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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged
I am a stone on the dirty road..

Kicked, trampled, submerged in mud 

Void of emotions, I lie on the ground...

For me there's no love, no joy, no care

For me there is no hope..

I lie there on the road waiting for you, everyday, every moment

And you come to me, everyday, every moment

In different attires, in different gestures

To hit me, smash me, and throw me into the stink

Sometimes I feel the touch of your palms

And then get thrown at the other you in front..

I have colours, they are stains

Of mud...

And some more of blood...


I am a stone on the dirty road 

Witness to all the love and hatred between you

I don't have a voice, but I don't have any complaints

For you do have a voice, but you never complain...


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Hi people.. okay this was something very very abstract, I still don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this.. but yes, after a looonnnggg time I have written something other than exams and assignments.. so thought I would share with you all.. Thanks for reading :)

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
awww...<3 Hug

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged

wow it was a very nice poem
a stone on a dirty road with void of emotion..
but the way u have presented this stone how could i say that stone has void of emotion..:D
very beautifully written..

I have colours, they are stains

Of mud...

And some more of blood...
I am a stone on the dirty road 

Witness to all the love and hatred between you


sighhh very deep meaning of above lines..
awesome yaar
i m really very glad to c u writing after long time
keep it up



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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
wao Jiya
its beautiful
amzing

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Ohh no!!! m feeling bad for me..Ouch
when i got ur pm i was like hoping for ur ff update which u had promised what it feels like longgg back now!!!
well m not complaning u know i want u to update that n even waiting from sooo long...Unhappy so plzzz do make time to atleast give one update plzzz Unhappy Thank u.

n abt ur Poem...
it was sooo Awesome!
i mean Beautifully written
loved it...well i wud love more to read an Urdu poem of u Wink
loved it
do write more
love ya...Hug

ps: plzzz rmmbr my req..Ouch

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
beautifully written jiya Smile

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
That's poetry, isn't it? It comes to you out of thin air, anytime, anywhere.

This is such a beautiful poem. It is fantastically penned. This is raw, beautiful poetry! :)
Great job!Hug

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 4:49am | IP Logged
I lie there on the road waiting for you, everyday, every moment

And you come to me, everyday, every moment

In different attires, in different gestures

To hit me, smash me, and throw me into the stink

Sometimes I feel the touch of your palms

And then get thrown at the other you in front..

I have colours, they are stains

Of mud...




omg jiya i loved it its soo beautiful specially the aboove mentioned lines... its so deep and thought ful...


keep writing dear Hug

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