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simikr

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged

Hello guys!

Long time since I posted something new here, but I have been toying around with a couple of ideas in my head. I thought I'd share one of them with you and see what you think.  I will continue if you like. 



The Accidental Wife

 
 
Siggie credit goes to my dear pal Ramzz :)
 
 

Prologue



"Ek aur beer to calm the nerves?"

A loud burst of laughter... "Shantanu doesn't need anything to calm him down. He is going to be full on man. He can't afford to disappoint bhabhi, can he?" This was followed by another outburst of mirth.

Shan felt several friendly thumps on his back and returned them with the obligatory wry smile, that could be interpreted any which way desired.

And yes, he hadn't let a single drop of alcohol pass through his gullet----not because he was anxious to perform well on his wedding night and impress his brand new wife. In actuality he wanted to keep all his faculties intact in order to confirm the suspicion that had been gnawing at his brain ever since the wedding ceremony...and with every moment that passed, his anxieties were growing in intensity.

Unable to bide his time any longer, he stood up and marched towards his room not paying heed to the numerous whistles and catcalls which followed in his wake.

Thrusting the door open he strode towards the marital bed. He found it bare except for his bride's wedding finery which lay in a neat pile in one corner. Heart now pounding painfully hard in his chest, he scanned the vicinity fervently hoping that his concerns weren't true.

He approached the balcony door which lay wide open, and felt his pulse slow down slightly. Perhaps he had just been imagining it all.

A girl was standing there leaning against the railing with her face upturned towards the full moon. She turned around, "Finally! I've been waiting like forever!"

He frowned, straining to see the face which was in shadow. "Deepika?"

"Naa.. not Deepika.." She stepped forward into the light, a bright smile lighting up her beautiful face. His heart sank.

"I'm Khanak. Goodbye Shantanu."


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Here's the link to my blog.

Prologue-1
Chap 1A-3
Chap 1B-5
Chap 2A-8
Chap 2B-12
Chap 3-14
Chap 4-17
Chap 5A-24
Chap 5B-27
Chap 6-29
Chap 7-33
 






Edited by simiv - 11 January 2013 at 3:07pm

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Lovely start simi ClapThumbs Up
Waiting 4 next part...
Update soon!Hug

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 4:00pm | IP Logged
Wooow this is an unusual stiry cant wait to see what happns and how u make this story come alive and be one important thing on our life...
Continue babe...
Xxx

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Most Definitely!!!!!!1
Can't wait!

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
Hiya

Interesting start... Most definitely would like you to carry on :)

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
nice start... hope u continue in IF..

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Hhhmmm...Intriguing...Yeh Deepika kaun??
Ok if u would let me I'll start my questioning session here itself..LOL!!!!
Will wait for this tale...
Looking forward to it...

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
@ONAego: Thanks!

@Aasma: So sweet of you to say so. I hope I can make it happen:)

@Jenny: Thanks! I will soon. :D

@Alka: Thanks!

@Shalini: Thanks. I hope to.

@Ramzz: LOL you can ask Qs if you wish but the mystery will be revealed soon ;)

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