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~Love Blossoms : Arjun FF last chapter/pg139~ (Page 87)

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Posted: 13 March 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
sry fr d late comment..final xams gng on..nyc update ..loved arjun-roshni scenes nd concern fr each othr...those 3 pranksters.!!! hope dey speak out d truth..!

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Superb dear...
Update sooonnn...

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Part 41

Store room

Arjun didnt know wat to do...the door was just nt ready to budge and it seems that now they both were loosing it. That small half-opened ventilation window was nt letting much air to pass thru it. It was getting difficult to breath now also.  They didnt had water from the past 4-5 hours. Arjun observed Roshni restlessly moving at her place.

Arjun (assuring her) : "Kuch der aur..."
Roshni : "Pyaas...pyaas lag rhi hai sir...!"

Arjun helplessly looks at her. He noticed that Roshni was nt able to sit properly now, she was sweating too...may be her bp was getting low. Arjun got up from his place and sat next to her. Roshni looked at him. She knew that though he wont say but he sat there to give her support. She gave a faint smile to him. She shifts a bit towards him, holds his hand tightly for support, kept her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes.

Arjun (looks at her worried, in mind) : "Kaha ho tum Sam?"

Arjun leaned his head backwards on the wall and closes his eyes too to rest for a while.

***

Rathor : "Kya hai ye?"
Shreyas : "Sir wo..wo hume kuch nhi pata hai!"
Rathor (coming close to him and looking straight in his eyes) : "School me padhte ho na! To ye to zarur pata hoga ki jhooth kabhi nahi bolna chahiye."
Monica (looking at her partners in crime) : "Main batati hu sir!"
Rathor (moving to her) : "Bolo!"
Monica : "Sir wo hum log yaha school trip par aaye the. Aaj truth and dare khelte waqt Vicky ne Shreyas ko dare diya ki wo Mam ki photo le k aaye, aur bas usne wahi kiya bt unforunately Sir ne ise pakadh liya... Hum logo ko laga ki agar complaint ghar tak pahoch gai to problem ho jayegi to hum logo ne..."
Rathor : "Kya kiya tum logo ne..."
Shreyas : "But sir hum logo ko nhi pata tha ki wo log ETF se hai..aur fir hume laga baad me koi na koi to unhe nikal hi dega...tab tak hum log yaha se ja chuke honge..."
Rathor : "Main pooch raha hu kaha hai wo dono?..."
Chotu : "Sir! Ye Roshni ki watch mili hai bahar compound me..Wo area hotel ka bahot purana area hai. Maine manager se pata kiya hai, unhone bataya ki waha koi aata jata nhi hai.."
Rathor : "Ab tum teeno hume waha lekar chaloge..."

***

All three take the team to store room. The manager and a bellboy was also with them. Rathor, Shree and Chotu were tense for Arjun and Roshni.

Shreyas : "Sir yaha pe.."
Rathor : "Shree! Nazar rakho in teeno par. *touching the door, shouts* Arjun! Roshni!... Yeh darwaza khul kyu nhi raha hai. I think the door is jammed. Chotu!"

Both Chotu and Rathor pushed it hard and finally they break thru it. They all take a sigh of relief seeing them. Rathor and Shree enters the store room.  

Rathor (sitting beside them) : "Arjun! Arjun!"

As Rathor shakes Arjun's shoulder a bit, Arjun falls on him. Roshni who was leaned on him also falls to front where Shree supports her.

Rathor : "Arjun"
Shree : "Rosh! Sir!"
Rathor (shouts looking at Manager) : "Aap khadhe khadhe kya dekh rahe hai? Doctor ko bulaiye!"

Both were unconcious. Rathor was shaking Arjun. He cant afford to loose him, that too wen everything was changing for gud. Arjun and Roshni are taken to their rum respectively. Two separate doctors were called so that there is no delay in treatment. They were fitting in oxygen mask to their mouth. Rathor, Shree and Chotu were standing outside the room. Shreyas, Vicky and Monica were there too. They were feeling guilty now. Rathor looked at them furiously. It was their silly act that was responsible for all of this. If it wud have been possible for Rathor, he wud have definitely shown them how he treats his criminals by now. But Shree cudnt control himself and held Shreyas by his collar.

Shree (really angry) : "Agar kuch b bura hua na to dekhna main tum sab ko kaisi saza dilwata hu. Chodhunga nhi main. Apne ye saare stupid pranks bhool jaoge."

Rathor and Chotu were shockd. It was the first tym that he was that angry. Chotu held him and forcefully separated him from Shreyas. Shreyas, Vicky and Monica started crying hearing Shree.

Shreyas (crying) : "Sir hum log aisa kabhi nhi chahte the sir..."
Vicky (crying) : "Yes sir! Hum darr gaye the isiliye sir...plz sir..."
Monica (crying) : "Sir maine to in logo ko mana b kiya tha sir...meri to galti b nhi hai..."
Rathor (yells) : "Shutup! Just shutup all of u! Tum logo ko zara sa b andaaza hai ki tumhari in bachkani harkato ki wajah se... "
Doctor (came outside the room) : "Mr. Rathor! Dekhiye suffocation ki wajah se behosh hai dono...dono ko thodhi chote hai to maine dressing kar di hai... kuch der me hosh aa jayega. Fikr ki koi baat nhi hai."

Shree and Chotu rushed to see them.

Rathor : "Thank u so much doctor. *looking at manager* I want to see their teacher, ryt nw. Aur tum teeno yaha se hilne ki sochna b mat!"

Rathor, Shree and Chotu then chkd both Roshni and Arjun. It was a big relief now seeing them alryt. They came out of the rum and met their teacher. Rathor told him everything that had happened and askd him to make the school kids realise their mistake so that they never repeat this. He was now realxed a bit as Arjun and Roshni were safe now.

Rathor : "Galti kisi se b ho sakti hai lekin use chupana usse b badhi galti hai. Agar tum logo ko laga ki tum logo se kuch galat hua hai to tum use chupane k liye ek aur galti karne lage. Aur Monica tum, galat ka saath dene wala khud b utna hi galat hota hai. Agar tum apne teacher ko is bare me bata dete to baat kuch aur hi hoti. Tum log itne chote nhi ho ki ye b na samajh sako ki agar hum logo ko kuch der aur ho jaati to kya ho sakta tha..."
Monica : "We are..v r xtremely sry sir.."
Shreyas, Vicky : "Yes sir! V r sry sir!"
Rathor : "Ok raat kafi ho gayi hai. Tumhare teacher bata rahe hai ki kal tum log wapas b laut rahe ho...to sona nhi hai. Jao!"

Morning

All were in Arjun's rum. Rathor was sitting in an arm chair resting his head on its back. Shree and Chotu were also there sleeping on the couch. There was a nurse kept for Roshni in her room as her bp was very low and she might need more medication. Arjun got up and saw all of them. He then remembers abt Roshni and a slight whisper comes out of his mouth.

Arjun : "Roshni!"

He almost threw the blanket off and rushed to Roshni's rum.

Roshni's Rum

Arjun was standing in front of Roshni's rum but he was nt able to decide whether he shud enter or nt. As he was going to knock, the nurse opens the door.

Nurse : "Sir aap! How r u feeling nw? Aapko aaram karna chahiye."
Arjun : "M fine sister. Wo actually main..."

Arjun was just looking at Rosh worried which didnt go unnoticed by the nurse.  

Nurse : "Wo ekdum theek hai sir. Raat ko beech me uthi b thi. Abhi so rhi hai."
Arjun (smiles) : "Thank u sister"
Nurse : "Sir meri duty ab khatam ho gayi hai to main..."
Arjun : "Ya sure!"

Wen Nurse left

Arjun (looking at Rosh,in mind) : "Pta nhi kyu mujhe...Thank God u r ok Rosh!"

He comes out of the rum and finds Rathor curiously looking at him.

Arjun : "Ummm...tu uth gaya."
Rathor : "Nhi to! Wo kya hai na mujhe neend me chalne ki bimari hai..."
Arjun (irritated, moves forward) : "Shutup Sam! Wo main Roshni ko dekhne aaya tha.."
Rathor : "Maine to nhi poocha."
Arjun : "Nurse keh rhi thi wo ab theek hai.."
Rathor : "Maine ye b nhi poocha!"
Arjun : "To jab kuch poochna hi nhi to ghoor kyu rha hai."
Rathor : "Kyuki main ye soch raha hu ki jab aagaz aisa hai to anjaam kaisa hoga...main training ki baat kar raha hu. Abhi to hume do aur din yaha rukna hai..."


Part 42
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Edited by pink_fairy123 - 30 March 2013 at 12:11am

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Awesome update

loved the way Arjun supported her during the plight...

So they are finally out...thank god...zyaadha kuch hua nahi

Arjun' concerned for her and wishing to see her first...cool!
sweet and cute

neendh mein chalne ko bimaari...that cracked me up...Sameer is awesome!

cont soon!


Edited by vidya.anand - 21 March 2013 at 4:33am

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Awesum chapter

loved it

finaly both of dem safe

i m happy dat team  reached on tym...

liked arjun's concern for roshni 

waiitng for more

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Awesome!!!!

loved it!!!

Rathod was too good!!

Continue soon!

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Superb...
loved it
sam dialogues n he himself rocks!!
yup waiting to knw jab agaz aisa hua h to anjam lol...
congo as soon it gng to be reach 100 pgs..!!
thanx fr d pm dear!!..

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
nice chapter..
thank god dono safe hai
Sree's anger was bang on..
loved Sam's dialog at the end..
good going dear!!

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