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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged
Thanks for d Pm Pearl...wonderful update...

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Beautifully written she said.. And i say wow...

Xiao Hei

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Pearl, Sorry for being so late! Had an extremely busy weekend! Embarrassed

That was a fabulous update dear! OMG! Your emotions were so spot on! Clap Clap

Yash's confusion mixed with curiosity; Aarti's turmoil and pain is so clearly written! Thumbs Up Even with such progression, you managed with include the cute scene with the children and Yash's subconscious awareness of Aarti! Last but not least, the final sentenceBlushing...that is to be continued. Angry

I'm shamelessly begging for an update soon! Embarrassed I know, I know...I have to increase my patience limit! LOL

Love you! Hug

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Editted on page 13 as well. Embarrassed


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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Awesome SSHeart..thnx for the PMHug

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
hi pearl, i got ur pm 
i already read  all parts of your this ss Destiny's Decree .i loved and enjoyed readingSmileClap.
i m excited and waiting for you next updates.Thumbs Up
superb work..Clap



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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged
You have no idea what an amazing writer you are Pearl Hug

I have never read something like this!

Its different , unique & awesome!

The last para Day Dreaming Blushing

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
pearl'


sorry for the late response
read the last two part at a go ..

so lovely 
i am dying to know the past of arati and the reason how yash got married to arati 
love your writing style
the way -- your story moves from past -present --past   is just superb 
waiting for next update
you have raised curiosity in me to see the reaction of arya after their gentle kiss 

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Posted: 17 December 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Pearly Res.
Spare me till Christmas Holidays

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