her !!
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It was that final moment of the court judgement ...as the judge declared pihu will stay with priya ...erybody strtd hugging her ...but strange as it cudbe she was not happy abt it! All she cud see was ram standing at a corner of the court room...a lone tear falling out of his eye.
Priya wanted to talk to him but she knew it was not the place ...she wanted some lone tym wid him.
She saw ram going toward his car ..priya ran aftr it !!! she shouted "Ram rukiye"
Ram just luked back he was drenched ... he was moving as a souless body ...
b4 priya cud speak ayesha came in b/w.
Ayesha : "Oh , Ram !!! aap pls aise upset mat ho!!! apki wife main apke saath hun ... u need a break baby , aaj raat hum apne farm house chalenge!! so that u can unwind ur stress" saying dis she pushed the motionless ram in the car!! n closed d door behind him
Ayesha turned towards priya .
Ayesha : "Priya .. priya di or watever ...tum jo bhi ho ...ram se tum dur raho...wo mera pati hai ..ayesha ram kapoor ka ...aur ye baat apne chote se dimag main   daal lo Priya sharma"
Saying that Ayesha opened the door of the car and sat in it!!
Ayesha :"Driver car farm house le ke chalo!!"
Priya stood there motionless.
15 mins later
Ram still was lost in his own world... he had no idea that where he was...or with whom he was nor did he care!!
Meanwhile Ayesha in the car thinking ..."Kash anushka ...ki goli priya ko lag jaati meri musibat wahi khatam ho jaati!!! Kash priya fir chali jaye ...par is ram ne sab bigaad diya ...kya karoon main ...shayyad wahi ...jo anu karte karte chuk gayi ... i will kill priya...aur ye ram ...wo to alrdy aadha mara hua hai ...i hav to wrk fast..iss baar koi galti nahi ho sakti "


To be continued Smile
part 2 - pg 2 
part3 - pg5  
part4 - pg10
part5-pg 11
part6-pg 13



Edited by luvumjht - 04 January 2013 at 6:00am

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged
oh oh nice start bas iss ayesha ko max dur rakho good start cont soon

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good start ... cont soon

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Nice start...do continue soon!!!


xoxo Priyanka <3

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Nice take, do continue soon ;-) ;-)
And can you plz change the text color? It's difficult to read ...
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Continue plz
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interesting start. continue soon
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plz plz plz !!!!! update soon !!!!!! i really liked it!!! Smile Smile Smile

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