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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged
hmm... well this is a different approach... i'm really not fond of such stories, but i am a 100% sure that you'll do justice to the story! 

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged

I want to hug you,Avi..you have already set the wheels in motion ...

 
Khushi , an assassin ( reminded me of, The Jackal  ), victorious in  silencing her target,  and then blending into the exodus of people,  ...  She was placid (despite the victim receiving a caveat of his impending death) , and then things turning fortuitous...She seems to be proficient ...
Am impatient, now...and thanks heaps for the PM :))))
 
 

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 5:32am | IP Logged
I... love it!Clap
That's an amazing concept, Avi. Khushi is like the sort of deadly but hot spy/assassin you normally get in those thriller novels, but since it's Khushi Kumari Gupta, it's gonna be a hell lot better, right? Wink

Can't wait to see how this unfolds.. Will ASR be a target for her?

Hmmm.. Plausible, but is it probable? Dunno.

Right. I'm ranting.

Brilliant read, for a prologue. Update soon! LOL

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Assasin? Khushi Kumari Gupta?? Brilliant prologue...high intrigue value...

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
@dreamyshadows: Awesum n fantastic!!!!Smile 

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
simply fabulous
loved it,...

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shay1990 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
RES!

Because Avi threatened us all Approve


Edited*

So here i am as promised! I was actually going to copy and paste my email to you like Anissa (lol) but i can't seen to find it Ouch So I'll save that for chaptaaahhh waaan Wink


HAYYYEEE!!!

The intensity. The gripping moment. The disgustingly beautiful descriptions... You blow my mind Avinaash. You really do, How the hell do you expect me to give you negative feedback?! You tell me that now? *looks intently at Avi*

EXAAACTLLYY!

It's just not possible *folds arms defiantly*

The fact that you have managed to create something so different and so off the scale is beyond me. And you have done it so elegantly my little amazing darling you!

You just know Khushi is going to be BADASS in this! My kind of Khushi Wink
You don't want to mess with her... Assassin jo ban gayi woh.

So to end... My favourite part? Pure and simple, this line:


Appearances ruled the World.

Why? Because it's bang on! This line punched me in the face with it's realism. Fantastic Avi.. You are FANTASTIC! Because appearances DO rule the world. It's all a mask... It's all a lie. #RealTalk

So that's it from me. But one more thing though..

I love you Heart



Edited by shay1990 - 10 December 2012 at 3:04pm

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
this is very different but very good
khushi as an assassin and a reputable one it seems too
looking forward to more

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