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YOU DID IT ADU!!


I'm so proud of you. Patting your back zor zor se LOL

There is no doubt you are here on 3rd thread...coz u write so beautifully.Smile

May u reach till the 10th thread and still plans to make them reach to  50th.Big smile

Hahahahahhahaahaa

Ok now coming to the update...

I love this song, so what it was just a melody...

Adu u made that ambience for reader to lure more n more Clap

N those edits are too beautiful...Thumbs Up

I loved that Ishq shava... Day Dreaming

The update started with very beautiful morning, and Rey's attraction towards it. 

Who doesn't want to reach for the freshening environment after such terrible phase of life.

You know I'm a diehard fan of your approach to make the simple sentences so captivating Thumbs Up

Such as "Rey wanted to hear the music of her steps" and "His lips were floating in ocean of smiles"... 

There are loads more...

Awww... the poor baby got excited on witnessing flowers but to his bad luck it was not from his love. LOL

Hhahaha this Vicky I tell you... first he is ready to be a grand maa or grand paa n now he is behaving all dumb... ROFL

I'm sure Kria had that radiance because of new excitements, new morning and new feel of her love not because of putting some PONDS RADIANCE cream  ROFL

Awww... Rey's 1st love is back to him with all the elegance she had before.

Good job Kria n Ali! Make one for me to pweaseee Big smile

Uiii... m loving this Rey... his old pose made me imagine him so lovingly and childish...

N our innocent Kria knows how to light things prevailing like she said 'Mr Khadus! You are taking advantage of the moment" when was drown in a pool of emotions.

Rey said "everything is fine but am I supposed to tell her that I lost last two races? Kria ended laughing. 

Loved these lines..

Haah! Finally done with the review... don't expect me to give such long ones on a daily basis 

I may suck at words...LOL

Telling you once again... Adu you are my star writer Star

Luv

Do I need to tell LOL

Your Manu Hug




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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
yippeee update mil gya... finally...
DancingDancingpehle toh congo shongo for d third thread... DancingDancingParty

coming to d update...
it was really really super awesome...
vicky is such a nice frnd  Smile... he made rey sit on his bed...LOL
rey desperately waiting for kria... awwiee...Wink
kria is sooo sweet she brought bak rey's bugatti... wow...Embarrassed
kria drove drove to singhania mansion n rey's stubborn look..LOL
kriyaansh cute moments in his room ...  loved it...Blushing
rey didn't liked d soup but drank it becuz of kria ... awwiieee.Embarrassed
rey ke dialoges ... haha...
waiting for d next update ...
update soon ...


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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Congratzz for 3rd thread
loved the update
its mind blowing

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congrats for the new thread..

n the update was cute

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congrats for the thirf thread and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

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congrats for third thread...
and the update was mindblowing...superb
loved it very much

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congrats aditi for 3rd thread...and the part was awesome

loved the cute little moments of kriyansh and there sweet romance and teasings were superb
mindblowing
loved it very much

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