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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AmylovesArshi

Awesome start. Plzzz continue
thanks...i will try to post the next chapter soon...

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Originally posted by mahirakhan9

nice
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Originally posted by janhavi58

Nice, cute..!!
please continue it..
waiting for the next update..!!Smile
thank you so much...:) i will continue soon...

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Originally posted by kumarandils

very nice well written Clap

waiting for the next part Smile

thanks...am glad you liked it...Smile

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Nycc FF plz continue soon

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 12:20am | IP Logged
nice ff ...waitng for the next part

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Nice part. Cont it soon...

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Part 2

Naitik was in his room with Mohit playing a video game. Naitik loved to play video games and he was really good in them too, so it wasn't surprising when Naitik beat Mohit again.

"Kya yaar….tere saath khel ne main maza nahi ha…." Mohit said as he threw himself back on Naitik's bed. Naitik laughed as he sat down on the bed too….. "Wo isiliye kyunki tu hamesha har jata hai."

"Main hamesha nahi harta….kafi bar tujhe haraya bhi hai…."

"Ha….sirf ek bar…."

"Wo sab chor….Rashmi kaha hai?? Usse meri baat his nahi huyi...pehle hamara nam sign up karaya us dance competition main or baat main khud hi back out karliya…"

"Chor na…..Rashmi ko library main kuch kam tha….isiliye…."

"Waise teri partner kaun hai...Akshara right….?"

"Ha…kyun?"

"Avei…..tujhe to nachna nahi ata…use ata hai na? Ya phir aisa na ho jaye tum dono stage pe aise hi gol gol ghum te raho…."

Naitik gave Mohit a friendly punch on the shoulder. "Couple dance main dance bhi hota hai kya?"

******

The next day at the University….after the regular classes, Varsha stopped Akshara while going into the auditorium.

"Kya hua Varsha?"

"Wo Akshara….mujhe ghar jana hai…aj tere saath auditorium nahi ja paoongi."

"Kyu?"

"Wo ghar main thode guests arahe hai…ma ne subah hi kaha tha jaldi wapas jane ko."

"Tu pehle bhi bata sakti thi na?"

"Sorry yaar….pata nahi kab dimag se nikal gaya….tu ja na…"

"Accha thik hai…bye…"

"Bye…"

Akshara stepped into the auditorium. Shaurya must have left University long ago….the dance rehearsals happened after classes and he never stayed back….. "Kitni bar kaha use…phir bhi nam nahi sign up kiya" Akshara muttered to herself…..

After the dance rehearsals, Akshara rushed to the bus stop to catch her bus. She usually used to go back with Varsha...she had first decided to call home and ask her mom to send a car but her phone's battery died out …so she decided to catch the bus to go home….while waiting, she realized it was past 4 and usually no bus came at this time in this road. She got really irritated when it started raining….

"Hi," a voice called out to her from behind.

She turned around to see Naitik, slightly drenched as he came over to her. "Bus ka wait kar rahi ho?" he asked. He looked very cute in his half drenched hair and blue shirt and black pants. "Ha…."

"Par is waqt yaha se koi bus nahi jata…." Naitik said gently. Akshara was surprised. How did Naitik know about the buses? He had a big car…why will he bother about the buses? "I know….par actually…" Akshara didn't know exactly what to say.

"Main tumhe drop kar du?" Akshara wanted to say no at first….then decided to ask if she could call from his mobile and then finally decided to go with him…. "Ok…"

Naitik called his driver from his cell and after a few minutes a black BMW pulled up. Naitik opened the car door for Akshara….Akshara didn't know many guys who would open car doors for you…or maybe her entire perception about guys were wrong….Shaurya and then Naitik….everyone proved her wrong…..she sat down on the car.

"Tum rehti kaha ho?"

Akshara told the driver her address. They passed the way in awkward silence when suddenly the car broke down. The driver went to check it. By now the rain had stopped a little. "Yeh car bhi na…" Naitik said in an irritated voice. "Sorry Akshara….I hope tum zyada late nahi ho jaogi…"

"Main already late hoon…" Akshara said with a slight smile. "Par it's ok ..."

Naitik smiled back. "Vaise…aj tum bus ka wait kyun kar rahi thi….tum to hamesha Varsha ke saath jati ho na." Akshara was shocked. Did Naitik notice her?? "Ha woh…Varsha ko aj ghar jaldi jana tha…isiliye…"

"Oh..."

Just then, the driver came in. "Sir…wo thoda engine main problem tha….ab thik hai…" The driver started the car again. They reached Akshara's place. "Thank you so much Naitik…."

"Anytime Akshara….um….see you tomorrow…"

"Yeah….bye…and thanks again."

Naitik smiled and the car drove away….Akshara stood by the door till the car completely disappeared and passed a small smile to herself before entering her house.

*****
To all my other readers who have commented...thank you so much!!! Smile Since this is my first ff and also because i don't think i am really good in them...your comments were really appreciated!!

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