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IPKKND FF: Winning You Back (Ch.16,pg.106) UPD:2/16 (Page 52)

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
I am confused about Anjali 

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 6:44am | IP Logged
I just started reading your FF.

"Khushiji needed someone. You weren't there. I was." The accusation was blatant in NK's eyes. Unable to answer it, Arnav focused instead on the trivialities of their confrontation.

"It's Bhabi to you."

"I'll call her Bhabi when you treat her like your wife."

All I can say is very well written. and You deserve Clap for the above dialogue. Well done.

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
woah superb lovestory! so emotional!

ve just started reading ur ff and ive finished reading it all in 1 go.

loved ur style of writting. 

felt so bad for khushi, it must be awful for her, the person she loves so much did not had 1 inch of trust in her!

hope u continue soon. n plz plz plz can u pm me next time u update:)

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged

read all the parts in one go and loved it I hope is okay and Arnav repent for all he did to her do update soon

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
i read it all in one go...Smile

the story is sooo good...very emotional...

jus loved the way Payal reacted to arnav's  accusations...tis side of her was a surprise..
he doesnt trust any1 does he...??his ego is his biggest enemyAngry
the final chapter was like...WOW...Clap

arnav knew the truth but still kushi had to pay the price...like everytime...Cry

i wish he learns his lesson ...but i don want him to lose kushi(*nervous* )

i knw she wouldnt forgiv him easily..

and anjali,...she is guilty..does tat mean SHE KNEW...Confused

u r taking the story at the right pace...and ur dialogues are just awsome...
update soon..Smile

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Loved it, you described everything I wanted to read! Perfect the way you kept to the characters emotions! 
 Loved especially NK with his hand on Arnavs shoulder and the way he said " she will die", I can just imagine it in my head...you write so beautifully! Clap
Continue soon, I'm waiting with bitten fingernails ! Shocked

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
thanks...brilliant

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Hey...eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Please do update soon!

Cheers...

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