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Destiny's Decree- Chapter Five! (Page 24) (Page 17)

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Pearl, Sorry for being so late! Had an extremely busy weekend! Embarrassed

That was a fabulous update dear! OMG! Your emotions were so spot on! Clap Clap

Yash's confusion mixed with curiosity; Aarti's turmoil and pain is so clearly written! Thumbs Up Even with such progression, you managed with include the cute scene with the children and Yash's subconscious awareness of Aarti! Last but not least, the final sentenceBlushing...that is to be continued. Angry

I'm shamelessly begging for an update soon! Embarrassed I know, I know...I have to increase my patience limit! LOL

Love you! Hug

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Editted on page 13 as well. Embarrassed


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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Awesome SSHeart..thnx for the PMHug

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
hi pearl, i got ur pm 
i already read  all parts of your this ss Destiny's Decree .i loved and enjoyed readingSmileClap.
i m excited and waiting for you next updates.Thumbs Up
superb work..Clap



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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged
You have no idea what an amazing writer you are Pearl Hug

I have never read something like this!

Its different , unique & awesome!

The last para Day Dreaming Blushing

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
pearl'


sorry for the late response
read the last two part at a go ..

so lovely 
i am dying to know the past of arati and the reason how yash got married to arati 
love your writing style
the way -- your story moves from past -present --past   is just superb 
waiting for next update
you have raised curiosity in me to see the reaction of arya after their gentle kiss 

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Pearly Res.
Spare me till Christmas Holidays

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged

Hey PearlBig smile  Thanks for your PM! I wasn't able to read through immediately, which is why I'm responding so late. But I got some time today and this newest update is wonderful. Your first paragraph is one of my faves:

He said nothing and just laid down beside her, wondering what has happened to her, she used to be so chilled out, carefree, full of life always living like there is no tomorrow. But then what happened now….she does not react to anybody except kids, does not talk to anyone unless and until it is necessary, always lost in thoughts and when someone calls, she startles every time, the Aarthi he used to know, she is not that, Aarthi. He looked at her, sleeping form, few strands of her hair were on her face, and he could tell that it was irritating her, very slowly; he placed them behind her ear. Her hairs, he always had some kind of liking for them, even in college. College, a smile formed on his face, college was so different and who thought his life would be like this, that one day, he'll be so confused with his feelings for Aarthi that he can't even ask, what her problem is, and Aarthi, he somewhere, always knew she loved him and she still does, well…maybe not. Noticing her behavior from their first meeting 3 months to till now…really made him believe that. Her actions, gestures, and the fear in her eyes…. in their first meeting is still a fresh in his mind and it pricked his heart that day and whenever he remembers, it still does. That day, when they first met, after 6 years...

It has such a bittersweet undercurrent to it, which allows me to better understand Yash's curiosity and his concern about the reasons for what has changed his Aarti and scares her so much. I really enjoy how you explore Yash's attention to her and who she is.

He sighed. This was something new, Yash with addition of ji in it, he didn't like it, this ever growing formality with each passing day and her being distant, only talking with Payal and Palak, Payal ,Palak ,they always had an easy way with her and he always wondered, what kind of a bond, she has with them. In their first meeting, itself, they behaved like they have known each other since ages and as if, as if she was their own mother or his Pari. Aarthi and his angels first meeting was something, he'll never ever forget.

Aw, this paragraph about the Aarti and the kids made me smile so much.   Big smile

Aarthi, was scared, how in the world, she is going to wake him up?! But whatever it is, she has to do it, no matter what. She slowly entered their room and saw Yash peacefully sleeping. She slowly went ahead and…tried to wake him up, putting a hand on his shoulder, said in a meek voice

"Yashji…Yashji….wake up, its nine, you have to go for office."

"hmmm….let me sleep"

"Yashji..mmmyji…"

Before she could complete what she had to say, he pulled her towards him and they felt a current ran down their spine when their lips brushed each others…

What an ending!  Blushing   I'm looking forward to the continuation. 

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Beautiful update PearlClapClap... Wow... from their first meet till now he senses something wrong with her simply by her gestures... Now this is what we call a soul mate connection??? i am so curious to know the mystery behind Aarti's sudden change in behavior. I have this strong feel that he has some feelings for herWink.
How Yash still remembers her favorites as also his college days bringing a smile on his face. i am sure these both were real riotsLOLLOL
The last scene where Yash had pulled her and their lips brushing... gave me a tickling feelEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.

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