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Paulomi nice concept looking forward 2 ur wonderful writing

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OMGGG

Pallu – another SaRa FF

Wow- that's great

I m damn Happy Sweety.Big smileLOLBig smile

Thank u so much..

Beautiful startClap

Wonderful storyClap

Errr sam a spoil brat- and he betrayed Indira- very sad…ConfusedCry

But it would b interesting to read  such story

Plz do cont it

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Faria.

OMGGG

Pallu ' another SaRa FF

Wow- that's great

I m damn Happy Sweety.Big smileLOLBig smile

Thank u so much..

Beautiful startClap

Wonderful storyClap

Errr sam a spoil brat- and he betrayed Indira- very sad'ConfusedCry

But it would b interesting to read  such story

Plz do cont it

And thanx 4 ur pm

 


not actually betrayed ican rather say he was never serious about her  

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uss bechare ko to kuch pata hi nahi hoga iss baare...mein

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Intro, characterization and prologue seems interesting.
Want the first update very soon.
Do update soon.

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Originally posted by shafyyy

uss bechare ko to kuch pata hi nahi hoga iss baare...mein

ha usey pata hi nehi hoga kyuki Indira bina usey kuch kahe chali jaati hai na aur maahi ko bhi nehi pata hoga par anjaane mein jab dono ek saath honge na maahi us bechaare ka aisa band bajaayegi,haalat tight kar degi uskiLOL


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Originally posted by ratibob007

Intro, characterization and prologue seems interesting.
Want the first update very soon.
Do update soon.
after wednesday i'll start writting  

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CONCEPT,CHARACTER  SKETCH,PROLOGUE

CHAPTER-1

[ MOTHER  MARY  HOME , MANAALI ]

It was almost going to be 12.00 in the midnight.A girl was writting a letter to her father.

"Dear Papa,

Aaj mera 8th waala happy birthday hai.Aaj main purey 8 years ki ho gayi hu,par phir bhi maine aajtak aapko nehi dekha.Aap kaha ho papa?You know I miss you a lot.Vaise to mummy mujhe bohot pyar karti hai aur kabhi kabhi gussa bhi,par mujhe mummy ke saath saath aap bhi chahiye.Yaha pe aisa koi nehi hai jinse ke main aapke baare mein puch saku.Mummy ke vajah se koi mujhe aapke baare mein nehi bataata.Aap kaha rehte ho,mujhe nehi pata yahatak ki mujhe to aapka naam bhi nehi pata.Abhi thori der mein mummy aake mujhe wish karegi aur ek gift bhi degi,phir kal mujhe bahaar ghumaane le jaayegi.Par mujhe pata hai agar aap hote to aap mere liye ek bariya si party dete jaise mere dosto ke papa dete hai.Mere har birthday pe main bhagwaanji se yehi bolti hu ke mujhe aapse milaade,par vo to meri sunte hi nehi hai.Papa mujhe na isbaar cindrella ki sabse achchi waali frock kharidke dena aur shoes bhi aur pichle 3 saalo mein maine aapse jo jo gifts maange hai,mujhe vo bhi chahiye.Abhi mummy aane waali hai,bye.

                                                                Aap jaldi waapas aa jaao.I love you papa.

                                                                                                                  Aapki Maahi."

At that moment the clock struck 12 and she heard a footstep outside her room.Maahi immediately folded the paper and immediately kept it under her pillow.After a few seconds,Indira entered their room with a gift pack in her hand.Maahi sat properly on her bed and smiled on seeing her as if she was was really waiting for her for a long time.Indira too smiled back and sat beside her on the bed.She made Maahi sit on her lap and kissed on her cheeks and said,"Happy birthday mera bachcha.Aaj meri gudiya ek aur saal bari ho gayi hai.Ye lo tumhaari gift."Maahi opened the gift and found that it was the same doll which she chose last month,but due to scarcity of money during month end,Indira could not purchase the doll.As the people of Manaali were very helpful and friendly,so when Indira asked the shopkeeper to keep it in reserve for a few days until she gets her salary,he agreed.On the next month,she saved some money for the doll and bought it for Maahi.Maahi smiled broadly and said,"Thank you mummy.Aap na is dunia ki best mummy ho."She hugged Indira.Indira,too kissed on her forehead and said,"Main teri har khwahish puri kari karungi beta,bas tu yuhi muskuraati raha kar."Maahi broke the hug and asked,"Main jo maangungi aap dogi?"Indira nodded her head.Maahi asked,"To phir vo jo main hamesha aapse maangti hu vo dedo na."Saying she made a very innocent face.Indira understood what Maahi wanted from her.She closed her eyes for a second and then said,"Bohot raat ho gayi hai Maahi,so jaao.Phir kal school bhi to jaana hai."Indira then put off the lights,covered Maahi with the blanket and slept beside her.They slept by turning against each other.Indira said in mind,"Bas yehi ek cheez main tujhe nehi de sakti beta.Iam sorry.Tu mere jeene ka aakhri sahaara hai aur main tujhe kisi bhi keemat par nehi kho sakti.Apni ma ko maaf kar dena par main tujhe us insaan ke baare mein kuch nehi bataa sakti."Indira wiped her tears.Maahi said in mind,"Mummy hamesha aisa hi karti hai.Jab bhi papa ke baare mein pucho to ya to daat deti hai ya phir aise hi baat ko ghuma deti hai."She closed her eyes and continued,"Papa please aa jaao na papa.Mujhse aakar milo na papa please."A drop of tears fall from her eyes.

                                                                                           This was the daily routine of Indira and her daughter Maahi.When Maahi started understanding that her father doesn't stay with them,each and every day,without missing,directly or indirectly Maahi asked about her father to Indira.From the age of 5,Maahi started writting to her father,one letter each month.During her birthdays,she made a list of the things which she will be asking him to bring for her,whenever she'll meet him.She carefully keeps those letters in a box thinking that whenever she'll get his name and address,she'll post them.Maahi doesn't know anything about her father,but still she unconditionally loves him the most.She considers her father to be a star like that of films and TVs who could not be seen in real life.Indira too sometimes gets confused about these extents of feelings possessed by Maahi for a person whom she never saw.As usual,Indira sometimes gets jealous when she feels that Maahi's love is being shared or when she feels that Maahi loves her father more than Indira.Whenever,by mistake,Indira says anything about her father,due to slip of tongue,it becomes the most hot and happening news for Maahi.It is impossible even for Indira to measure the extent of Maahi's happiness at that moment.

 

[ DIWAN  HOUSE , DELHI ]

It was almost 12.30 am,when Sameer while working on his laptop,slept by putting his head on it.Suddenly,he opened his eyes with a jerk,as if just saw a nightmare.He looked on his laptop and saw it was still open.He closed it and got up from his chair.He then sat on the bed and started rubbing his chest.He drank a full glass of water and then very confusingly said,"Aaj mujhe itni ajeeb si bechaini kyu ho rahi hai?????Ek pal ke liye aisa laga jaise kisine mujhe pukaara."He took some deep breaths and then gave light strokes on his head.He said,"Sameer,Sameer,Sameer,what the hell are you thinking man????Kaun tujhe itni raat ko yaad karega???Lagta hai work load ke vajah se mera dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai.Upar se 2 din pehle hi main US se lauta hu.I think Iam tired and my brain needs rest.Ek kaam karta hu so jaata hu,kal ki kal dekhi jaayegi."He lied down on the bed and put off the lights.

 

[ MMH , MANAALI ]

Next morning,Indira as usual woke up early.She called Maahi and asked her to get ready for school.Maahi never likes to wake up early but she does for Indira.The task which she hates the most to do is going for a bath so early as Manaali always have a cold weather.When she came out of her bath,Indira helped her in wearing her uniform.While Indira was combing her hair,Maahi asked,"Mummy,aaj aap mujhe kaha ghumaane le jaaogi?"Indira asked,"Tumhe kaha jaana hai?"Maahi thought for a couple of time and then said,"Mujhe zoo mein jaana hai,phir park mein jaana hai,phir bahaar khaana khaane bhi jaana hai."Indira turned her towards herself and smiled,"Itna sab kuch ek din mein???????Na baba na,itna sab kuch ek din mein nehi ho sakta upar se zoo aur park mein hi bohot kharcha ho jaayega kyuki tum to wahaape sirf ghumne nehi jaati,tumhe to zoo mein saare animals ko kuch na kuch khilaana hi parta hai aur phir park ki entry fees bhi bohot zyaada hai.Tumhe to pata hai na,mummy ko salary kitni milti hai?Usme hum dono ka bhi chalaana parta hai aur phir yaha home mein bhi to dena parta hai.Isliye aaj hum kisi ek jagah par hi jaayenge."Maahi,like a very good girl nodded her head.After sometime,she made a very innocent face and looked at Indira.Indira asked,"Kuch puchna hai beta?"She,very hesitantly said,"Ha'..puchna'..to'..hai par pehle aap promise karo ke aap gussa nehi karogi."Indira guessed Maahi's next probable question.She,in a very stern manner,said,"Mujhe us baare mein koi baat nehi karni hai Maahi aur aaj tumhaara birthday hai isiliye main tumpe gussa bhi nehi hona chahti.So please,aaj aisi koi baat mat karna aur naahi vo saare faltu ke sawaal puchna."Maahi makes a very sad face and lowered her head.Indira became sad on seeing this and cursed herself.She cared Maahi's cheeks and said,"Mummy ne daat diya?Iam so sorry.Par tum to jaanti ho na ke mujhe ye saari baate bilkul pasand nehi hai."Maahi said,"Main jaanti hu mummy,par main kya karu main papa se bohot pyar karti hu na isiliye main unse milna chahti hu aur unke baare mein janna chahti hu.Please mummy aaj mera birthday hai na,aaj bataado.Zyaada mat bataana,thora to bataao na mummy.Aapko pata hai mere saare dost peeth peeche mera mazaak uraate hai kyuki mere papa nehi hai aur main is vajah se unhe kuch nehi keh paati.Please mummy bolo na papa kaha hai.Aap dekhna ekbaar papa mil jaayenge na to un sabka muh bhi bandh ho jaayega."Indira's heart squeezed with pain whenever Maahi said like that.Her heart cries from inside when she sees Maahi desperately craving for her father's love.The main head of the home,Joan D'Souza,whom everyone calls MOTHER,came to wish Maahi on her birthday but hearing their convo,she waited outside.She was watching the mother-daughter heart wrenching convo.She saw that Indira was about to cry,so she interrupted.Joan entered inside,"Oh ho Maahi,aisa birthday waala din koi aisi shakal banaata hai kya?Tumko pata hai mummy ne aaj tumhaara vaaste paraatha banaaya,tumko bohot pasand hai na aur tum yaha bethke rone ka tayyari kar raha hai?Main to aaj yaha tumko birthday wish karne ko aaya tha.Happy birthday."Joan kissed on Maahi's cheek and continued,"Jaao jaao jaldi karo abhi tumko school bhi to jaana hai na."Maahi nodded her head and went to the dining room.Indira wiped her tears and started getting ready for school.Joan said,"Indira,my child,hum tumhaara pain samajhta hai.Hum jaanta hai ke Maahi ke papa ka naam sunte hi tumko gussa aata hai,par isme is bachchi ka kya galti hai?Har bachche ka maafik,vo bhi apne papa se milna chahti hai.Tum usko thora bohot uska papa ka baare mein bataata kyu nehi hai?Aaj jo uska question hai vo uska umar ka saath saath barta jaayega phir kya karega tum?Kabtak yu daat kar dhamka kar usey chup karaata rahega?"Indira stopped what she was doing.Joan came near to her and rubbed her head and continued,"Main jaanta hai tum itne saalo tak bohot taklif se guzra hai.Apne ma baap se,sabse dur aakar rehna,apne bachche ko akele haatho baraa karna itna asaan nehi hota.You know for that Iam really very proud of you,kyuki tumhaara jagah agar koi bhi hota to itna himmat nehi dikha paata,par tumne haar nehi maana.Tumne Maahi ka jis tarah se single mother banke parvarish kiya vo bohot kam log kar paata hai.Par my child ek bachche ke proper development ke liye uska mummy aur papa dono ka hona bohot zaruri hai.Tum dekhta hai na ke apne papa ke baare mein sunte hi vo kitna khush ho jaata hai.Kamsekam uska khushi ke liye hi usey kabhi kabhi uska papa ke baare mein bol diya karo,bachchi ka mann bhi behel jaata hai."Indira took a deep breath and said,"Is dunia mein bohot saare aise bachche hai mother,jinke paas ma ya baap koi nehi hota,par vo jee rahe hai na aur raha sawaal Maahi ka,uske paas uski ma hai,itne din agar reh liya hai usne apne papa ke bina,to aagey bhi reh legi."She turned towards Joan and said,"Usko jab pata chalna hai,usey pata chal jaayega par main usey abhi kuch nehi bataaungi kyuki main nehi chahti ke us insaan ke baare mein vo kuch bhi jaane aur Maahi sirf aur sirf meri hai,kisika koi haq nehi hai uspar."Joan tried to explain her.But Indira stopped her and said,"Mother please,aaj Maahi ka birthday hai aur isliye main us shaks ke baare mein baat karke apna mood kharaab nehi karna chahti."She was about to leave for the dining room when Joan stopped her.She said,"Tumne aaj tak hum mein se kisiko bhi Maahi ke papa ke baare mein kuch nehi bola,par my child ek baat sachchi sachchi humko bataana kya tum aaj bhi us insaan se pyar nehi karta?"Indira's heart beat raised.It was very confusing as well as very surprising for her that,after 8 long years,still now,whenever she remember him,she could feel that same thrill which she used to feel when she was with him.But this feeling diminishes as soon as she remembers how he deceived her.She closed her eyes in anger and hatred.A drop of tear fall from her eyes.She then said,"No.I don't love him."Saying so she left.

                                                                                       In the dining hall,all came to have their breakfast.The lady who was serving them food,served Maahi wth the paraatha which Indira made for her.She,with a smile,said,"Aaj tumhaara birthday hai na Maahi,isiliye aaj tumhaare paraathe mein maine extra makkhan lagaya hai.Khaake dekho bara swaad lagega."Maahi's expression changed.She was very happy on seeing the paraatha but as soon as she heard that the lady applied butter on it,she made a face.She put up the paraatha with 2 fingers and exclaimed,"Kya?????Aapne isme butter lagaaya????Yaaak!"She immediately put the paraatha on the plate.The lady very confusingly said,"Arey bina makkhan ke paraatho mein vo swad hi nehi aata.Tumne pata hai hai desi ghee aur makkhan khaane se insaan strong banta hai."Maahi protested,"Aur aapko pata hai isme kitni saari calories aur fats hoti hai.Ye sab khaane se na aadmi mota ho jaata hai aur hamaare teacher ne bhi kaha hai ke mote logo ko heart attack jaldi parta hai."Indira,who was listening to her,giggled out at the way of her giving lecture on fitness.She was not smiling just because of Maahi's act but it reminded her of someone.Joan also came beside her and saw her smiling.Maahi asked,"Aap has kyu rahi ho mummy?Aapko pata hai na mujhe ghee,butter ke smell se hi ulti aati hai aur ye pakaane waali mausi ne mera pura paraatha barbaad kar diya."Indira smiled and said,"Mausi nayi aayi hai na,isiliye unko nehi pata hai.Koi baat nehi main tumhaare liye dusra banaa dungi."She went to the kitchen to make another paraatha.Joan too followed her.She said,"Tumhaara Maahi purey house ki heroine hai.Jis tarah se usne Shanti ko bola,mujhe bhi hasi aa gaya."Indira said,"Main is vajah se bhi nehi hasi mother.Vo asal mein uske papa ko bhi ghee aur makkhan se bohot allergy hai.Vo bhi isi tarah se-""Sachchi mein!!!!Mere papa ko bhi ghee aur butter achcha nehi lagta hai?"Indira didn't notice when Maahi stood by the kitchen door.She came running to Indira and hugged by her waist and asked,"Bolo na mummy,papa ko aur kya kya pasand nehi hai?Kya papa ko bhi mere jaise paraathe pasand hai?Bolo na?"Indira freed her grip and said,"Jaao jaake betho table pe main tumhaara paraatha banaake le aati hu."This time Maahi was not at all sad.She said,"Main na ye sabko bataake aati hu ke mere papa aur mera khaane mein pasand bilkul same to same hai."She ran outside.Joan asked,"Dekha vo kitna khush hai,aur aaj bhi itne saalo baad,tumhe jab bhi uska baare mein kuch bhi yaad aata hai,to tumhaara face pe smile aa jaata hai,phir bhi tum kehta hai ke tum usse pyar nehi karta?"Indira put the paraatha on the plate and said,"Main usey bhulne ki har pal koshish karti hu Mother,par ye hai na,ye mujhe bhulne hi nehi deti,khaaskar iski aakhe jo mujhe baar baar us dard ka ehsaas dilaati hai."Saying so,she left with the plate.In the dining hall,Maahi said to all,"Aap sabko pata hai,abhi na mummy ne kaha hai ke mere papa ko bhi meri tarah ghee,butter khaana bilkul pasand nehi hai.Isiliye aaj se main in sab cheezo ke taraf dekhungi bhi nehi."She turned to Shaanti and said,"Samjhi pakaane waali mausi."Shaanti said,"Ha ha samjh gayi,phir aisi galti kabhi nehi hogi."Maahi smiled broadly.

 

[ DH , DELHI ]

"Le beta khaale."As soon as Sameer,joined his parents on the dining table,his mother,Simi Diwan,forwarded a slice of bread with lots of butter on it.Sameer,on seeing it,immediately made a face and said,"Mom aapko pata hai na mujhe inke smell se bhi irritation hoti hai.To kyu aap'..""Chup reh! Baraa aaya.Main teri ma hu.Mujhe teri fikar hoti hai.2 mahine baad tu ghar lauta hai aur waha pe to dhang ka khaana bhi nehi milta hoga.Kitna dubla ho gaya hai.Par tu fikar mat kar main hoon na,tujhe yu desi ghee aur makkhan khila khila ke ekdam tandurust banaa dungi."This is Simi Diwan,typical bollywood mom.She is the only woman in Sameer's life,whom he loves very much but sometimes,he becomes very embarrassed due to this high dose of love especially when she behaves with him as if he is a 5 yrs old kid.Sameer is the only offspring of his parents.Sameer removed the slice and said,"Aap kuch bhi dijiye main khaalunga par ye ghee,butter is just impossible aur ye sab na aapki jaisi high BP ke patient ko bhi nehi khaani chahiye."Rajshekhar Diwan,Sameer's father,removed the newspaper from his face and interrupted in the middle,"Aisi baate nehi bolte beta.Achchi baate khaaskar unke sehat ko leke,teri ma ko kabhi raas nehi aati."Simi taunted,"Aapko bhi to high sugar hai,to aapne kaunsa meetha khaana chor diya hai?"He again concentrated on his newspaper since he had no reply to give.Sameer chuckled,"Shaadi ke 35 saal baad bhi aap dono aaj bhi bachcho ke tarah larte ho."Simi then turned towards Sameer and was about to say something,but Sameer said,"Mom,mere paas abhi time nehi hai.Office se aane ke baad aapki saar baate sun lunga.Abhi main chalta hu."Before Simi can stop him,Sameer quickly swallowed his juice,took his bag and left for his office.        
CHAPTER - 2                                                                             


Edited by -Paulomi- - 03 January 2014 at 12:54am

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