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No need to apologize for the length of the update, Pearl, it was lovely. I like that Yash finally confronts her about what seems to be trouble her. So the mystery about her behavior continues.
(She looked up at him, and he felt himself getting drowned in those pools of eyes) "It's just a mild fever, it will go away…don't worry, I am…"
(Next second, he picked her up in his arms)… "Yashji!" (She gasped, wide eyed!) "Mild fever, my foot, how mild your fever is" (He said with full authority and looked at her with l-know-you-are-lying look.)
"Yashji…I am fine!" (She said in a mild voice.)
"Shut up!"
"But…"
"I know how stubborn you are and how stubborn you can be, but Mrs Aarthi Yash Scindhiya, you're dealing with me and you know I am ten times more stubborn then you…. so don't even try."
With that he carried her to the bedroom…
They have a really good power struggle going on here. It's multilayered and subtle at first, but increases as he confronts her a little later on. I like! I like a lot! 
I look forward to seeing how their interaction alters after this.
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