Destiny's Decree- Chapter Five! (Page 24) - Page 2

Deepti1808

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very interesting Pearl.

So Yash and Arpi had a love cum arranged marriage.

Aarti is the friend but now the lawfully wedded wife but Yash does not consider her is wife. Again interesting.

Where does Aarti stand in all this??

They met again and got married. WHY ????

Lots to look forward to Pearl.

Well written !

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Morris

@morris

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very beautifully written. 👏

I liked how you retained Arpita as the lovely soul as in the show. Now more eager to know the relationship equation between Yash & Aarthi.

You write very well, Pearl. Please continue soon. 😊

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saf24

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written Pearl. Great start and looking foward to what comes next.

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villager00

@villager00

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pearl, the next part better be on it's way😉 i'm trembling in anticipation😃

great start!

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sweetone

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Posted: 11 years ago

beautifully written. please update as soon as possible.

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely. Continue soon...

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

oooh nice👏

pm please?

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG! Pearly! You had me hooked from the quote to the very end! 👏 👏 👏

That was fantastic writing! Now I'm very curious!!! At first, I thought he had never seen Aarti again, but you threw me for a loop that she's his wife! 😲

Another thing I loved was, it's from his point of view! 👍🏼 That made it an even more delightful read!

Please update soon! I'm eagerly waiting! 😉

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Manali

@I_LoveYou_Kanha

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Posted: 11 years ago

woww loved it...fantastic.

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you for the PM Pearly. This was beautiful!! The circular motion of Yash's thoughts, the love pouring out of him for Arpita, the wistfulness at her loss...Superb!!

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