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PART -2


Bansi told around 11'0 clock ...
11 oc lock ..God she was lying there for almost 6 hours ..He slid beside her hugged her tightly to give her warmthness ...
He cursed himself not caring for her but he hardly gets time to come home these days whenevr he comes Peehu is enough to pacify his worries ..
He remebered recent incident ...


* * * * * Flash back ...
Ram back to home at 12.30 pm..Priya is waiting for him to serve his dinner ,she slept off in a sofa while waiting for him ..
He is going to his room spotted Priya on sofa ..Why the hell she is sleeping here that too an akward manner ...Oh god her neck might be hurting ...
He slowly walked towards and smile curved on his lips seeing his lady love ...But the anger returned to his eyes that she btrayed him 5 years 5 long years ,,He sighed ,she felt his presence meanwhile Krishnaji came but stopped in her tracks seeing these pair ...
She propered herself ...stood up ..aap ..aap aagayi ...change your clothes and come i will heat up the food until than ...
I dont want
What she said ???
I dont want ,Especially from your hand for your kind information i alredy had my dinner with collegues ..
Nowhere tears pouted in her doe eyes ...Ram why are you doing this to me ?she asked between her sobs ...
He flinched his hands not to loose control over him ,maintaind angry face Plz dont call me Ram ...
For you its just Mr.Kapoor and mother of my child thats it ..No strong relation between me and you ..Do you get that .."

Krishu ji came in between ..Beta what are you talking ???
He raised his hand to pause her talk ..Plz Maaa let me talk with your undutyful daughter in law...Tears springing in her eyes
Now onwards don't wait for me ..PLz he rushed back to room to cryout in his heart ...
"In washroom ..splashing water on his face ..why on earth My heart is sinking while bashing her ...Oh god why i love her soo much ...
I cant even see her tears but what about this 5 years pain ,she is there in my every talk ,every walk ,every breath "he cried helplessly under the shower ..
He came after fresh bath ,slid beside Peehu and thinking what he had just done to her "

Slowly Priya came in to the room after clearing everything she changed to her night suit , walked to the window gazing at sky ...
Warm liquid pssing thrw her cheeks ...Ram is gazing at her from the bed .. He awares that she is crying...
Peehu coughed in her sleep ..It disturbd her thoughts she ran to her to soothen up ...
Peehu wokeup with sudden disturbance in her throat ...Priya poured water in a glass made her to drink...She sat beside her patting her back
Peehu clutched Priya's waist & slept peacefully ..Priya kissed Peehu she rested on head rest stilll in sitting position she dozed off to sleep ..
The clock striking 3 'o clock hunger pans wake up RAm he doesnt had anything from afternoon ..
He slowly walked towards kicthen ..settled with the food ..when he about to take a spoon ...
Krishu ji came and asked him to wait for a sec and she heated up food for him ...
He said sorry to her ...

why beta why you are telling sorry ,Its completely ok ..Have it ,she served him he had his food ..went back to room..
Krishuji went to kitchen dialed Some number meanwhile some utenstil fallen down banging on the floor ...
She hurriedly took that utenstil and kept the phone on loud speker clearing the vessels...
Priya"Ma did he ate ...
Ha beta he ate and loved all the dishes ,Cherished each spoon you dont worry ..
Thanks ma thank you very much ..I died thousand times when he wants to sleep empty stomach ...I know he hasnt ate anything ..
Love you ma ...now he will sleep peacefully ...
Priya ab tum bhi aajao na You said you are hungry too ... you also had something and sleep ...
Woo ma im not hungry right now ..will eat in the morning ...She disconnected the call feeling someone near to her ...

She astonished to see Ram standing with moisten and glared eyes ...

Krishu ji :Kya beta kya bath hai ?? kuch chahiye kya ?
Ha ma such chahiye ...Priya didnt have her dinner ...
Krishuji : NO beta she is actully waiting for you to come ...
Ram: his heart irked to the core ...He felt some one rincing his heart with sharp saw ...
Krishu ji :Beta its high time ..Let forgive her ...
He muted walked back to garden ..when he felt solaced thinking of all beautiful moments with her he walked back to their room..
Still Priya is sleeping on head rest ,Peehu clucthing priya's waist and sleeping and snoring away to glory ...
Her one hand posesively around peehu back ,other hand on peehu head ...A gentle satisfied smile on her face...
He very well know why she is smiling ..[That he had his dinner ]..In the morning while he is leaving for office also still she is sleeping ..
He worried and his male ego stopped him to go her ask what happen so he send peehu to wake her up ..
Peehu :Mamma ...mamma utho na
Priya :Good morning beta with slight opening of her eyes ,kissing peehu on her cheek,she searched for his love of life in the room but he is nowhere to be seen ..
Beta today is holiday na you go to nanu's house i willl ask the driver to send you off there ...
Mamma slept very late yesterday soo i badly wanted to sleep ..Plz honey ...
Peehu : ok mamma ...
Peehu leaving from there ...Paused her track by Priya's call ...
Peehu beta ...Has your father left to office ..
Ha mamma ...
ok beta ...
again she called her ..
Beta did he had his break fast ..
Yes mamma ..
ok Baby you enjoy your day ..
she rested on head rest clutching her head tightly ...
Haaa why its paining ...she slowly curled up herself in bed ...Slept unmindedly
Ram was watching all this from behind the pillar his heart sinkend up more seeing her like this ..
But he is unable to forgt those terrible 5 years ..Why priya why you did this to me...

From that time onwards she was never seen with him on the dining table nor with coffe ...But he has recognised her paleness but thought of she is feeling guilty ..
But he doesnt know his words literally teared up her heart apart ..."""

Coming to the present ...

Her shivers getting woorse by each passing second ... He embraced her in a very tight embrace ...
Kissing in her hairs ..Priya calm down baby ..plzzz see im here with you ..plzzz .
Meanwhile the doctor came and asked him what happend ...
He narrated the whole incident ...
Dont worry Mr.Kapoor ..she was there on the floor around 6 hours and that too in this cold season may be she will be having shivers ..
Can you plz hold on to her i will give an injection it might help her to reduce her shivers ...
So he slid up her sleeve .
The Doctor gave an injection to her ..She winced in pain in her unconcious state ...
He rubbed the area where the injection pierced her ,His eyes clouded with tears ...And he saw her star shape birth mark ...
Its his love mark ,without kissing the mark he hasnt finished his love to her anytime ...He remebrd that time and felt heavvy in his heart ...
They waited for 10 mins ...still she is shivering under him ...
He shouted at the doc what the hell is happnening why her shivers are not getting down ...

Cool Mr.Kapor i can understand your anxiety but in this type of cases it will be there for half an hour after giving the medication also ...
Plz solace her first .She needs someone ... by the time Peehu came fromm school ...started crying seeing the state of her mamma ..
Ram: Plz baby dont cry mamma will be alright ..see doctor uncle also here ...
Krishu ji : Solaced her in warm hug ...Looking teary eyed ...

slowly her shivers came down ...He left her made her lie down properly ...
He got up from her side sat on the edge of the bed near her legs ...


Precap : Where is her old prescriptions Mr.Kapoor ...
He confused and said doctor she was not on any medication ...
Doc : Mr.Kapoor i was only treating for a month on wards ...
Ram :Now his face turned into pale colour ...


Note :I know you guys are waiting for Priya to woke up ..But it will be in next part babies ..
Plz feel free to tell me ...and next part will be totally Rayalicious and caring Ram and sesuous Priya convos ...
Thank you for all the love ...Enjoy happy 12-12-12 guys ...




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Edited by luvsakshi - 20 April 2013 at 11:57am

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too good ..

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emotional n very well written

plz update next part soon badly need a good convo between raya

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nice update dear.. continue soon... :D

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Clapwow, Awesome work..Please continue soon..

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it is very nice thank you for updating soon...Smile

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Excellent!!! Lovely SS... It really brought tears to my eyes when Peehu said I want to do all of the things a normal child her age does with both mamma and papa and if it is too much to ask :(!  I have a 4 year old daughter and so, I am all the more emotional about Peehu!

Please can you make 12-12-12 extra special by providing RaYalicious romantic next update today?  Yeah intazaar bahooth painful hain!

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Lovely update.. It was so emotional.. Loved it!
Thanks a lot for the PM!

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