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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 1:13am | IP Logged
pearl ,

dear .. SUPERB UPDATE
loving the story line
I am very eagar to know about Arati's past
Yash's concern for ill arati is so cute
both of them are suborn and emotional .. that makes them wonderful; couple with a difference
enjoyed reading it
waiting for next to yash's seva for his ill biwi
continue soon

thank you for PM




aditi



Edited by gcluv - 18 January 2013 at 1:09am

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged
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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
nice  update

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 7:50am | IP Logged
omg this is a really beautiful story dearClapClapClap
filled with suspentionWink
and i specially like the way your story telling ClapClapClap
and each and every update is so interestingClapClapClap
now i'm eagerly waiting for the next updateDay Dreaming
btw thank you very much for the pm dearHug

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
wow...nice update pearlBig smile
seems  yash started loving aarti Embarrassed
waiting for next update !!!!!!

thanks for PM Hug

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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 9:21pm | IP Logged

No need to apologize for the length of the update, Pearl, it was lovely.  Big smile   I like that Yash finally confronts her about what seems to be trouble her. So the mystery about her behavior continues.

(She looked up at him, and he felt himself getting drowned in those pools of eyes) "It's just a mild fever, it will go away…don't worry, I am…"

(Next second, he picked her up in his arms)… "Yashji!" (She gasped, wide eyed!) "Mild fever, my foot, how mild your fever is" (He said with full authority and looked at her with l-know-you-are-lying look.)

"Yashji…I am fine!" (She said in a mild voice.)

"Shut up!"

"But…"

"I know how stubborn you are and how stubborn you can be, but Mrs Aarthi Yash Scindhiya, you're dealing with me and you know I am ten times more stubborn then you…. so don't even try."

With that he carried her to the bedroom…

They have a really good power struggle going on here. It's multilayered and subtle at first, but increases as he confronts her a little later on. I like! I like a lot!   Approve  I look forward to seeing how their interaction alters after this.

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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Another wonderful update pearly loved it.

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
sorry but better late than neverEmbarrassedBig smile..
 haha, it's raining very good updates of FFs for me..
Thanks a lot Pearl..i'm waiting for the next oneWink

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