Joined: 01 November 2011
YOU DID IT ADU!!
I'm so proud of you. Patting your back zor zor se
There is no doubt you are here on 3rd thread...coz u write so beautifully.
May u reach till the 10th thread and still plans to make them reach to 50th.
Ok now coming to the update...
I love this song, so what it was just a melody...
Adu u made that ambience for reader to lure more n more
N those edits are too beautiful...
I loved that Ishq shava...
The update started with very beautiful morning, and Rey's attraction towards it.
Who doesn't want to reach for the freshening environment after such terrible phase of life.
You know I'm a diehard fan of your approach to make the simple sentences so captivating
Such as "Rey wanted to hear the music of her steps" and "His lips were floating in ocean of smiles"...
There are loads more...
Awww... the poor baby got excited on witnessing flowers but to his bad luck it was not from his love.
Hhahaha this Vicky I tell you... first he is ready to be a grand maa or grand paa n now he is behaving all dumb...
I'm sure Kria had that radiance because of new excitements, new morning and new feel of her love not because of putting some PONDS RADIANCE cream
Awww... Rey's 1st love is back to him with all the elegance she had before.
Good job Kria n Ali! Make one for me to pweaseee
Uiii... m loving this Rey... his old pose made me imagine him so lovingly and childish...
N our innocent Kria knows how to light things prevailing like she said 'Mr Khadus! You are taking advantage of the moment" when was drown in a pool of emotions.
Rey said "everything is fine but am I supposed to tell her that I lost last two races? Kria ended laughing.
Loved these lines..
Haah! Finally done with the review... don't expect me to give such long ones on a daily basis
I may suck at words...
Telling you once again... Adu you are my star writer
Do I need to tell
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congrats aditi for 3rd thread...and the part was awesomeloved the cute little moments of kriyansh and there sweet romance and teasings were superb
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