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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
oooh niceClap
pm please?

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 7:23am | IP Logged
OMG! Pearly! You had me hooked from the quote to the very end! Clap Clap Clap

That was fantastic writing! Now I'm very curious!!! At first, I thought he had never seen Aarti again, but you threw me for a loop that she's his wife! Shocked 

Another thing I loved was, it's from his point of view! Thumbs Up That made it an even more delightful read!

Please update soon! I'm eagerly waiting! Wink

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
woww loved it...fantastic.


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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Thank you for the PM Pearly. This was beautiful!! The circular motion of Yash's thoughts, the love pouring out of him for Arpita, the wistfulness at her loss...Superb!!

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Superb Pearl.. Post the update soon! PM me please once u update! EmbarrassedWink

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
nice!!

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Finally my Pearl-girl, finally!! I am so so happy that you finally wrote a fiction and better yet - posted it for us to read. Loved it!!

The beginning reminded me of one of my all-time favourite movies - KKHH. And just like the movie, i adored the story. I can guess why she disappeared on his wedding day - but how did Arti come back? What happened 3 months ago? And how did they end up getting married so quickly? Yash hasn't gotten over his anger and hurt yet it seems - how is she going to win him over? Really looking forward to the continuation...

And Pearl - thank you! Am so happy you are writing again Hug.

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Beautifully written, Sweetie Clap Clap
Loved it to pieces Heart 
Can't wait for more Wink

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