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hey  updateee ssooonnn

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Heres the next part. Sorry thodha lamba ho gaya...

Part 27

Arjun : "Wo maine Gia k skool me baat ki thi ki wo kuch din baad skool join karegi. Usi k liye phone aaya tha.. "
Roshni : "Thank u...sir!"

Both smiles looking at each other.

Rathor : "Ok..to Gia se to ab kal subah hi baat hogi to...I think ab hume chalna chahiye.. "
Roshni : "Aur dinner?"
Rathor (smiles) : "Thank u Roshni... lekin fir kabhi!"

Next Morning - Roshni's flat

Arjun and Rathor were there. It was important for them...a few moments and they'll know that how much Gia is going to be helpful in this case.

Roshni : "Sir plz aap log.."
Rathor : "Main samajh raha hu Roshni...dont u worry!"

She goes inside and brings Gia. She sits in front of them on sofa, seeing them with her innocent eyes and moving her legs.

Roshni : "Gia!.."
Rathor : "Gia! Beta aapko chocolate acchi lagti hai? *and gives her a chocolate* Aapko kaun se games acche lagte hai?"
Gia : "Wo saare games jo mumma k sath khelti hu."

Rathor, Arjun and Roshni look at each other. Poor Gia was innocently rplying to their questions. Cry Rathor felt it difficult to question her but Arjun comes forward...as he knew that it is important for the case. Arjun then bends down and gently touches her face.

Arjun : "Beta! Jis din aapki mummy kaam se bahar gai, usse ek din pehle aapne mummy k saath kya-kya kiya tha?"
Gia (eating choc) : "Mumma pehle skool chod kar aayi aur fir baad me lene aayi thi, fir hum market gaye the.. uske baad raat me humne Tom and Jerry dekha tha..."
Arjun : "Fir?"
Gia : "Fir.." *tries to remember*
Arjun : "Yaad karo beta!"
Gia : "Haan fir hum log hide and seek khel rahe the...mummy ne kaha ki ek uncle aaye hai aur wo b khelenge aur fir mujhe kitchen me chupa diya...waha pata nhi kab main so gayi aur fir subah Roshni aunty..."
Arjun : "Bas beta!..Umm Ab aap ander jak khelo!"

Roshni takes Gia inside.

Rathor : "Iska matlab us din koi aisa aadmi aaya tha jise ya to Anika jaanti thi ya fir ..."
Arjun : "...ya fir ye jaanti thi ki koi us waqt aane wala hai aur uske intentions kya hai...jaise hi door bell baji...Anika ne Gia se hide and seek ka bahana banaya aur.."
Rathor : "..aur Gia ko kitchen cabinet me chupa diya...jaha suffocation ki wajah se wo behosh ho gai...murderer ne Anika ko maara aur waha se chala gaya...lekin ek simple working woman ko koi kyu maarega? uski kisi se kya dushmani?"
Roshni : "Sir ye Rohan hi ho sakta hai.."
Rathor : "Oh come on Roshni! Tum emotional ho kar soch rahi ho...Rohan ka angle hum log dekh chuke hai, uske alibis chk ho chuke hai...sab clear hai.."

Roshni is still not convinced. Shree and Chotu enters.

Rathor : "Kuch pata chala?"
Shree : "Sir maine ye tatoo scan kar k kaafi search kiya bt kuch pata nhi chala...kya pata koi naya gang ho.."
Chotu : "Naya gang hi hai sir! Mere informers se pata chala hai ki ye log bahar se aaye hai...Cuba se!"
Arjun : "Saxena ka case?"
Rathor : "Hmmm Commissioner sir ka pressure hai mujh par is case ko jald se jald solve karne k liye.. Aur ye Anika ka case b atka hua hai... main un logo ko b saza dilwana chahta hu jinhone ek masoom bacchi se uski maa cheen li.."
Arjun : "Its ok Rathor! Hum log jaldi hi ye dono case solve kar lenge!"

Few minutes later

Arjun : "Roshni tumhe aur kuch yaad aata hai... koi aur jisse Anika ki koi tension ho.."
Roshni : "Nhi.."
Arjun : "Accha wo jis company me kaam karti thi, waha ka address do!"
Roshni : "Sir main b chalungi!"
Arjun : "Aur Gia?"

They left Gia in neighbour's house and left for Anika's Office. They talked with her colleagues about her nature, behaviour and work realtions in the office.

Shailja (one of the colleague) : "Sir uska behaviour hum sabk saath accha tha...infact jab mujhe kai baar important kaam hota tha to humne kaafi baar ek dusre ki shift me b kaam kiya hai...very understanding sir..."
Arjun : "Pichle kuch dino me koi tension... kuch notice kiya aapne? "
Shailja : "Sir tension me to wo hamesha rehti thi... single mother thi, ghar par ek beti thi... office, ghar, bacchi...ye sab single handedly manage karna easy to nhi hai na sir...aur fir uska husband b aaye din phone kark use pareshan karta tha..."

Roshni saw a photo frame on the wall and she recognizes the person in the pic.

Roshni : "Ye tasveer.."
Arjun : "Kya hua Roshni?"
Roshni : "Sir ye tasveer..(to Shailja) ye tasveer kiski hai?"
Shailja : "Ye to hamare boss hai, Mr. Sarthak Baweja."

Arjun notices that Roshni is lil bit disturbed.

Arjun : "Hum inse milna chahte hai. Kaha hai abhi ye?"
Shailja : "Sorry sir! Wo to ek meeting me gaye hai shehar k bahar...aaj shaam tak hi aayenge! Main unhe phone.."
Arjun : "Its ok! Itni zaruri baat b nhi hai...Thank u for ur cooperation."
Roshni : "Bt sir maine inhe.."
Arjun : "Chale Roshni!"

Both come out of the office.

Roshni : "Sir aapne mujhe roka kyu? Hume abhi.."
Arjun : "Pehle ye batao ki tumne aise kyu react kiya. Kaise jaanti ho ise?"
Roshni : "Sir main aur Anika abhi kuch din pehle beach par ghumne gaye the. Waha car parking me ek aadmi Anika se kisi baat par behas kar raha tha. Maine poocha but Anika ne baat taal di..mujhe laga aise hi koi choti-moti baat hogi. But sir aaj ye photo dekh kar...Sir wo Sarthak hi tha.."
Arjun : "Are u sure?"
Roshni : "Yes sir! Kya pata uska kuch connection ho Anika k murder se!"
Arjun : "Dont worry! Wo humse nhi bach sakta lekin agar humne abhi koi movement ki to wo hamare haath se nikal sakta hai. Use laut kar aane do, hum use usi k ghar me pakdhenge."

He calls Chotu to make someone keep an eye on Sarthak's home. They return home. While parking the car, Arjun notices a balloon vendor.

Arjun : "Roshni, tum chalo main aata hu"

Wen Arjun reaches the flat, Shree opens the door and seeing the rough and tough cop holding balloons in front of him, make him blink his eyes. He open-mouthed makes way for him. Rathor and Chotu too are shocked seeing him lyk that.

Rathor : "Tumhe kya ho gaya hai?"

Gia came running from the room. Roshni brought her from the neighbour's flat a few moments ago.

Gia : "Balloon wale uncle!"

She xcitedly hugs him, gives a peck on his cheeks...she was really happy seeing all those balloons. Arjun was really happy seeing her happy and gives her all the balloons. But Rathor, Shree and Chotu were all shocked coz they not even in their dreams were xpecting him to be the mysterious 'Balloon wale uncle' LOL

Rathor : "To tum ho Gia k balloon wale uncle?"
Arjun : "Haan to?"

All three then looks at Roshni who was sitting just near to them. Roshni digs her face in the file that she was reading. Embarrassed Arjun was not getting what was so xtra ordinary for him being called that.

Arjun : "Isme itni hairaani ki kya baat hai...jab Shree chasmish uncle ho sakta hai, Chotu muscle wale aur tum moocho wale uncle ho sakte ho to main balloon wala uncle kyu nhi ho sakta.."

All three then look at each other, touching muscles, specs and moustache respectively.

Rathor (touching moustache) : "Moocho wale..hmmm gusse wale se to accha hi hai.."

All look at each other and have a hearty laugh on that. Shree then start cracking jokes on their names and takes out his hand in front of Rathor for a hi5, only to take it back after Rathor's look.

Rathor : "Gia bacchi hai, tum nahi."

Roshni and Chotu chuckles. Chotu's phone rings.

Chotu : "Haan..haan..theek hai..waha se hilna mat. Main aa raha hu! (to Arjun) Sir Sarthak laut aaya hai."

Arjun gives a look to Rathor and Roshni. They all get ready with their guns.

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Part 28
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Edited by pink_fairy123 - 03 February 2013 at 10:57pm

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
haye first to comment!!
loved it!!
lovely update dear!!

Edited by kunchu - 01 February 2013 at 4:39am

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 4:45am | IP Logged
wow nice twist
finally everyone came to know about "baloon vaale uncle"LOL
loved it a lot

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Balloon wala uncle...
Chasmis uncle...
Muche wala uncle...
Muscle wala uncle...lolz
that was a great update...
Loved it..

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Nice update

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
so the clues are finally facing up...
i hope the killer is tracked soon...
loved the balloon waala scene...
Gia is a cutie...sweet innocent...

cont soon!

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 4:54am | IP Logged
awesome...Smile
ballon wala scene was too touchy.. 
wish case jaldi se solve ho jaye..
continue soon dear.

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